| "You Are MINE!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 72 ] |
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 18:17 EDT
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HOORAY YOU UPDATED!!! YOU DIDN'T DISAPPOINT! PLEASE DO UPDATE SOONER THAN LATER
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Title: Panting......
Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 17:44 EDT
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oh poor Kagome!!!! hopefully she will get over the shock and realize that he's not like Kouga, he was just so damn tired of waiting!!! That was just hot, and the fact that she calmed enough to pay attention to his instructions leaves me hoping that she will actually enjoy his "attentions" before long....if not I'd gladly step in to become his sex-slave.....great work! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Michael22 On: July 06, 2008 16:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: TheiasDream [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 02:44 EDT
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WOW!! Intense. I am really enjoying this story, and am looking forward to it's continuation.
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Reviewed By: iluvGeeWay4lif [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 15:28 EDT
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omfg ur an evil monkey!! >.< must read more!! AGGA! update soon pwees!!
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 11:49 EDT
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so hot...please! i need more!!! and gods am I jealous of our sweet kagome now!! update soon! lovies EV
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Reviewed By: IC On: June 29, 2008 00:32 EDT
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This is so evil update soon the cliffy is killing me.
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 20:44 EDT
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Anyone ever tell you you're a tease? 'Cuz that was just cruel. You're as bad as Kagome strutting around in her little red satin thong. Although I'm not entirely convinced that she knows what she is doing when she does all those things that get Inu all hot and bothered… you on the other hand knew exactly what you were doing by leaving us all hanging. Hehe, can't be too mad at you for it since it is a delicious kind of torture. Anyway it occurs to me that since Inuyasha is an art teacher he once had aspirations of being a famous artist himself. I sort of picture him as the sculptor type, preferring the additive method to the subtractive... probably would have made several bronze sculptures. I also picture him having tons of sketches of Kagome all over his home.
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 15:23 EDT
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the only reason that i can think of that inu needs to learn how to pleasure guys, is that kagome's secret is she's either a hermaphrodite or a zerophiliac
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Title: Holy Hottness!!!
Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 01:08 EDT
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That is a very cruel way to end the second part...all worked up and nowhere to...well, I'll leave that alone for now! lol This is an incredibly hot fic and I can't wait for the culmination of all his various fantasies! I have a feeling I know what Kagome's "dirty little secret" is, but I'll wait before commenting further on it....I can't wait for the next installment of this fic! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 22:29 EDT
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this is great i really like it please update soon
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Sour On: June 26, 2008 21:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this!! I say you continue with it as soon as possible! Much love doll!!
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 21:06 EDT
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EAGERLY WAITING....
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Reviewed By: vampirebride kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 21:02 EDT
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AHHHHHHHHH come on you didnt just leave me hagging!!!!!!!!! OH im so mad but ill get over it just more your good!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 20:29 EDT
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omg, thought this would be the chapter that'd complete the whole thing. anyways, great story. cant wait to read the actual lemon!!! (^^)
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