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| "Heartless" Reviews/Comments [ 136 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 02:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...that was sad. I hope that woman dies a slow painfull death. Oh how I hate her!!! Did she kill the kids?!
| Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 02:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, this chapter was sad. It also added about five gallons of gasoline to the fire of my hatred for kaiko, oooh what I'd do to that women if I was a charater in this story I tell... And the cliffhanger and done its job well. I'll be waiting anxiously for the next chapter, hoping that everything will turn out ok
| Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 00:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I didn't know English wasn't your native language. You are doing a great job in writing this story. So what is your native language? And what did happen to Inuyasha's and Kagome's children? Are they dead or alive? And it was Keiko who made Inuyasha dream that dream right? Well thank you for updating, I hope all those visa issues are worked out and I hope you are having a nice fall. Sincerely, Zach
| Reviewed By: inuyashasbitch [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've waited and waited and waited. And yesterday I read chapter 14 over and then today I get that long awaited email of an updated. I was in disbelief for about 3 seconds and I started reading. This chapter was absolutely amazing. Nice work. PLEASE continue, I know you will but PLEASE!!
| Title: Unexpected
Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 18:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew your next chapter was going to be good, but not THIS good. Somehow, I feel like we're back to Ground Zero. Where we came from... the very, very confusing facts and all the angst you wrote at the beginning (well, not that the angst wasn't ALWAYS there) Now I'm confused once again and loving every minute of it. Just the thought that your mind is an endless river of ideas makes me unsure about what is happening. Hopefully, we'll hear from you soon. No matter what you do, keep up the amazing work:)
| Reviewed By: MadMistress65 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2009 12:05 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Title: Whats will all the haters
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2009 08:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn people are getting so critical all of a sudden. This is my second read though, and I still love it, and I'm still waiting as patiently as I can for the wicked witch's butt kicking. She really really needs it. I read Goshibuhs review and I have to point out that I don't really think that this is Kikyo bashing. The original character re awakens the Kikyo/Kagome insecurity issue with her spells, and devious actions. I thought it was a clever twist when I got to that part the first time. I happen to think it makes for good drama. And frankly that review was mean. Karaumea you have a great story going and I really hope to read more soon.
| Reviewed By: Goshibuh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2009 02:20 EDT
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Personally, I don't know why you would take something like 'osuwari', and make it into something Kikyo had done first. I really don't. I hate Kikyo, that's my honest opinion, and I know everyone has their own opinions concerning her, but it really irks me that you would do that. Just saying.
| Reviewed By: Goshibuh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2009 18:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As a whole, I love this Fanfiction, but I had hoped and wished that Inuyasha wasn't reacting to Kagome that way because of anything Kikyo related. My hopes were shattered, unfortunately. I just want to find one nice, fine written fanfiction without Kagome having to prove herself worthy of Inuyasha even though she's not Kikyo. I really really wish that could have been this one. None the less, this is a wonderful fanfiction, so I will continue reading, and hope it gets even better.
| Reviewed By: simple127 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2009 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I WILL SERIOUSLY DIE IF YOU DON'T UPDATE! I READ THIS IN TWO DAYS! I COULD AVE READ IT IN ONE BUT I STARTED LATE AT NIGHT! THIS STORY IS AWESOME AND DESERVES WAY MORE REVIEWS! I'M TELLING ALL MY FRIENDS ABOUT IT! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEEE!
| Reviewed By: bridai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2009 22:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plot wise this is an excellent fan fiction, being both creative and captivating. That being said there are some things that irked me. One, while viewing the work as a whole, the long beginning of seemingly pointless material almost kept me from finishing even the first chapter. I'm really glad I did, I just found most of it tedious and irrelevant to the rest of the plot. Two, there are places where it is rather obvious that you changed what you wanted to say, the plot points do not line up. For example, Inuyasha has just captured Kagome from the castle, they are walking through the forest and his "amber eyes" darken, but then it becomes apparent he is still in human form. Third, I think you could really improve your writing by choosing your words more carefully; seeing someone's actions described as being cautious more than once in a few sentences is definitely noticeable. Its very admirable of you to share your writing, it can't be easy, but it's distracting to stumble upon sloppy editing. Bad grammar and stilted structuring can draw attention away from the plot. Your use of words that are similar to what you are trying to say, but not quite right and maybe were changed by spell check can too. For instance, "wondering through the forest" vs "wandering through the forest. I don't want you to think that I don't like your work, because I find it enthralling and very much in character, but I thought it would be nice to be constructively reviewed. I only comment on works I really enjoy, and I can honestly say that the only part of the plot I disliked is the ordeals poor Inuyasha endured! I am eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
| Title: seriously... fantastic...
Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2009 05:56 EDT
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I found this story a few hours ago and let me tell you, im glad i did. i screamed a little when i saw there wasnt anymore to read, and though its quite devistating im also kind of glad, because it is now 5 'o' clock in the morning and i have yet to go to bed... anyway, this story is fucking fantastic, i dont have the words to accuratly describe how much i love this story... you need to revise the first few chapters for general spelling/gramatical errors but other than that its perfect... oh the tears, you know its a good story when it made you cry more than three times... i want to gush, and keep going on and on about how perfect this story is but im afraid that if i did you wouldnt take my compliments seriously. but i seriously enjoyied reading this story, i seriously had a mini heart attack when i saw there was no more to read, and i seriously hope you hurry and update, because i seriously dont know how long i can wait... seriously... fantastic...
| Title: Amazing fic!
Reviewed By: Patricia_loras [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2009 20:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your fic is excellent, and I'm dying to read the next chap. Please update!
| Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2009 15:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story! I'm glad you didn't make the chapter any darker...I thought it was perfect as is...except...they shouldn't have stopped Kagome! That bitch needs to die! She is one messed up puppy-hater! :)
| Reviewed By: MadMistress65 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 12:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this story and let me just say how HAPPY *sobs* I am that I did. I haven't been this enthused about and involved in a fan fic in a long time. That last scene where Kagome was kissing the bleeding gashes on his face, and asking for forgiveness for betraying him, and then he kissed her and told her not to cry right before he turned human and passed out ... I couldn't get it out of my head. It actually kept me up last night. Am I nuts, or what?? LOL I am absolutely LOVING this story. Even though I know you said that you don't know when you will get the chance to update, I'm hoping that you'll see your way to do it soon.
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