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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 06:12 CST
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Congratulations Sharibet-your story "In Pursuit of the Green Dragon" has been nominated for Best Crossover at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! wbk
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 11:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! That was the perfect way to end it: set the Elrics up on another adventure and give Souta his happy ending! Brilliant! I enjoyed this story sooooo much! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2008 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! What a sweet ending. I wouldn't have minded the outcome either way but I'm really happy that this wound up being InuYasha and Kagome. And that the Elric brothers finally found their way home! I'm sure theres loads of people they'll want to see there and maybe Alphonse can find someone who returns his feelings like Kagome wished. I'm so glad to have stuck with this till the end and will be looking forward to the epilogue! Congrats on the completion! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2008 04:51 CST
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Awww! Kikyou's farewell was so sad but done beautifully. I wonder what'll happen when they all try going through the well again. Hopefully no one gets stuck! Loved the chapter, as always. :D ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh...seems like everythings wrapping up! But theres still Ed and Al who need to get home, a love triangle to be figured out, and Uncle Souta to save! And I'm wondering if Kikyou really was "just asking". Hmmmmmm...*waggles eyebrows* I can't wait! Great chapter, as always. The part where Ed sympathises with Kohaku was REALLY, really good! And the tatoo, creative. Until next chapter! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet :) Squishy moments between Inu and Kag! But now what does that mean for Alphonse (aside from some more competition, lol)? And will Inu ever find out about their kiss? As for the rest of the chapter...I like how Kikyou and Kohaku are coming into the picture. And how Kohaku feels that he should die. If they ever do wind up completing the jewel I wonder who will come to own it and what the unselfish wish will be. Haha, it seems like Ed doesn't like being left out. It was funny how he kinda assumed the role of InuYasha in this chap (what with his wanting to keep moving along and then demanding that they leave the village first thing in the morning). I wonder how their snake-in-a-box(lulz) trick will work, too. I feel like everything is coming to a head and LOVED that this didn't just end at 'BOOM! Envy's dead, lets go home.' As usual, I can't wait for the next installment to this fic. Glad to see it updated! And how was Japan? ~Amber :D
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 14:47 CDT
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Oh dear heaven, you won't believe this! I've been reading your fic for a while, even pushing my friend Kat Morning towards it, and all the while, I didn't realise it was you! Then, I saw your author's note saying you were in Japan, remembered the mail about you landing in Narita on your mail-list, and blinked at your nickname *laughs* I never thought to check whether it was MY Sharibet who was tinkering around with both my old and new fandoms. :3 If you're interested, when you come back from Japan (with pocky!) I have an all-FMA present for you! I'm still firmly an Inuyasha person, but FMA just has such a wonderful plot that I was sucked in. ^v^ I'm so glad to get an excuse to come annoy you again! *hugsquish* Enjoy your stay in Japan to the full! -- Midi
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Poor uncle Souta! But...this chapter has me curious on a lot. Like the well, Envy, the fate of the brothers.. You are too good, woman! The suspense! I hope you enjoy Japan! I'm sure I'll still be teetering here on the edge of my seat waiting for what is sure to be an interesting next chapter by the time you get back! Till then, lol! :D ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! The chase was really exciting and I'm happy to see that the Inu-tachi and co have finally arrived on the scene! Now let's hope that Uncle Sota didn't just kill them all with that very Roy-esque move he pulled at the end -__- Oh! And I see you got nominated for Best Crossover at the IYFG awards! Congratulations! I'm deff gonna try and second it come the 14th! Great chapter, good luck, and until next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...my...GOD! Best chapter yet! Kagome reaaallly pulled her own in this one and it was cool to see the girl power. Plus, Kouga didn't die! And the inu-gang arrived at the castle! Can't wait till the next chapter! Great job on this one :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I'm reading this and thinking "Yes! An update!" then by the end I'm like "Nooo...Kouga!" Awesome chapter! But I take it this is where the evil-ness begins? And, oddly...I'm looking forward to it ;) Till next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! Some Ed-Inu comic relief, Kouga showing up, and a taste of a little action scene at the end...made for one great chapter! Nice! And Uncle Souta is learning flame alchemy? VERY cool. I love the subtle similarities between him and Roy. It's a lot like whats done in canon between Kag and Kik. Loved the update. Till next chapter ;) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 23:58 CDT
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>=] . . . still think the metal bikini... chains. *shakes head up and down* . . she's back!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, so you aren't making this easy for her. Good thing Kagome's clever. I would've thought her only plans would be made towards escaping, but reclaiming the jewel fragments that Kikyou gave to Naraku is just brilliant. I wonder how Envy'll react when he finds out that Al really isn't dead...AND how Kaggie plans to sneak/fight her way past a bunch of demons, a shapeshifting dragon, climb down a mountain, and return to her friends all in one piece. Again...NOT easy. Not easy at all. Loved the chapter! Till next update ;) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, very cool. Uncle Souta is learning alchemy! Hopefully they're not doing anything that'll mess up the jewel, though. That could cause some problems in the future. Can't wait to see what'll happen when/if Sesshomaru comes into the picture. And Naraku of course. Any chance they'll run into Kouga? Oh! And then theres Kaggie who still needs to be rescued/rescue herself. Loved the chapter! Till next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are so EVIL! I'm sitting at my computer screen despairing over the fact that Inu might die...and then good ol' Uncle Souta comes up with Kagome's jewel shards. I'm guessing those fell off when Envy tore her shirt? Anyway, I'm glad they found an alternative. Now Inu might be able to fully restore his youki and Al will be fit enough to pursue Kagome some more(and kick some Envy ass...or whatever Kaggie leaves of it, lol). I don't see him taking the news of her capture too lightly, though. So the reaction should be pretty interesting. This is really only one of maybe 2 or 3 FMA fanfics I've ever read so I haven't seen much about how he's portrayed but based on the series you definetely have him in character. And I agree..in both the manga and anime he's hinted towards a more stubborn, temperamental side of himself that rivals even Ed's. He just knows how to keep it in check better. At the beginning of the FMA movie too he proved to be a capable alchemist as well and even knows how to transmute parts of his soul into inanimate objects..it'd be pretty cool if he did that here. Loved the chapter! And nice save, though I'm sure there'll be more near-deaths, and as you mentioned, deaths in later chapters that'll have me biting my nails all over again. So evil...lol ;) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inu's dedication is AMAZING but I really hope he doesn't die! As for Kagome rescuing herself, I'm all for that! Most fanfics make her so helpless like she's some damsel in distress but it's not like that in the anime or manga. She is the reincarnation of a great and powerful priestess and has quite a few of her own kickass moves. Let's hope she uses them ;) Till next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh...now Ed hints towards some of his insecurities. Interesting. But he better hope InuYasha and the gang don't find out that Envy attacked them because of him or else he'll really be in trouble. I can see Yash turning Tessaiga on him, rusted or transformed, especially since Kagome is involved...AGAIN. But hopefully she'll be okay. Sneaky little Al...asking her out on that date. As for the fight scene...WOW! I remembered thinking halfway through "When is Sango gonna hit him?" and then, literally, the next sentence that I read was of her screaming "Hiraikotsu!" And that was worthy of a little cheer/dance, lol. I was a little surprised though that Tessaiga didn't transform when Inu went to help Kagome. It usually does when he has a strong desire to help humans(especially Kaggie)...and it's happened when he was weak in the series but I'm not sure if youki affects that or not...I think Yash should've dropped his sword on purpose when Envy attacked instead of holding onto it tighter. You know...to unleash demon InuYasha on him. Then again, that'd mean bye bye Envy and no more story to keep me on edge and we can't have that, can we? Oh wells. Loved the chapter! Till your next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Fight scene! I can't wait! Especially since Yash can't transform Tessaiga or do his iron reaver thingy and Ed just left to gather firewood. They're doomed.. On the subject of Yash, though: AWWWW... He has all those insecurities and it doesn't help that Al is puttin' the moves on Kagome right in front of him. I hope he really isn't pushing her away..OR that he doesn't find out about the kiss! But the fight scene has me more on the edge of my seat right now than the little triangle going on, soooooooooooooo..till your next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww...poor InuYasha! If only he would tell Kagome half the things he was thinking! It's so sweet how he wants to be their protector! Hmmm...so Envy is heading to the village Inu and the gang just left? I hope Shippou, Kaede, and the others will be okay..unless he meets up with the Inu gang halfway. Or did he not leave yet? Till next chappie! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so it's safe to say Naraku doesn't know about Edward and Alphonse, yet. But if he wanted to get the jewel back he really should have sent Envy after Sesshiles. Unless he has some greater plan? That clever little bean...By the way...Does Envy still have a vendetta against the brothers now that Hoenheilm(sp?) is dead? If he does then the confrontation should prove very interesting, especially if Yash is still in his human state when Envy gets there. Also, I laughed SO hard at "creature comforts". Envy fits into the role of a spoiled rotten daimyo PERFECTLY and I can actually see him chucking the jewel if he gets too annoyed with it. He should really be more perceptive of his surroundings though. Apparently, he isn't the only shape-shifter in town. I loved it, till your next chappie! :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 21:37 CDT
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if one considers that since his name is Inu Yasha and being japanese... surname first and all that, then his family name is Inu and his personal name is Yasha. one would consider that since his sire was Inu no Taisho (dog general/leader) it only makes sense. besides, he wanted to be full youkai so he would probably accept being called 'yasha' as opposed to calling him 'dog'. . . ♣ ♥ ♦ ♠ ... see, i can do all kinds of characters in HTML but i want to do stars!! . . . look alchemy! β δ ω ξ . . . a visit from kouga could prove quite amusing. ~ couldn't resist, i'm so used to reviewing and subsequent silliness. ginny
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! Al cracks me up, especially when he gets all stubborn. And I laughed so hard when he suggested that Roy might be gay. Riza might pop him one if that ever happened... So all in all the "talk" didn't go so well. And now I'm feeling bad for both Al and Inu. I don't see Al's plan to take Kagome back to Risembol(sp??) working out and Inu has to deal with WAY too many suitors. All we need are Kouga and Houjo to magically pop up and he can call it a day...poor guy. Btw...Houjo and Al are pretty similar, personality and kinda looks wise. It would've been cool to see you do something similar like what you did with Roy and Uncle Souta. But at the same time Houjo can act like a weenie sometimes...NOTHING like Al when he's in a stubborn mood. However, in persistence? They both get perfect tens. Anyway, keep writing! Till next chapter! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww..I feel so bad for Inu! And, considering he was already feeling insecure from being in his human state and his dreams, Kags walking away with Al must've felt like a hard kick to the groin. :( She is coming back isn't she? Lol. Till next chappie! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 23:25 CDT
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that's just too cute, unconscious snuggling... lets see if yasha starts with the whole denial of his affections thing. . . won't naraku be much easier to eliminate now he no longer has the jewel? one wonders why envy didn't eat naraku when he had the chance instead of just taking the jewel and leaving; surely he would have sensed all the youkai naraku was made of... maybe naraku would have absorbed him from the inside, talk about heartburn. . . i still think the youki transplant would work just like she could use her reiki to purify youki and mend minor injuries they can infuse their youki to help yasha to regain his... what about laying tessaiga next to him, it has its own youki too plus whatever it absorbed with its 'dragon scale' transformation? (don't worry i'm always doing this with the authors i beta for and they just ignore me or use what they want). o.t.:wonder what kind of power tessaiga would absorb from envy or if the dragon scale transformation would work on him, does he even have youketsu as he is not youkai? . . . sango is 'taijiya' (youkai exterminator), you used every other term but that one. . . one wonders what kind of mess ed is going to make of the whole 'sex' talk with little brother. . . great chapter, i especially liked the snuggly yasha. ~ salutations, ginny
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, Yash is so faking it -_- lol. Not that I'm complaining. This chappie was loaded with teh squishy moments. Can't wait till he wakes up, though, so they can go after Envy (one of my favorite FMA characters..though I like him better in the manga). I guess that's IF his youki is replenished. And yes..matters of the heart. Miroku would know a lot about that wouldn't he? Especially since he gropes anything with a heartbeat...poor Sango. Al, too. It must be tough watching Kagome keep vigil over Yash. Oh well...Till next chap! :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 17:27 CDT
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*\o/*dancing and jumping up and down*\o/* IT WORKED, IT WORKED!!! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ... i wonder if i could get it to scroll?? hmm.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 17:23 CDT
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it may take a while but his youki will replenish itself... maybe kirara and shippo could project some of their youki around him (a youki transfusion!), nekomata and kitsune youki is youki, right? at least it may help stabilize him until his builds up on its own. so now they know the shards definitely work with alchemy and yasha no longer needs to risk life and limb... oh, he does that all the time (what was i thinking?). poor al, it would never have worked, it's bad enough to be from two separate times but add different dimensions to the mix... . . . wow he KISSED HER HAND!! what is the equivalent of that?! it's very nearly having SEX!! ...for yash. . . great chapter, i'm all high on caffeine and bouncing off the walls, that and i have a tendency to verbosity anyway. ((O.O)) hmm, same HTML code as lj... a little experiment: ♥ if it doesn't work that is the code for those little solid hearts on lj if it does work the code is: & hearts ; -without the spaces. ~ jocularity! jocularity! jocularity! -fr. mulcahy 'M.A.S.H.' , ginny
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn it! Equivalent exchange just had to ruin it! I hope Yash doesn't stay like that permanantly...unnnnlleeesss his being like that leads to more squishy moments like that hand-kiss. That was so cute! But I feel bad for Al. He's no quitter, though. As for Ed, I LOLed when Al scolded him. Doesn't Ed know: respect your tallers! Till tommorow's chap! It'll be interesting to see Uncle Souta's reaction to the Sengoku era. He seemed a little shocked in that well scene. Hopefully he doesn't faint...cuz then Kaggie'll NEVER get Yash out of that well! Lol. :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 18:53 CDT
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moviewavs [dot] com/php/sounds/?id=gog&media=MP3S&type=Movies&movie=Back_To_The _Future"e=mybrother [dot] txt&file=mybrother [dot] mp3 ~oh, that is just a movie quote that i thought was most fitting (to listen to it replace '[dot]' with '.' and remove the spaces). . . *runs, screaming, arms flailing* . . . "I hope this gets to you. I miss you. Inuyasha." coming from yasha- a declaration of LOVE. . . i guess they couldn't explain about kagome's mission for saving japan in sengoku jidai *wrings hands* how is she going to get back? ~ jikai inuyasha! they devise a plan to get kagome down the well by noon! (jikai means next time or occasion... it's how they intro the next episode previews in japanese... i wasn't about to translate the rest of it, i don't know enough language/grammar) ~ a pleasure as usual, ginny
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