| "Fruit of the Forbidden" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 13:45 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I feel like a sicko but i honestly love your fic. I love a good angst fic (seriously not enough good ones these days) and ur fic is AMAZING!! This review is one horrible one (i normally write better ones) but i have like no time right now. I'll reread your fic and make better comments. ^___^
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: inukag4evr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 16:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cliffy!! omg this story is full oof angst!! its great! mm is kagome the one that is adopted or are they really siblings wooow you have a very interesting plot here Will Inu leave? things happened so fast I was kinda expecting to all happen a little later but keep up the goos work! u are soo cooool!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 03:50 EST
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no errors that I saw.... but then again I wouldn't be asking the girl with the cold... great lines To Inuyasha's surprise, Rex shook his head. "No, you are quite sane, eccentric maybe, but sane. We don't mind eccentric." "Yes, that is true. You're parents are… a unique case. A major problem with dealing with brilliant people is that they often find brilliant ways to blackmail you. It was deemed better to let them go than to risk them exposing everything about Aura." Even now, as she felt him soften inside her, she wasn't sure of her feelings. For him, he had sex with the woman he loved. For her…. I just had sex with my brother…
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 00:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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but then again what happened afterwards it was kagome who started it... what will inuyasha do now?... hope he does talk to his parents though... maybe things will be clearer... update soon... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 00:50 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... a natural reaction from kagome - especially after what happened with her and inuyasha... good that rex spoke with inuyasha... got some info on his parents... (in the picture who was the other couple - kagome's parents maybe?... since inuyasha asked rex if he's adopted but he isn't - he forgot to ask about kagome?... that'd be an interesting twist...) anyway wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: luvininu27 On: December 13, 2008 11:10 EST
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First let me say I really like this fic. This chapter left me with an incredibly raw feeling. I really felt for Inuyasha in this. I know he is just a character but I wanted so badly for Kagome to be able to hear his thoughts and feel the emotions that were going through him. He was so devastated and at the same time paralyzed. I also felt for Kagome in this. To realize that the reason your "brother" is in love with you and having it dawn on you that he is moving away because of you is a lot to take. I use quotes around brother because even though the characters don't know it yet, I think you've been fairly direct at hinting that Inuyasha is probably not a blood relation to Kagome. I think that love finds a way sometimes even when there are impossible barriers in the way. Keep up the great writing. I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 03:33 EST
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I can't help but wonder if they are in fact siblings. I'm kinda expecting that photo to show perhaps Inuyasha's real birth mother holding him or some such. I'm also kinda half expecting their parents to be sleeper agents or something. Or maybe they stole Inuyasha when he was a baby and that why they don't want him going to America. Or... as you can see my brain is working up all kinds of scenarios that sound very spy movie. I also am really curious as to Kagome's take on their incident. You stated at the beginning that it was not rape... which makes me wonder what was she saying that his brain was to fuzzy to hear? And did he actually see betrayal in her eyes or was that just his interpretation of something else entirely? I eagerly look forward to the aftermath of his lapse in control.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 01:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome finally found out about kouga & kikyo... what is up with inuyasha & kagome's parents?... what will inuyasha decide to do after his talk with rex... the birthday didn't end well... and looks like inuyasha finally let his feelings loose with kagome... what will kagome's reactions be after... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Ohm Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 00:04 EST
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Welcome back after a long absence! Nice to hear you got your computer problems worked out. Another interesting chapter..... everyone's deeds seem to have been put in the light, pretty much..... now you've got me waiting for the responses to come.... Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: NOOOOOOOOO!
Reviewed By: lifesabitch25 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2008 22:21 EST
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You can not do this to me, it was just getting so good and then you cut me off. This is really good story and I can not wait for the next chapter. It is well written and there are many twist and under-line plots going on with in the chapter.
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Title: YOUR FATE IS IN YOUR HANDS
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 22:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FOR I am OLDDOG 333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS, WHOSE PURPOSE IS TO DRIVE SLOW UPDATERS AND SHORT CHAPTER WRITERS BACK TO THE COMPUTER TO UPDATE. they are relentless in there attacks they will bark, growl and nip at your ankles until an update is posted!!!! After which they will transform back in to the cute little YORKIES they usually are and want to play with you for a coupLe of hours before coming home!!!! OLDDOG333^-^ YOUR FATE IS IN YOUR HANDS
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Reviewed By: inusouta On: November 10, 2008 19:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this capter was great keep up the great work =D
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Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 21:13 EST
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Interesting story, good writing, and amazing speed in updates... What else can a reader ask for? I congratulate you for your courage to try such a topic in your story. I'm really looking forward to see how you will pull it off.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 00:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that things aren't going well for inuyasha... what's up with the parents... and kagome is clueless about what's happening around her... wonder when she'll find out... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: The Iron Reaper On: November 03, 2008 23:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, Everything is well written and very original. I hope you contiue this through to the end, many wonderful stories like this one have been dropped this year (I read just about any Inu/Kag, Inu/Sess, Inu/San, Inu/Mir, Inu/Kik and Inu/Kouga story on this and 2 other sites) Please continue writing whenever possible. Your Faithful Reader, Reaper
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