| "In Pursuit of the Green Dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 18:43 CDT
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dun dun dun dun! They've been found out! Someone really needs to punch Ikeda-san in the face, though :/ He's really annoying! Him and the japoNazis. I vote Kagome do it...but eh, whatever. Hopefully they'll find some way to get around him to be inside the well at noon, otherwise InuYasha'll be using up a whole lot of youki for NO reason. Poor Alphonse, his first kiss and he gets rejected! But the guy needs to know you can't mess with a love that "transcends time", which brings me to this: I bet things'll get really interesting when he and InuYasha meet. You should amend the summary to "before InuYasha and Al kill each other", lol. I can already feel the hostility and they haven't even met! But Al's a gentle guy and Ed would more than likely be the one doing all the fighting in his name, but ah! The possibilities. I forgot to ask in my last review...is the watch that Ed carries the same one from his days as a state alchemist? Great update! Till next chappie! :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 19:39 CDT
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he's not a perv! poor guy, she is just being her clueless self and al's poor body is acting like it's pubescent self. i swear the things have minds of their own, and at the most inopportune times...testosterone surges. i always told my son that it was his body's way of making sure everything worked right and he always looked at me like i had two heads. . . so the shards are like miniature batteries to the resourceful alchemist. . . yasha's going to notice al's attraction to kagome... i hope he's going to be understanding of the whole thing (i just made myself laugh) an now for some fireworks of the irate inu-hanyou variety... after he recuperates from the alchemy/youki induced nausea, vomiting and dry heaves, of course. great stuff ~ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 18:55 CDT
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Interesting. If the shards' energy can power transmutations I don't see the youki thing being a problem anymore, and since Al is allowed to go to the well, I also see how he'll be finding that note. I'm really curious to see what Yash wrote. Even though, because of his lessons, he can write really well he wanted something believable...which I have a feeling will be something short, to the point, and rude, lol. Great update! Al is adorable! He always was a bit hormornal in the earlier FMA episodes...like when he fell for Siren. Come to think of it, he seems into girls that wear revealing clothes. The lil' perv. Till next chappie! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 22:39 CDT
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i am assuming that the well is to be watched closely in case ed and the dragon were to come back so i'm sure they would notice an unusual light then two folded lined pieces of paper that were ripped from a spiral bound notebook (invented 1924- i looked it up). one wonders what the notes say. . . all of yasha's youki hadn't been used up to transport them to early 20'th century but wouldn't the shard that kagome is carrying add power to transport the three of them? one wonders if ikeda will allow kagome to go with al and great uncle souta? one thinks he would become entirely suspicious to see a note from someone who even knows about kagome wherever ed is. . . excited that you update so promptly and i'm looking forward to reading more! *bounces happily* ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 19:47 CDT
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Ooh, interesting. I wonder how Al and Kagome are gonna get to the well to find that note with all the JapoNazi police around, and if Inu'll be able to manage the transmutation without turning fully human(and permanantly). I really wanna commend you on the part with Inu's thoughts on Kagome and Kikyou. I think you got his character down PERFECT. Ed's, too. You can see that he's matured but theres still that temper of his that always shines through. I am lovin this fic! It's really the first good IY/FMA fanfic I've come across. Till next chappie! :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 12:22 CDT
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Aww...he's gonna bring Inu ramen! That'll soften him up...(hopefully). Great update! There's just one thing. How is it Ed doesn't believe in souls if what he transmuted to armor was Al's soul? Anyway, looking forward to some Alphonse/Higurashi family interaction next time. Till next chappie! :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 01:07 CDT
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wow, that's a twist... couldn't he use something like reiki (what kagome uses to power her hama no ya or purifying arrows) or houriki (power of buddhism) to fuel his attempt. . . one thinks that al should have made the connection about the dragon and the power to activate the well before risking yasha's life. even if they get through they have to get past the japanese elitist police force guys. yasha wouldn't be much good against them without his youki until he builds it back up. he couldn't very well poke them with an untransformed tessaiga against firearms. don't these people have a plan?... one expects yasha to fly by the seat of his pants but the others are supposedly educated! . . . some good music to listen to by a favorite japanese group, just search youtube for the following videos: xPH_HTVwOoQ and ICkPs-xlgpY . enjoy them as much as i enjoy reading your work. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 23:40 CDT
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Lol..I get TWO Inu/Ed chapters in a row? Yay-ness. Again, you write Sango so cute, especially in the part where she holds Inu's hair back while he retches. Can anyone say: drinking buddy? [ignore me]. Anyway, Ed's alchemy affecting Inu's youki was pretty interesting. Is it because he uses that as energy(kind of how alchemists in Amestris used the life force of people on the other side of the gate)? Just a thought. I can't wait to see if Ed manages to open the well. Till next chappie! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 23:13 CDT
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... and the foolishness continues! working together? in harmony? without the stabbing or the maiming? HA! . . . yes that will be some trip, in more ways than one. ~ If I had a world of my own, everything would be nonsense. Nothing would be what it is, because everything would be what it isn't. And contrary wise, what is, it wouldn't be. And what it wouldn't be, it would. You see? ~Alice in Wonderland~ intelligent, entertaining, humorous bordering hilarity, eloquently executed. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 01:06 CDT
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that was really great! the attitudes clash and oh, i love how you wrote yasha's and the rest of the tachi's reactions to ed and the wells not working. one hopes they can get a rational explanation out of the boy before yash guts him. . . i got heartburn from laughing so hard. ~ >=D~ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 00:03 CDT
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YEEEEEEEEESSSSS! FINALLY they met! And it was everything I could've hoped for..they even fought! I wish there would've been a 'pipsqueak' comment, though. Then again, since Ed is more mature (and presumably taller now than in the series) he probably wouldn't react. :/ Oh well...I think you managed to get the Inu-tachi's characterizations perfect. Sango is so cute when she's curious! Lol. Till next chappie :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 10:47 CDT
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i don't know... al is all uber sweet, quiet, level headed, polite and shy... kind of reminds me of hojo... more knowledgeable but just as bland. o.O . . . so either great uncle souta married another woman with the same name as the first wife or history has changed? one can't go back to reverse that. what's it all mean? is kagome going to continue to wear her seifuku and won't they be suspicious that she has no other clothes? (heck, if i was her mother i would have outfitted her in hiking boots, fatigues, and kevlar body armor as soon as she came back from the yura incident. most likely invested in some firepower and weapons training) . . . sing along: getting to know you, getting to know all about you. getting to like you, getting to hope you like me. getting to know you, putting it my way, but nicely, you are precisely, my cup of tea. (from 'the king and i' by oscar hammerstein) ... just ignore me. ~ *smiles*, ginny
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 23:08 CDT
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Ah! You're such a tease! Lol...I really thought this was gonna be the chapter where Ed and Inu meet! But I'm not totally dissapointed. Though it seemed like more of a filler Kagome finally got to meet her grandpa! And great-uncle of course. I 'awwwwed' when I got to the part about how Kaggie's great-aunt used to have candy for her and Souta when ever they came over. My great aunt used to do that! It brought back some really fond memories :) Also, the part about how history already changed (what with Kag's great-aunt dying earlier) caught my interest. I really wanna know what else changed for our little heroine. Till next chappie ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 19:09 CDT
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They're on seperate sides of the well? That makes things interesting. There'll be no one to sit Yash when he and Ed go at it. Cool. I feel bad for Kagome though. With all those guys leering at her she must feel like a peace of meat. :/ Great update though! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 18:09 CDT
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nice save. all he had to do was show the 'mean man' the picture for the family resemblance. one hopes they can get her into the clothes of a miko so she is no longer a subject of leers. . . one wonders if the well's 'time portal' can become an 'inter-dimensional portal'... are they even theoretically related? . . . hey! she's meeting her seven year old great grampa! *chuckles* ~ thank you, ginny
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