| "You Are MINE!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 72 ] |
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Reviewed By: vampirebride kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 17:21 EDT
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please make a sequal or something cause that is just to hot to stop there
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 03:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: vampirebride kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 21:16 EDT
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WOW!!!!! is there going to be more chapters cause its too hot to leave it off there
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Reviewed By: Nick F. On: June 24, 2008 11:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was so unbearably hot hot hot! Love the sexy domineering Inuyasha...love how you describe him as sex on two legs, too. Can't wait to see how he plans to take Kagome's virginity and become her master. Can't wait to know Kagme's "secret," too. Although...if it has anything to do with Inuyasha needing to know how to please men.... Well, yeah, update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Mei Wyn On: June 24, 2008 02:17 EDT
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This is great. You should write more. I want to know what happens.
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 23:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why would Inuyasha need to know how to pleasure men? From the context of the story I'm assuming it has to do something with Kagome and her secret but what it is I don't know. Although my perverted mind is going overboard trying to figure it out. A great new story and I can't wait to see more of this smut filled, awesome one-shot. Your friend and fan, Zach
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 22:50 EDT
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*smirks* I can't wait to see if Kagome's dirty little secret is what I think it is. (I don't want to spoil it for others so I'll just point out what tipped me off.) If it is what I think it is, then I'm guessing it was why Inuyasha stormed in to Miroku's office a year and a half earlier, probably shortly after discovering her secret. But I am a little surprised that he can smell when she is fertile, since medically speaking that is very, very rare. Even if I am wrong, I can't wait to see where this goes.
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Reviewed By: IC On: June 23, 2008 22:30 EDT
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Updtae soon that wwas awsome
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: RyuuMahou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 15:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, don'cha just hate it when people don't pay attention to the fact that a story is a one-shot? Anyway, I really enjoyed this, but I would most certainly enjoy knowing what Kagome's deep, dark secret is.
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Reviewed By: REALLY GREAT On: June 23, 2008 15:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got to update this!!! You can't leave us waiting too long!!!
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 15:07 EDT
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WOAH THIS IS AMAZING! REALLY AND TRULY AMAZING PLZZZ CONTINUE
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Reviewed By: Des (not signed in) On: June 23, 2008 13:16 EDT
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Please tell me you are not actually going to leave this as a one shot! With that ending it needs to be a two shot.
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