| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 19:42 PST
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I do not diss Bulma at all. I thought she was doing really well to hold it out this long before she went crazy so to speak. I'm glad that you did finally update and it was a great one even if it wasn't as long as they usually are. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Princess Buruma [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 15:48 PST
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Yay, finally a new chapter! I wanted to know how the space travel would come out, and now I can't wait for the next part ^^
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Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: December 06, 2008 16:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the line about him pinning her like a butterfly. It's a very beautiful visual metaphor. Also now Bulma will see how things are on Vegeta's terms. You continue to make these two very 'human'. I really enjoyed this chapter.
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Title: anxious
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 13:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I keep signing on hoping for an update. Please update. Type faster LOL jk.
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Reviewed By: il trovatore On: November 11, 2008 00:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bella! bella! bella!
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Title: awesomeness
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: November 10, 2008 10:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this chapter. I think it's great you explored how her relationship with Vegeta has effected her life at Capsule and her responsibilities. I am ALSO happy he's taking her with him into SPACE. I really look FORWARD to seeing how this story will go, and I am glad you are writing what YOU want to write. I will continue to read this excellent story!
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Reviewed By: Kyrene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 16:00 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The absolute last thing on my mind was "here we go again". This story is so unique in the writing and just the way it's done altogether that cliche is really the last thing on my mind. I really can't wait for the next chapter. I am so incredibly excited for those two to be alone in space. And this chapter made me all the more excited...The way you describe Vegeta is just beyond words. Actually, same for Bulma. Both are at the top of their characters with how you describe them. (After saying all that, I do feel a twinge of poor Yamucha...) Oh, also, even so with all this hotness and such, I have to say that my favorite part was probably Mr. Brief's having more interest in the food then in his daughter making out with the mass-murderer alien house-guest in front of his company. That had me giggling for a little while. Now I'm done. Keep Going!!
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Reviewed By: On: November 09, 2008 15:26 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A fantastic chapter. Do keep up the intricate plotline to their characters. We don't need to see a mushy Vegeta/Bulma. That's what I admire of this piece. They're very much in character.
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Title: le fucking mer!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 15:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my god what more perfect scenario than a dinner to show the perfection of Bulma and the decadence of Vegeta walking amidst the crowd to lewdly kiss her in front of propriety clichés??? and her reaction was soooo realistic. the whole chapter was unbelievable. i think her mom talking about her 6th sense helped her realize that he's it since after all he came after 3 wks of hiding to say goodbye and then you have her running after him. i love it. i love it. i love you.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 12:14 PST
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Who cares how many times the whole outerspace thing has happened? It never happened like this before and I am caught into this almost as bad as Bulma. I love this new chapter. I was too funny. The "Goodbye" had be almost crying in my seat, especially when the other girl wanted one too. LOL Great job with this. Look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 07:04 PST
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Ooh, dark. Don't worry about the scenario being overdone. I absolutely love those stories and, when done well, can be even more exciting than the plausible "canon" time line. Not to mention that any closure from given to us from the predictable storyline would have been to rushed, not befitting of our two beloved characters at all. How Bulma deals with her feelings and how Vegeta goes about making her accept them will be worth the wait. I can't wait 'til next time.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: November 08, 2008 18:44 PST
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apologies if you thought the review sounded like a put-down.
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Title: Giddy
Reviewed By: Iceis [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 18:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love it love it love it!!! I was so into when she spotted Vegeta in the back of the room!!! I love where this is going. I've tried the Vegeta in space with Bulma before its difficult for me, but I can not WAIT to see how you do it!!! My favorite paragraph you have in this chapter has to be when Bulma is explaining how she is in tune with Vegeta's like and dislikes. Something about Vegeta listening in on Bulma's music while polishing his boot struck a cord with me. I could just see the scene so easily.
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Title: Spectacular
Reviewed By: Princess Buruma [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 17:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hadn't read such a long fic since last year, and I'm very happy I found this one. Let me tell you this is one beautiful piece of art. I enjoyed every moment, I laughed, I suffered, I went through many different emotions so far, and the best part is it doesn't even have an end yet! I can't imagine how good it will be once the story is complete. The more I read, the less I wanted to get to the last updated chapter, because I knew I would then have to wait for the next one. I can only thank you now for sharing such poetry, and congratulate you for your brilliant work. I'll be looking forward to the next "Step". Wish you the best, and keep it up! =)
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Title: Wow.... O_O
Reviewed By: izzieLaLa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 03:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...My...God.I was absolutely blown away by this chapter. This was such an emotional chapter for me to read. I've always admired Bulma for the main reason that she somewhat embodies the type of person I've always strived to be. But in every chapter...especially this one, you've slowly delved deeper and deeper into the psyche of not only Vegeta, but also Bulma as well. With every chapter I've read I've found myself finding more and more similarites between myself and Bulma, in both her fears, shortcomings, and her constant defiance to everything, to be strong and not let anyone else take her down and win. I've lived quite a pampered little life myself and reading the horrors of Vegetas mind just as Bulma had witnessed them, I felt like I was coming to terms with my own sheltered life, as she had realised the true reality of what vegeta had been. I couldn't stand him just leaving her like that, as well as her going to the life that everyone had planned for her despite her desire for a life of adventure (i know the feeling all too well). And when Yamcha (HATE HIM) came back into the picture that just fricken about killed me. God my ex bf was a yamcha and he almost ruined my life...long story short, everything about this chapter was amazing in the fluent and vivid language and use of imagery... it was the sheer essence of perfection (i know i still sound like i'm over exaggerating xD) but all and all I'm so excited to see how you bring the two of them back together i can barely stand it! and I'm still pondering over how Bulma has managed to not get preggers with lil trunks yet with the amount of hanky panky they've been doing xD LMAO P.S. Thank you so much for your reply in the A/N!! After lots of treatment my eyes have finally healed and things are finally starting to look up for me a bit ^-^ I thank you so much for the positive vibes lol i guess they really helped! much
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