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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 14:10 CDT
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*squee* So good ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: inubaka27 On: March 28, 2008 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg omg cliff-hanger on chapter 7 that something everyone hate to be left on ^_^. Keep going as your are cause you are doing a great job!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 04:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
`I've never felt this way around someone before. It feels like something between going on my first date and reading Playgirl.' Some one (Kagome) thinks they are a naughty girl...
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 01:51 CDT
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I'm curious is there a reason why in ch.7 Kouga was in first person POV not third? I ask simply because in previous chapters he was in third. Hmmm both couples are going out for lunch... can't help but wonder if they might end up in the same place or bumping into each other.
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 00:50 CDT
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I like this story. I'm an avid hentai/lemon reader too, lol.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how this story is progressing and I really like how you are not making Kouga and Kikyou into absolute villains. They are good people who just chose the wrong person to try to be involved with. This is the first Kouga/Kikyou pairing I remember seeing but that it makes this more original. It even makes sense that the guys chose the wrong girls since the girls look so much alike that it seems that the guys were picking physical attributes that attracted them but didn't get it quite right. And I love how Sango and Miroku have met and first impressions on that meeting. I am definitely looking forward to the rest of this story.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... would be nice to see how the two couples act around each other... inuyasha & kagome spending the day together... and kouga & kikyo having their lunch date... what other reactions will occur... update soon... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: bk On: March 27, 2008 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story today and I want to tell you it is fantastic. You are a wonderful writer and I cannot wait for your next update. Thanks
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 00:02 CDT
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Yay! So good, waiting for the next update ^^
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Reviewed By: iluvGeeWay4lif [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 21:40 CDT
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WOOOOO BEST FF EVER!!!! O YEA!! CANT GET ENOUGH OF IT!!! U MUST UPDATE!!! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! O YEA INU MEETS KAGS!! wonder wats gonna happen next lol pardon my hyperness i just had like 6 pixi sticks =D
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hokay. So. Wow you update fast. I recently started reading your story yesterday and I check my email to find you have updated twice. (Sorry I didn't review then, I had something I had to do.) That is very fast. XD I have to say that this is the most original story of this nature that I have ever come across. And I am extremely glad for how well it is written along with the lack of grammar and spelling mistakes. I find it hard to find a fic that isn't riddled with far too many errors. I just have to say that, normally I am not much of a fan for the Kikyou/Kouga pairings but for this fic it just seems more natural and the obvious choice. I like it. Overall I enjoyed each and every chapter and look foward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 15:02 CDT
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this is great i really like it please update soon i can't wait to find out what happens this is a great story and you are a great writer
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Reviewed By: inubaka27 On: March 26, 2008 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg I just wanted to say that I loveeee your story. The way that you put your story is really interesting to fallow and I really can't wait for the next chapter. Please keep it up because I really can't see that story unfinished.
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 12:36 CDT
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*smirk* you need us to review just to keep you on track? Well then by all means I must review. I have to agree with Inu Hanyou Nikkie, it is nice to see that all the characters are reacting in a natural way rather than the very flat, one-dimensional, overly stereotyped versions that we find in many other fics. I really like that Kouga is not a testosterone driven Neanderthal, as he is so often portrayed, since I have always had a soft spot for him since he reminds me so much of Ryoga Hibiki, that being said I am sooooo glad he is not going to end up with Kagome, since I am a firm inu/kag believer. I also want to say that I REALLY like how fast you are with updates, but knowing my luck I probably just cursed you and now won't see anything else for months. *sigh* Anyway, I look forward to future installments, and a little part of me halfway expects Inuyasha to be driving to the Spring Festival, while he waits for Kagome to wake up, since I always think of Inu's demon-side as being very impulse driven.
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Reviewed By: fudge On: March 26, 2008 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
finally they found each other. I actually thought that they were going to meet when kagome was working! either way it's really good and i hope you update really soon to see how everything works out!!!!
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