| "You Are MINE!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 72 ] |
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Reviewed By: IC On: September 20, 2008 17:55 EDT
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I liked this chappie it was different. Like a threesome with 2 ppl.
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Reviewed By: You don't need to know On: September 18, 2008 16:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
what? ehh well that was kinda unexpected.... but not bad just unexpected and a bit weird
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 07:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a very interesting point you have added.. I think this is the first time I have read ANY InuYasha story like this!
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 06:17 EDT
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I'm rather pleased that I guessed right way back on the first chapter, and I stand by my first post, it is very rare for a herm to be fully functional in both areas. But hey that what makes for good storytelling. Although I must admit I was surprised that she had balls... I had sorta assumed that she'd have undescended testies or some such. I'm also impressed that she somehow is able to stuff everything into a skimpy thong, without anything hanging out or creating a noticeable package.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasharoks528 On: September 17, 2008 02:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an amazing chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next!!! It's getting so hot! Please update as soon as possible! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 20:33 EDT
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DUDE! i actually thought of that before the secret was actually out! at the part when inu was taking off her panty and kagome was terrified, i was like, so the secret is hidden behind her panty..(ok dat sounded really wrong xD) and i actually thought of kagome having two of the sex organs! xD ....tho it wasnt a turn off surprisingly. o.O guess cuz its Kagome and Inuyasha xD pretty biased... anyways, update soon! cant wait to read the next chappie ;D Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 19:17 EDT
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i knew she was either a hermaphrodite or a zerophiliac. can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 19:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn...you went there, LOL. I mean, I kinda had an idea as to what Kagome's 'secret' was gonna be (when I read the part about Inu's lessons I figured she would either turn out to be a man on hormones or something, or bdsm obsessed)...but when I actually read it I did NOT expect THAT kind of twist. You completely blew me away, Nik. Nice job! Now I'll be looking out for another update on this fic. Till next chap! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: IC On: September 05, 2008 21:52 EDT
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Hurry and update plz.
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Reviewed By: chrissy_kool On: August 25, 2008 19:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a fun read and ur a great write. it so hottt. i love it plz update
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2008 13:35 EDT
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that was soo hot!! great job update soon!
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Reviewed By: vampirebride kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 14:38 EDT
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Nice just reading makes me shake and hot update soon
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Reviewed By: adeaneri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 01:48 EDT
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UMMMM YUMMY. CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 16:38 EDT
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this is great update soon
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 16:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was soo wet reading this.very hot. loved the breast sex and the blow job . very erotic . I love that inuyasha is being dominatin very .very enticing can't help but love it.
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