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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 23:40 CST
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Chapter 14... and I'm so depressed. How can you repair something after so brutally, and so mindlessly breaking it? That is, if you 'want' to repair it. It's just not possible... definitely not like purifying jewel shards. Whatever you do, it will always be tainted. Very good story. I'm looking forward to read what you have left to say about these poor souls.
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 19:37 CST
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End of chapter 11, and wow... that was intense. Poor Kagome has just learned about the history of his relationship with Kikyo. I can't imagine how shocking that must have been for Kagome, and I can't imagine what Inuyasha is in for after this moment. I'm sure it won't be nice. I'm sorry that I couldn't write any reviews since the 2. chapter, but I just couldn't stop reading! I'm completely hooked! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 15:04 CST
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Aww... I just read Chapter 2, and I must sat that it's so sad. Poor Tai, and poor Kagome... Hmm, although I don't like Inuyasha right now for what he did and for who he became, I can understand the alienation he felt because of what he has been through during his childhood and his struggle to prove himself. I have hopes for him though. I'm not sure where you're planning to go with this, but I feel like he will reach 'enlightenment' sometime as the story progresses, and become a better man as he struggles to get his family back. Very interesting setting, not one I've read before, and good writing! If you'll excuse me, I'll continue reading the following chapters now. Ha!
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Reviewed By: PixieFairy On: January 03, 2009 01:23 CST
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Wow, I really hope you update soon! Please! This story is building up really well. I hope they end up back together, but I suppose the story is still fleshing out right now. Good luck with future chapters and happy new year!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Indeed...who know? I'm really enjoying this! I didn't expect Kagome to be mad at Sango and Miroku but I liked that they weren't blameless. And that Kagome is dealing with this as an adult. I'm excited to read more...update when you can! ~Amber ;)
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Title: T-T
Reviewed By: smurf_x3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2009 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg.....please tell me they do get back together...i feel so much for tai...and gosh...inuyasha about to cry?! so touching please write the next chapter soon! i have fallen in love with this story!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2008 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I hope Inuyasha and Kagome can mend their relationship SOMEHOW. As for kikyo...I hate that women soooo very much!!! That THING was his first love? She may be pretty but she's a disgusting rotten no good for nothing peice of crap inside! Dig a deep hole in the ground and bury her!
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Reviewed By: PixieFairy On: December 30, 2008 23:17 CST
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Wow, another wonderful update. This story is just so addictive. I really hope you update soon because I can't wait to find out what happens next. Though I do have to say that I really do resent Chiyo for trying to "steal" Kagome like that from Tai. Anyways, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! This is cute. InuYasha doesn't look like he knows what he wants, but he seems to be getting there. And the changes he's making along the way (his relationship with his son and Kagome) are detailed nicely. I like that he realized how much he messed up, but maybe you could give a little more info on his current relations with Kikyou (whatever they may be)? I would think that with any sort of affair you can't just drop it like that. But anyway...great fic! I'm lovin the very real-life problems Inu/Kag have and the complications that prevent them from fixing it. Tai is adorable, too and so wise beyond his little three years. "I don't want silver hair..." My heart broke when I read that, just as the ending to this current chapter brought a smile to my face. I think every kid's done the "I hate you" and then felt bad about it. Hell, I'm 17 years old and I still do it...then I angst about it later ;P Will be looking forward to the next update! You've got me hooked! ~Amber
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Title: UGH
Reviewed By: smurf_x3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2008 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is why I REALLy hate kikyo....stupid >*BLAH*<
continue writing please!!! i love your story so far! =)
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Reviewed By: Tim78 On: December 18, 2008 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story and the plot seems to being with many directions to choose from. There are going to be ups and downs but Yash and Kagome belong with each other even if nowjust learned it and she is afraid of it now plis what that broad Kikyo said. SO lets have them face some adversity but be together and not have Kagome or Yash sleep with anybody. Yash really just wants Kagome now so he won't stray plus Kagome doesn't sleep with easily since Yash is the only one so far. Plus Kouga interested but he's to forward and has a child of his own and a ex somewhere too.Nice job looking forward to more soon please.
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2008 21:54 CST
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Awww poor Tai!! Ugh Kagome and Inuyasha are sooo frustrating i cant even comment on them right now! Just please update before i go insane!!! O n wen da heck is Inuyasha gonna find out wat happened at the store and wat Hana tols Tai??? UGH!!! Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: PixieFairy On: December 18, 2008 03:32 CST
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Omg! I really hope you update soon! This story is just way too good. I also really hope that it's an Inu/Kag story. Hm...this is so nerve-wracking, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: December 17, 2008 23:27 CST
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aw I hope Tai's not gonna think that Kagome has replaced him with Kouga and his daughter
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2008 18:58 CST
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......Omgudness. I dispise Kikyo soooooo much right now. But i must say that Inuyasha shouldve told Kagome a long time ago about her but still that dumb witch had no right to go and mess up their lifes even more! Ugh that slutty home wrecking clay pot bihh!!! UGH!!!!!!!!! Please please please update soon! I really cant wait till the next chapter now! This story is just so good and has been since the beginning but now its just irresitable! I really want Inuyasha and Kagome to get back together sometime soon and if you would please be so kind as to make Kagome beat Kikyo's behind somewhere in the future and also have Inuyasha tell her off and make it clear to her that the oinly person he wants and loves is Kagome. I mean who cares if she was his first Kagome is gonna be his forever! Well aside from by senseless banter please upadate as soon as you can! Foxy Signing Off!
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