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| "Heartless" Reviews/Comments [ 136 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2010 22:33 EDT
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| Title: *chewing fingernails in suspense*
Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2010 23:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I am praying that it was Keiko that was struck down. That Miroku had talked some sense into her and she tried to stop it. But I'm not sure, it makes it seem more like it was Kagome stepping in front of demon Inuyasha, especially with their kid screaming. That was the point I suppose, to keep your readers guessing, and that's a wonderful thing to be able to write such suspense. I guess I'll have to wait till you update, which I hope is really soon. Keep it up, I'm really loving this!
| Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2010 20:23 EDT
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i love this story, soo heart wrenching, can't wait for more.
| Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2010 04:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If it's kagome or sango yes please bring them back.
| Title: KinkyBlood
Reviewed By: dogdemon-fetish15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2010 04:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! I really hope it wasn't kagome he killed... it seems obvious, but maybe not... i don't know! D: And I'm typing this in the dark of the night... pretty uncomfortable... but i couldn't stop reading this! Dx NOOOOOO! And right when their kids were back... T-T
| Title: Chapter 19
Reviewed By: Goshibuh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2010 03:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tenseiga. If it's Kagome, yes. If it's another important character, yes. If it's neither of those, you can figure out something else that makes most everyone happy, right? :) Of course if you have some magical alternetive to the Sess idea that's good too...Just as long as no important characters die...
| Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2010 03:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!!! You have to continue. I don't think i ever cried so much with a fic.
| Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2010 21:13 EDT
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somehow, for some crazy reason. that red and white figure best be Keiko D8{ because even if he is Demon!Inuyasha, he would/should still know the smell of Kagome D: should.....
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2010 12:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man... Well, it definitely seems to me that he killed Kagome, though you had better have a way around that, even if it is a cliché like Tenseiga. I don't care! But one thing that's really confusing me is all the other rush right at the end. Suddenly the barrier is gone and Sango is trying to free the real Miroku? When Kagome ran into the barrier, did the sight of two Tadashi suddenly snap the taijiya out of the spell? But that wouldn't make the barrier drop. Though Keiko losing her concentration would certainly do it. And I also wasn't expecting that sudden change in Inuyasha's personality, either. I thought it would be really great for Keiko to see that he wasn't a monster, actually prepared to let Sango kill him despite his transformation, though its understandable that he lost the battle at the last moment because of his youkai's natural instinct to stay alive. But why would Keiko suddenly be worried, dropping the barrier around her and Miroku? She'd wanted Inuyasha to turn monster and kill, and the sight of Kagome appearing and getting herself killed by "the monster" should have pleased Keiko, not frightened her. Hmmm... I guess I'll have to wait till the next chapter to figure out what really happened. Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2010 11:23 EDT
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No! Please don't let it be Kagome who Inuyasha had killed! Anything but that!!! They had just been reunited! Ohhh! The suspense is killing me!
| Title: GREAT UPDATE!!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2010 02:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
!!!!YEA!!!! Oh I am so So SO happy!!! Yea!!! Happily ever after here we come. I can't wait for you know who to get her ass handed to her. Until next chapter ;)
| Title: I'm not gonna cry, I'm not gonna cry
Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2010 20:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this, and I couldn't look away. I admit I was a little confused at first. I thought it was an AU until it started going to the flashbacks, then I thought WOW! The drama, the separation, the heartache, the longing, the tragedy, and the need to want to kill a certain Bitch myself! The comparing of Kagome and Kikyou was always the biggest problem between Inuyasha and Kagome, and you did a wonderful job in presenting that. Then with all the tears and sorrows they had throughout the story, I felt like crying myself. It was nice that you wrote them being able to work it out. And then I was all too relieved to read that their children were still alive. Ooooooooo, now I desparately want to know what happens next, so I hope you update soon. Take your time though, don't rush it. YOU ROCK!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2010 10:19 EDT
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Yay! Kagome has her babies back! How wonderful! I just hope that Inuyasha is okay and that he will bring Miroku and Sango back safe...
| Title: Yay!!!
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2010 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Happy Dance*... I had just about given up hope after the last chapter that it was going to turn out the children were still alive. I can't believe I never made the connection when Kagome saw their "ghosts" in her time at the Goshinboku. What a wonderful and wonderfully sneaky idea you came up with! Sealed and concealed, no wonder it was like they had just up and disappeared as far as Inuyasha's nose was concerned. I guess somewhere deep down inside, that evil bitch just didn't have the heart to kill the children of the man she supposedly loved. And Miroku knew! Though what with the war and everything, it wasn't exactly like he and Inuyasha were on easy speaking terms, and there also wasn't really anything Inuyasha could have done about it, had Miroku told him. It was something that only Kagome could do. I can't wait for the next chapter! Well, I guess I have to wait, but you know what I mean!
| Title: CELEBRATE!
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2010 11:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't describe how happy I am to know that the children are alive! After all the suffering that Inuyasha & Kagome had gone through, I think they really deserved some happiness! All the pain and hurt couldn't go on! It was just so much and so hard to see them like that!! I know that I would never be able to deal with even half of what they have suffered, so I am really glad that there is one more reason to fight!! However, now I am afraid that the witch will use the children against them and this time she will really try to harm them! Please don't let it be so!! +++ +++ I am so glad that you updated and I look forward with anticipation to your next update!! Thank you for writing and sharing!! HUGS: MidCat
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