| "How to Make Love to a Saiyan" Reviews/Comments [ 263 ] |
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 21:28 EDT
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Great chapter!
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Title: Chap. 23
Reviewed By: Unholy_Rage On: April 28, 2009 10:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this was truly an unexpected twist. I'm loving the unpredictable nature of this story, I can't stress than enough. Keep up the good work!
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Title: m&ms.
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 15:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im in awe at how you write. How the characters naturally progress and develop in the story. I have been in love with Vegeta since I saw him on tv. And every time I re-read this fanfic I fall in love with that man all over and I love it how Bulma is always there. This last chapter was superb. The feelings are on the table. Its not lust. Its the heart now and Vegeta is gambling all. Fuck! I fucking love you.
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Title: chapter 23
Reviewed By: catgirl26 (not signed in) On: April 27, 2009 00:37 EDT
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Very interesting twist, bringing zarbon into the picture. I liked it, and I'm very excited to see what Bulma does. I have a feeling she's going with, and I'm hoping that maybe she'll have a bit of a role in freeing Vegeta. Good chapter, as always, and I am patiently awaiting the next one.
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 16:46 EDT
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Wow, plot twist. It's a very interesting direction you're taking this story in but it works. I loved how you had Vegeta admit (to himself) that he wanted to be her man more than her master. That was an amazing line. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: KurisutiKamae On: April 18, 2009 14:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh migod, I think I'm going to have a heartattack. You absolutely have to update soon. Plz hurry this is an insane cliffhanger.
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Reviewed By: keleos On: April 17, 2009 18:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
asdfghjkl OMG! WHAT HAPPENED??? asdfghjkl SO FREAKING INTENSE, IT LEFT ME SPEECHLESS!! GREAT JOB, I'm really looking forward to more!!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 23:23 EDT
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No! This can't be happening! It can't even go down like this! Why Vegeta?! Why?! This chapter has gotten me so anixous for the next one. Great job.
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Reviewed By: Malou On: April 16, 2009 09:07 EDT
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oh my gosh. This fic is great, and honestly, it keeps on getting better and better every chapter! Please don't keep us waiting too long ;) Also, I wanted to thank you for recommending "And Then You Kissed Me" by The Cardigans a while back. I love that song! (Part 2 is also really great)
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 18:19 EDT
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Drama drama drama, and just when they were starting to connect a little right there. I love the personal effects they have on each other. Vegeta's still trying to force his feelings into his lust but it's obvious that he's starting to realize how much she effects him. Such an evil cliffy, I love it. Can't wait 'til you continue.
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Reviewed By: Little Saiyajin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2009 14:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Squee* More! I need more!
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Title: Lamb and the Wolf
Reviewed By: Tempy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2009 13:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Talk about leaving you on the edge. That was phenomenal. I love all the mention of old classic movies, as well as the wolf and lamb reference. The idea of Vegeta no Ou frightens me, because it smells like trouble. The end of the chapter couldn't have been more perfect. Vegeta's words made my eyes widen and my heart drop. I'm totally antsy about the next chapter. I am completely enamored with your work, and it just keeps improving. This chapter put knots in my stomach that won't be let loose until the next one. I look forward to it. =D
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Title: Chapter 22, cliffhanger of doom!
Reviewed By: Unholy_Rage On: April 13, 2009 09:20 EDT
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Argh cliffhanger! Damn I'm REALLY REALLY anxious to know what happens next in this glorious adventure you've spun for us. And ooo, Vegeta no Ou!!! :D
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Reviewed By: Sarah Slutz On: April 13, 2009 05:11 EDT
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OMG no way, whats going to happen now? I doubt Bulma is going to desert him that easily. Holy smack. You keep getting better.
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Title: chapter 22
Reviewed By: catgirl26 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 22:39 EDT
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Wow, that was not expected, and adds a new, interesting twist to your story. I'm wondering though, if Bulma will actually go. She has a nasty little habit of not doing what she's told. :D I'm also really interested to see what Baba has up her sleeve. Her meddling is driving me nuts! I actually want to grab her and Enma and shake them until they see the love. (Whether seeing that love is simply a result of brain damage by shaking does not matter.) Eagerly awaiting your next installment.
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