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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT!!!!!!!!111 ***spelling/wording*** Walking over to the bed, she removed the dress from the ***bad*** (bag) and removed the tags. Lucky he *had to time for* (had time for/had time to have) another shower, before getting dressed and heading to the restaurant.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that things went well with inuyasha, kouga & kikyo's meeting... now if they would just include kagome then things would be just great... wonder what the reactions will be though... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the meeting between Kouga and Inuyasha went very well. There wasn't the usual posturing and silliness that usually accompanies their meetings. I liked how Kouga picked up on Kagome's scent so quickly and still wanted to defend her, even though she isn't his chosen. I am looking forward to the discussion with Sango that each girl is going to have and the round table that may occur if Inuyasha doesn't take Kagome to his place after dinner. I have a feeling that Sango is going to be looking for a new roommate soon. I am looking forward to the next installment of this story.
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 07:20 CDT
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this is great. you have a awesome plot line and you are a great writer. i wish i could come up with unique plot line. please update soon can't wait to see what happens
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Reviewed By: Angelbaby 42 On: March 29, 2008 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! This is such a good story! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASEEEEE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 16:30 CDT
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AHH! The anticipation is killing me! I love every chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome story its very good
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 15:01 CDT
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hm....I think Sango and Miroku should just stay supportive. Of course, I usually get off track easily, which is why I try to stick to one relationship. Plus the whole Kouga/Kikyou thing I definitely want to see more of that, suck an interesting pairing
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you are setting up the confrontation between Kikyou and Inuyasha. Not that I see much confrontation because they both want this to end because they both met their true mates. It should be interesting if Kikyou, Kouga, Inuyasha and Kagome all meet at the ceremony weekend. I hope nothing bad happens because the youki's think that the other is there for their mate. I wonder when Inuyasha will find out about Kagome and Kouga's past relationship. It is going to be an interesting ride with this story. I am looking forward to the next installment.
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 06:18 CDT
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this is great i really like it. I can't wait to see what happens when they meet so please update soon
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 05:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kouga and kikyo are accepting the situation... now if only inuyasha & kagome can too... it seems that the end of chapter 8 came before the end of chapter 7 since kagome was already awake and freshening up... and the end of chapter 8 inuyasha was still watching kagome resting... hope inuyasha brings kagome with him when he meets up with kikyo & kouga at the cafe... wonder what the reactions will be... update soon... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: ehu On: March 28, 2008 18:50 CDT
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i like your take on the "spring fever" idea, very creative. i also like the little tidbits on demon relations (i.e. the eyes change color). kagome is protrayed rather well. i expected her to be a little more whinny and more nurturing, but it was a pleasant change. kikyo is VERY decent in this story, not a hint of jealousy, will that change? even though i do like the now "nice kikyo" image, i still feel that she would have problems giving up inuyasha. also it might be an interesting change for the story as well as allowing the characters to be more dynamic. inuyasha seems a little more mature than usual (thank god!) although i still am waiting for him to stick his foot in his mouth. seeing his apparant flaws do allow the story to grow more, allowing his interaction with kagome to be more realistic. and thank god kouga is decent! even though i like the characters to be as close as possible to the original personalities, i hated kouga, so irritating!!! the story line so far is entertaining. i see a lull might be coming up after the spring fever marking ritual. will the story progress after that event?
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 15:40 CDT
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this is great i really like it. You have a great plot line so please update soon Can't wait.
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Reviewed By: iluvGeeWay4lif [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 15:31 CDT
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LOVE ITLOVE ITLOVE ITLOVE ITLOVE ITLOVE ITLOVE ITLOVE ITLOVE ITLOVE ITLOVE ITLOVE IThehe update soon =D
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so kiddy with excitment. I'm really looking forward to your future updates. I can tell they are most certainly going to be good! I loved this chapter so much! Update soon!
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