| "Heartless" Reviews/Comments [ 136 ] |
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Title: YO!
Reviewed By: BabaTellsFortune On: November 09, 2008 21:14 EST
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Please keep going! your story is awsome!!
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Reviewed By: Pariah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 09:52 EST
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Ooh, new developments. Very interesting. I'm enjoying the dynamics between Inuyasha and Kagome so far -- especially the ambiguity of Inuyasha's intentions. Nicely done. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 22:20 EST
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one wonders if he had ever considered how his kikyo would feel about his actions since her death, also if she would approve of his attempts of bringing her back and his methods. ♣ kagome is from a culture that has adopted the 'innocent until proved guilty' way of dealing with the accused-- makes one wonder. one was also thinking of negotiations but if the enslavement of the humans are his only goal... ♠ intriguing and captivating. ♦ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 17:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Reading the first chapter, I wasn't sure if it would be a story I would get into, but I am loving it >< And I hope you update soon 'cause I wanna know what's going on!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 10:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story.
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Reviewed By: WinterSolstice1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 20:40 EDT
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When i began reading, i wasnt sure i would like it because it is an alternate universe of sorts. Ive read alternate universe fics and havnt liked them at all because they are basically entirely different stories with names from the anime. Your fic although original still has a semblance of the anime. I didnt see any distracting spelling or grammatical errors which allows the reader to enjoy the story even more. Im looking forward to reading as the story progresses and how you decide to develop the characters as i have yet to read something quite like this. You write with eloquence and im curious as to how you as an author will progress as the story continues.
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Reviewed By: Rach^_^ On: October 19, 2008 17:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! This is a really great storie. I can't wait to see what happens next's. Update soon plez.
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Title: Woot!
Reviewed By: BabaTellsFortune On: October 18, 2008 23:51 EDT
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awsome story keep it up! i must read on!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 01:41 EDT
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yes, a background story! how the war got started and how yasha got involved in it as a general. what is her purpose in being there and when she's going to figure out she isn't in her own time anymore. if yasha is going to come after on the way to the castle. whatever. ♣ good stuff. one especially liked when she thought miroku a 'little cunning monkey' =) ♦thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapters 2 and 3. Are you going to let Mirkou explain more about his friendship with InuYasha? Can't wait till chapter 4.
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Reviewed By: bbbeleana On: October 15, 2008 19:07 EDT
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Hey, love the story so far and the twist. I am also really interested why Kagome fell in a coma and what Hojo has to do with it. Hope to see you soon :)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 01:57 EDT
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the feudal fairy tale with a twist? i like it. interesting how i'm assuming miroku is the monk? what did yasha do so as to have an army after him? will she be able to return to her time? even for supplies? ♣ don't answer. i will find out as your story progresses and i will eagerly await future installments. ♦ thank you, ginny
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Title: arizonasiren
Reviewed By: arizonasiren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 01:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far. Very original. Can't wait to read more...
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Reviewed By: SilentLady On: October 13, 2008 18:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was good, I really enjoyed it! You've got me very excited for the next chapter. Can't wait!
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Reviewed By: artemishel On: October 13, 2008 00:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story
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