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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 12:36 CDT
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*smirk* you need us to review just to keep you on track? Well then by all means I must review. I have to agree with Inu Hanyou Nikkie, it is nice to see that all the characters are reacting in a natural way rather than the very flat, one-dimensional, overly stereotyped versions that we find in many other fics. I really like that Kouga is not a testosterone driven Neanderthal, as he is so often portrayed, since I have always had a soft spot for him since he reminds me so much of Ryoga Hibiki, that being said I am sooooo glad he is not going to end up with Kagome, since I am a firm inu/kag believer. I also want to say that I REALLY like how fast you are with updates, but knowing my luck I probably just cursed you and now won't see anything else for months. *sigh* Anyway, I look forward to future installments, and a little part of me halfway expects Inuyasha to be driving to the Spring Festival, while he waits for Kagome to wake up, since I always think of Inu's demon-side as being very impulse driven.
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Reviewed By: fudge On: March 26, 2008 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
finally they found each other. I actually thought that they were going to meet when kagome was working! either way it's really good and i hope you update really soon to see how everything works out!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 05:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh dear..... I think I'm gonna like where this is going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... finally inuyasha & kagome meet... like how everything is falling into place... it is nicer if they all stayed friends and not fighting... will they all be couples by the time the spring festival comes... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Cianna27889 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 00:22 CDT
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I KNEW I STAYED UP LATE TONIGHT FOR A REASON! Loving this! They finally meet! I really am wondering what your Spring Festival is going to be like. Yeaaahhh! Will check in with you later today... C.
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Title: You Go Girl!
Reviewed By: Cianna27889 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 22:20 CDT
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So happy to see another chapter up tonight! You really have me hooked. I can actually see these situations happening, just like a normal life! Cheering you on! CiAnna
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Title: I bow to you!
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie (Not Signed In) On: March 25, 2008 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh Lord in heaven!! An answer to prayers! THANK YOU!! I can't say it enough!! BRAVO!! You have written a story that is so angsty, touching, realistic and heartaching but not with having Kikyou: being the Queen of Bitches, Emotionless Sluts. Inuyasha: the King of Cheating, Stupid, Illiterate, Betraying Bastards. Kagome: the Queen of Whinny, Selfish Spineless Doormats. Or Kouga: the King of Men Who Think NO Means Yes I Want You to Have Sex/ManHandle with Me and I Will Beat You Up for Being Different and Protecting/Taking my Trohpy Away . Each character is decent and respectable! Stuck in very realistic scenarios and each unhappy but deseperate to make the relationship work or by trying to tell the other they want out but like how many every day people can do - make mistakes with this. ie/lack of communication. I'm thrilled by the story so far and I am happily reading it! What a Huge breath of FRESH air in the fandom world!! The misspelt words are easily fixed. I haven't come across a Kikyou/Kouga pairing either and that is very refreshing!! I thank you fo this as well!! I am cheering that you have led the way to a new pairing concept! Usually it's a lake of Kouga/Kagome pairings and I lament that people can't see to pair him with someone else. (yes.. I'm a die-hard, stubborn, mulish shipper of Inu/Kag). I am intrigued that Kikyou is in the apratment with Kagome there and she has missed the conversation. I wonder what will happen when the two scent the other on their current girlfriends. I am hoping they will turn out to be good friends after this. I can't wait for them to all meet! The tension is wonderful! The use of the eye colours for finding their soul mates is a brillant touch and very orginal! I am looking forward to reading more! Please keep up this wonderful work!! and Hope to see more from you!
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 21:10 CDT
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Well hells, you've got me rather baited. This isn't a new concept, but you're putting an interesting angle on it that I don't think I've ever seen done this way. Nice. :) Hope you continue and it's looking decent grammatically and structure wise. You can carry on a situation and the 'jumps' aren't glaring escape plans. Hope to see more! :D
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Reviewed By: Cianna27889 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Original, and interesting. I am enjoying very much. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 04:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... when will inuyasha & kagome meet... hope that everyone will just be honest with their feelings... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: March 24, 2008 22:57 CDT
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Damn I wanted some Inu/Kag action. I want them to meet up. This is a pretty cool story.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
***spelling/miss types*** "Do not look at me like that half ***bread***", Sesshomaru stated in his calm tone calmly walking over to the leather couch in InuYasha's office, making himself comfortable. Sesshomaru caught his brother's eyes and leaned down to place a gentle kiss on Rin's forehead. "Rin, I believe you have sufficiently shocked the half ***bread*** into a silence we can only hope will last. Allow, this Sesshomaru to speak with him a few moments before we leave. Merle is just outside for you to make our arrangements with." Kouga wondered what Kikyo was up to, she didn't usually interrupt their conversations. He hoped the mutt didn't walk in and cause her any trouble. Picking up his container of egg ***foo*** young, he leaned back in his chair. Kikyo was actually quite enjoyable to talk to, more so than Kagome as of late. However, Kouga pushed that to the back of his mind and shifted to get more comfortable in his chair, keyboard in his lap. -Its weird seeing InuYasha being call a half a loaf of bread.... lol Other wise this is the GREATEST!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So good! Very interesting to see a Kouga/Kikyou pairing, but you write it so well ^^ Waiting for the next update, hope to see it soon!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... looking forward to the coming chapters... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: reldysha On: March 24, 2008 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF!!! that is so intense!!! if u dont finish i will come find u. lol so stalkerish!!! but omg u have to finish.
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