| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Reviewed By: LolaV On: August 28, 2009 22:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is fantastic, just fantastic. Was so excited to see the update. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Xaverri On: August 26, 2009 06:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, an update! Very good chapter, the only things that were nagging me were this: Weren't she wearing his necklace on her wrist? (To stop it from jingling in the bag) and shouldn't he also recognize the dagger she used to cut him free? Not that it should bring back his memory, but it should atleast show him that she is in a way familiar to him. Or maybe use his paranoia to make him suspiscious of it. But all in all, excellent continuation. I love Vegeta's feral side, and you portray him very well in this state! You left us once again with a cliffhanger: The bracers being unchanged "for the untrained eye". Will this mean they're off when he wakes up or not...? ARGH! You better update soon and put me out of my misery :D Love, Xaverri
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2009 00:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so scared for a moment thinking he would rape her but u managed to make vegeta act like himself at the core regardless of the amnesia. I can't wait for the next chapter. I literally screamed with glee when I saw my update email =)
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2009 23:29 EDT
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Oh! That wasn't what I was expecting. The softie side of me wanted that kiss to mean something akin to reconciliation rather than retribution. And Bulma not being able to crack those cuffs? Bummer... I thought that him falling asleep on her lap was sweet. :3 I'm definitely looking forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: KurisutiKamae On: August 25, 2009 21:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again a stellar chapter. Plz update soon. I'm just dying to know what happens and can't wait till they break the abstinence but in a meaningful and special yet dark way.
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Reviewed By: Arumuelle1 On: July 26, 2009 08:55 EDT
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! DIOSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS... OK...OK...Ok... Estoy seriamente tratando de recuperar la respiracion aqui, teniendo en cuenta que practicamente se me cerro la garganta mientras leia los ultimos parrafos. DIOS DIOS DIOSSSSS, PROXIMO CAPITULO, PROXIMO CAPITULOOOO!!! Ehem. Disculpa que llegue tan tarde xD, pero no me habia dado cuenta de que habias puesto otro cap por que ando de viaje! Pero Dios, siento que estoy sufriendo una taquicardia de la alegriaaa! ARGHHHH. Vaya, seriamente necesito algo de autro control xD
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Reviewed By: Xaverri On: July 24, 2009 06:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are right up there with my favorite B/V writers; TemptingTemptation and Amber! This is the first fic that truly believably discribes Vegeta how he used to be, and how he's struggling with that now. With every last chapter I read, the world that Bulma is in seems more and more alien, instead of the other way around. You make us understand him, and how alien her world is to him. Chikyuu really does seem like a paradise after all this :) I hope you update soon, but take your time because I'd much rather have you keep up this quality than finish it off quickly! Goodluck and thank you for brightening up my days.
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Reviewed By: Malou On: July 23, 2009 07:23 EDT
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Thank God you updated this fic :) I was afraid you had abandoned this great story. Once again, this chapter doesn't disappoint one bit, and I don't know how you do it. This chapter was great. Digging into Vegeta's past and Bulma standing up for her man (and even killing for him!), it was just a great read. And that ending... WOW is all I can say. "Perhaps a kiss was worth a thousand deaths." Wow. Well done :)
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2009 03:12 EDT
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That ending was wonderful! I really enjoyed the rest of the chapter leading up to it. It was so eventful and very well thought out with the details. I look forward to more and don't worry about the long wait. I forgive you!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: tiffy On: July 17, 2009 20:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING chapter! I absolutely loved it! I love Bulmas sensual dance! I cant wait 4 more!!!
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Title: jesus christ
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 18:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well worth the wait and fuck what a kiss. I can almost taste it.
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Title: fuck!
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 20:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
New chapter already.
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Title: Pure Greatness
Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: June 07, 2009 21:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I am overjoyed at the turn you are taking us through but you haven't updated in a really long time. Come on Caprice and satisfy your loyal fans. We need to know how Bulma and Vegeta will overcome Hell and Zarbon. You started this a year ago and you have got to keep this going or we, your hungry fans will feel as though we have been hit with a ki gun and shrivel up and DIE!!!! You have a responsibility to continue your creativity and post more chapters. Don't let us fall victim to the ki gun....PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE...We love you and your work too much!!! I know you got the chapter you are just perfecting it. Give it to me...I can take it. I'm pleading please I need a Saiyan fix only you can supply. Hook us up Almighty, Great, Young Wise One. Thank you in advance...SMOOCHES:)
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 17:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update! Its been over a month!
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Title: sigh
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 13:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here I got on thinking u added a chapter. Sigh. Please update =]
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