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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 22:13 CST
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so you havent updated in a while... and i really do like this story, i want to know what youre going to do with it... i mean, i know what the ultimate outcome is going to be but i want to know all the inbetween... and this is the dilema... there is know why for me to know all the inbetween if you do not update...
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tai had better make kikyo's life a living hell. That woman needs to be put in her place. And I hope this is an Inu/Kag I really hate Inu/Kik stories.
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 22:50 CST
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Ahhh.... So she's still around. I must say I was wondering when she would show up. Even more than that, I'm wondering what his reaction to her will be. You're so bad, you know? You ended this chapter like you did, and you say no updates for a long time? That's just cruel! Great chapter as always. I'm looking forward to getting an auto notice from mediaminer, telling me that you updated.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 22:47 CST
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i dont make it a habit of begging for updates. but ive been searching for something desent to read for a couple of days... without much luck i might add... until i found your story, and let me just say, youve got me hunny, im hooked. ive laughed, ive cried, ive squealed in delight, and just when the tables turn once more, i run out of chapters to read. so please, for the sake of your newest fan. update, as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: PixieFairy On: January 22, 2009 22:20 CST
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Aww...don't let Kikyou ruin everything! Geesh I just hate her. Please let this be an Inu/Kag story!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 19:09 CST
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Oh nooooo! Kouga saw InuYasha's epiphany, and Kagome's convincing Kouga to get back with Ayame, but now Kikyou's in the picture... and InuYasha's lonely. Damn, damn, damn! Things weren't necessarily going well, but they were going at least smoothly... Here's to hoping InuYasha is smarter than before... but then again, as lonely as he is... And Kagome would be peeved to find out InuYasha left Tai with his father to go out with Kikyou (which is what it looks like, if not what it actually is). Gaaaaahhhhh... InuYasha's falling back on some badbad habits.
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 12:20 CST
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It's so sad that in his struggle to provide for his family, he had forgotten why he had been doing it in the first place. Unfortunately, that can happen even to the best of us. I'm pleased to see that he's aware of what his mistakes cost him. I'm still wondering if he's going to get a chance to regain what he lost, as well as if he's going to be willing to struggle for it. Great chapter, but I have two comments to make. I don't think a janitor's career path leads him to top management. That is, unless he's the son of the company's owner. Considering how you emphasized that Inuyasha had climbed the ladder by his own efforts, it could have been a better choice to have him start as an assistant, perhaps in the accounting/finance department? Second, I've realized that there are too many typos in this chapter. I think you should edit it sometime. I'm not very good in that department myself, but if you want help, I'm here. I'm reading your chapters as soon as they're published anyways. Well, keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: xstephaniex [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 07:29 CST
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I like this story, but I have to say that as a mother of a 2 1/2 year old, they do not talk like that. He says "me want this or that" and sentences are not full and half the time the words all sound the same. He hangs out with other two years olds and they all sound the same. Tai would be really gifted if he could speak that well.
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Reviewed By: PixieFairy On: January 21, 2009 20:12 CST
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Wow, love the really cute part at the end. Things are looking up for Inuyasha, though I really hope that he and Kagome get back together. At any rate, good luck with the next chapter and please update soon!
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Reviewed By: charmer000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is this the end? if not,i hope inuyasha and kagome get back together....plz? lol
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Reviewed By: lilcuti22holla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol i changed my mind! :)& r they reallyy not goin 2 get back together..?
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Reviewed By: lilcuti22holla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
sooo dose this mean inu & kag r not goin 2 get back 2gether????? If so awwwwman inu really become a man...i think if kag could just see that & they would work thing out it would be great!!! update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 23:55 CST
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Awwwww Inuyasha's becoming such a great man!! I really hope Kikyo doesnt come and try and mess things up again and if she does i hope Inu realizes exactly how horrible she is and tells her off or something to get rid of her for good. Well great chapter as always but i cant wait until Inuyahsa's feelings for Kagome pop up in him again!!! So update soon!! Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 21:31 CST
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Hmm... He thinks Kagome is with Kouga, and he does not care? So he really does not love her anymore. And she still can't forgive him... If they'll ever get together, you'll have to make them fall in love all over again. I wonder how you'll do that, that is, if you will do it. Why do I sense that this new development in his job will cause trouble? Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: PixieFairy On: January 09, 2009 19:58 CST
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Hm...I'm kind of disappointed that Kouga is getting along so well with Kagome. I guess this will be a realistic solution to the Inuyasha/Kagome problem. But still, I just hope that in the future chapters they can end up together. Anyways, please update soon!
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