| "Fruit of the Forbidden" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: chichers On: October 30, 2008 22:39 EDT
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Well that is one take on things that i haven't read before. And to tell the truth i really like how this is going and i hope that you will continue to write this and update soon. I will be looking forward to reading more of this story in the furture.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2008 20:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. Kudos to you on this...I found it to be very well written and really interesting. Can't wait till your next update! :D ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Aditu M On: October 30, 2008 17:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was hesitant about clicking on this story, I almost didn't but by the end of the chapter I was glad I did. The summary you have up alludes to something ahead and a clue, maybe two, has substantiated that suspicion. I am very interested to see how you will take this story along for its ride, and in the future conclude it. I hold much hope that you will not neglect, much less drop, this story. You have not made it come across as a pwp, but something with actual substance, an element that sometimes seems almost rare. Keep writing and I hope that you will be inspired to update soon Best Wishes and Thank you for sharing what promises to be a lovely story!
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Reviewed By: Ickabod2626 On: October 30, 2008 01:03 EDT
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First off very nice start to your story and secondly I believe you need Inuyasha to have that internal struggle with himself. Society Has pretty much said that what he is thinking is wrong, sick, twisted, and not normal so therefore you wrote Inuyasha perfectly maybe if you decide to continue having Inuyasha focus on working towards leaving the situation like getting better grades so he can go over seas for college and that might lighten the mood a little bit but keep that Moral indecision and this story has great things going forward. Look forward to reading the next chapter. Ickabod2626
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Reviewed By: pandasammi On: October 30, 2008 00:09 EDT
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you know despite the obvious perversion in this story its really intriging. I like the plot ALOT. its different, taboo and totally....hot. lol
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Reviewed By: Bill76 On: October 29, 2008 23:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far because the plot is new and different and I am interested where you going to take it. So great job and keep up the good work with updates thanks.
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