| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Title: Very Sinful
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: January 19, 2009 18:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had a lot to catch up on. Thank you for keepin the chapters coming. Moving Bulma over to the dark side is taking your fic to yet another level. Please continue and send those truffles my way.
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 18:41 EST
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omg i can't wait for the new chapter. @.@
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Reviewed By: aliccolo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 08:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Great work, as usual!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 12:19 EST
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Oh my god! I didn't even think about that. It was so unexpected to me. You did a really good job with this chapter. I love it. Thank you so much for the update. This is just what I needed before I started back my classes.
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 23:17 EST
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Yay another chapter. To be completely honest I prefer A/U over the classic three years. The 'three years' arc is good an all but it's almost always the same. The only difference is execution. Your story so far is a great turn from the 'three years' so I'm actually really glad you decided to go with it. It's good to see the remaining spark between the two. Vegeta's jealousy concerning Bulma was great. As was Bulma's thoughts on the 'too young(?) girl that was hitting on him. Also the look into Vegeta's mind considering his dreams for their future was completely surprising, though well done. Maybe his feelings for Bulma are deeper than she thinks. Can't wait 'til next time.
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Title: yes!!!!
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 03:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
vegeta is doing it. he's slowly binding her to him and vice versa. i love it love it love it love it!
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Reviewed By: Sarah Slutz On: January 02, 2009 20:59 EST
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Damn woman... you keep getting better and better. Whooo,*wipes brow*... steamy. Soooo enjoying this.
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Reviewed By: Helena Mariel On: December 21, 2008 22:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, well this is an unexpected turn of events! I cannot wait to see what else is in store for "poor" Bulma... although, I have to admit, I hope they both stop being so damn hard-headed. :/
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Reviewed By: Helena Mariel On: December 21, 2008 19:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, dear. This is turning out to be quite a steamy number... I expected their relationship to physical at first, but the emotional detachment is something I pretended didn't exist whenever I thought about their relationship. Of course, Vegeta is not an emotional man, but I cannot wait to see hints of waff here and there. :) Marvelous writing, as always.
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Reviewed By: Helena Mariel On: December 21, 2008 18:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is quite an amazing introduction to what I sense will be an amazing story. I've always mourned the fact we never got to see Vegeta's and Bulma's relationship develop, so I find comfort in those fanfictions where it's narrated. I will continue reading. :)
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 12:05 EST
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Nice to see the tension remains on both sides despite Vegeta's vow not to touch her 'til she submitted her want for him. Vegeta can tease her all he wants, but it's obvious that he wants her to willing want him more than he lets on. Can't wait for more of that. I'm sure your wonderful writing style will make for an interesting look into Vegeta's past. I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Louise85 On: December 19, 2008 19:16 EST
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I love this story! You have such an original take on the whole Bulma & Vegeta get together scenario, and I'm just loving it. I also can't wait to learn more about Vegeta's brother. So please, take your time if you have to, I just hope you'll never stop writing these beautiful stories :)
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Reviewed By: ruthless culprit On: December 19, 2008 00:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lord jesus christ. thanks for this xmas present. what a chapter. i swear i could picture her looking at stars and cool constellations. and that whole line of his saying the vehicle belongs to me was like a "i told you i am royal and earth is shit compared to what i can show you" my god. and that scene in the elevator. i could die now happy but no not yet. i cant wait for taburu's persona and conflict in this plot. happy holidays.
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Reviewed By: Sarah Soler On: December 08, 2008 22:00 EST
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I love where this is going... *sighs*, these ARE Bulma and Vegita. You're completely in tune with them. Awesome job. This story is written like a novel, with such usage of language. Love it!
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2008 00:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you better apologize!!!! just kidding LOL. love the new addition. i think bulma is coming around. im just fascinated with the way vegeta is gonna make her come out of her bubble and see what's outside and have her realize that really she needs to get off the pedestal and live as a human with instinct and not with pretentious duty.
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