| "In Pursuit of the Green Dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 14:16 CDT
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i'm sure ikeda hadn't been entirely open and above board with the brothers and shouldn't have expected them to be completely forthcoming. after all he was the one who had them coerced into helping him... one must hold one's cards close to their chest when dealing with such intrigue and duplicity. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! They're going through the well! I kinda feel bad for Souta though..it'd suck if they don't bring envy back or if they DO and envy can't transform. Ed really should have decked him :(...but anyways, nice update. I can't wait for our little golden-eyed boys to meet. It'll also be interesting to see how Kagome reacts to seeing her great-uncle in the feudal era. :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 23:35 CDT
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Aw..the little family scene was cute. I'm surprised the brothers didn't sneak to the well when everyone fell asleep, though. That's such an ed/al thing to do. Then again..they are a little more mature now (well..al is..) but I'm still dying for the crossover part to begin. You're building up to it very nicely. I'm also loving how quickly you update. :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 23:20 CDT
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you portrayed the homey chaos of the higurashi household quite nicely. i am looking forward to finding out where you're taking this. ~ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 16:28 CDT
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not too keen on a possibility of a triangle (almost strictly yash/kag) but the story is fascinating and i'm impressed by the abundance of research. you are a gifted and talented artist who mixes historical fact with the characters and elements from two series on your palette; painting with words to create a vivid reality in the readers' imaginations. involving, entertaining and addictive. ~ truly a pleasure, ginny __ p.s. sorry i haven't reviewed each chapter but apparently the alert feature on mediaminer is slacking off on its job and only alerting me on only a few of my favorites.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to agree. This story is, by far, really good and should have way more than just two reviews. And this is coming from someone who doesn't even like crossovers! But you have me captivated by your interesting tale. It's extremely well written and I can tell you've done a lot of research on it. As for the pairings, though I'm a huge Inu/Kag fan I can see Alp/Kag as their personalities are about as similar as InuYasha and Ed's and since you're using both pairings, that makes it DOUBLY interesting. A love triangle? I can't wait to read it. I also can't wait to see the hilarious arguments bound to happen when Ed and Inu butt heads. This is definetely going on my favorites list ;) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 15:05 CDT
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i have only a rudimentary knowledge of 'f.m.a.' but have enjoyed the episodes i watched, i also have a nephew who goes into full commentary at random opportunity so my curiosity won out and i'm glad it did. intriguing story that you're just now easing components of the 'inuyasha' series. this is extremely well written and a pleasure to read. i will be looking forward to reading more. . . there are too few reviews for such a well told story. ~ thank you, ginny
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