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Title: CrimsonLily
Reviewed By: CrimsonLily [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2010 23:28 EDT
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All this drama and angst is driving me crazy...and yet, i can't get enough.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2010 21:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So much for Kirara not letting either of them leave before Myouga gets back. Something tells me Kagome will be following after Inuyasha, one way or another, and maybe with important information if Myouga had actually had a legitimate reason to want to talk to them. If there's one thing Myouga is good for, besides sucking out poison, it's knowing important information. I'm so glad Inuyasha didn't have any permanent memory issues. When he first woke up and seemed to not remember the last ten years I was like Oh no! But then the cobwebs cleared, so Phew! Loved the moment when he realized Kagome remembered, as well. All in all, wonderful update, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2010 15:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let the vengeance begin!! I am so glad that both Inu & Kagome finally talked!! All the pain and all the emotions almost made me cry! How sad it must be for both of them to know that they were tricked just like when Naraku tricked Inu & Kikyo! +++ I feel that Inuyasha should allow Kagome to fight by his side, after all he is at his best when she is around! But I understand that he wants to protect her and I applaud him for that! I am so looking forward to your next update!! This just keeps getting better and better all the time!! Thank you for writing!!
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Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2010 05:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is really no words to describe how moving this chapter was!! I loved every single word of it and it just put all the missing pieces together. I love this story so much! It is such a wonderful adventure and everything about it is just plain amazing! The characters, the setting, and story make this a true jewel! I am so happy to hear that you have come back and will continue to write this magnificent story!! I look forward with anticipation to the next chapter which I hope will come out soon!! Thank you so much for updating!!
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Title: AH!! A CHAPTER!!!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2010 05:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I felt like I got a present in my email tonight when I saw the new chapter alert. I would have read earlier, but I happen to be addicted to a couple of cool shows on the premium channels so... But anyway so I read the new prologue and I have to say is scared the bejebus out of me, and of course has me biting my nails for the next chapter. I glad to hear it will be ready soon!!! also on a side note, I can't get that cliffy you left on S-droid out of my head (nor the steamy scenes before it eaither) so I hope your bunnies and muses are poking you with candy sticks about that too. I'm so happy I got to read another chapter for Heartless it makes me want to yell YEA!! but its late and I don't want to be shot by my sleeping roommate so I'll just yell in my head...that sounds weird OK I'm done rambling...
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2010 01:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Good update! I hope something or somebody manages to save Miroku and Sango before it's too late. Kagome definitely doesn't have to worry about Inuyasha still wanting her around. Looking forward to seeing what happens next! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: FrameofMind [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 01:45 EDT
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Congratulations! Your story has been nominated by the Inuyasha FanGuild for Best Original Character (Keiko) for the Third Quarter of 2009. If you would like to track the progress of your story through the voting process, or simply find out more about the IYFG and perhaps join yourself, you can find everything you need to know on our website: www.inuyashafanguild.com (Inuyasha Fan Guild dot com) If you have any other questions, don't hesitate to contact our moderators at IYFGModerator@gmail.com (IYFG Moderator at g mail dot com). Congratulations again! -- IYFG Beta Group
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2009 20:54 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the September 2009 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/sept2009.html Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/sitepickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/gallery_lists.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association
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Title: Best Drama
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2009 01:02 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the Sept. 2009 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/sept2009.html Authors, please retrieve your awards here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20Sept09 / First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2009art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Inuyashaloverr ^.~ Moderator Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: simple127 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2009 22:13 EDT
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OMG! Thank you SO much for updating! :D I understand the story clearly now, thank god! xD Please don't take too long to update! I got to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2009 21:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated your fanfic!! This chapter was great, I loved to read about their life together and it made me hate Keiko even more. I can't wait for Inuyasha to be councious again and for them to talk.. They have already suffered a lot. Keep on the good work!! :)
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Reviewed By: Terra_DeeEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2009 17:22 EDT
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Hooray!!!!!! You are back and better than ever!!! terra
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitely worth the wait. This was a wonderful chapter! I had forgotten about the earlier mention of Inuyasha's "dreams", so when he first muttered Kikyou's name I was as shocked as Kagome, until I remembered what was happening. I do hope he will make it until sunrise...you wouldn't just up and have him die on us after everything they've been through, right? Of course, then there is the matter of what truly became of the children...but one crisis at a time, I suppose.
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 11:27 EDT
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I've patiently waited for this chapter. It's so sad what happened to Kagome and Inuyasha... I hope that Keiko will die in hell!!! Hurry with the next chapter! I'll pray that Inuyasha will be okay...
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 06:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your story and your writing. Ignore those who have to point out every little error. As far as negative criticism, should not happen. The writer decides how the story plays out. If the reader doesn't like it then DON'T READ IT. I want to thank you for sharing your talent with us. Can't wait for more.......
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