| "Fruit of the Forbidden" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dana Rivera On: January 14, 2011 08:51 EST
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I just wanted to say that I LOVE this story! I usually don't read incest stories, but when it's Kagome and Inuyasha I make exceptions. I just love that pairing so much! Anyway's I wanted to ask because I'm confused about something in the story. Kagome and Inuyasha are fraternal twins (got it) but are they hanyou? Or human? Maybe I missed it being mentioned, but I can't tell if they're supposed to be hanyou and maybe Kagome looks human while Inuyasha looks as he always does, or if this is one of those stories where Inuyasha is human. Anyway's keep up the good work! I don't care how "taboo" some people think a story like this is! It's art! I hope to see more great work from you!! |
Reviewed By: WatersEdge [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2010 20:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Interesting take a "sort of" incest work of fiction... I would love to know more about Aura and the outcome of Kagome's pregnancy. Any chance of there being a sequel?
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 10:34 EST
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Loved it...you are an amzing author and it just worked...cant wait for anther story as well...word be interesting to see what happens a few years from now with them and if they see their parents again...XD but I loved it job well done
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Title: loved it
Reviewed By: mickiressa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2009 11:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it from start to finish and I can't say that I was too freaked out about the whole sibling bit. It was kind of sad that Sango cried her first time but I like how nothing was perfect since nothing in life is. I'm also glad that Kikyo wasn't really a bad person in this because she really isn't. And I just ate up Kagome's reaction to having sex with her brother, she wasn't all like yay let's go for it and she wasn't like I hate you so much. She was more like in-between because she wanted to hate him yet she couldn't. Ah nice twist at the end not even I was expecting that. I'm just glad everything worked out in the end even if they have a more strained relationship with their parents, it's for the best really. Other than that you wrote an amazing story that kept me captivated and I hope you write another some time. It doesn't have to be like this one though.
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 03:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i almost cried. coming from me that is a huge compliment because i've been told that i'm emotionally stunted
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Reviewed By: Inu Trasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2009 18:12 EDT
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Well...Nice work! this was well written and though I did make a few faces at some scenes, I must hand it to you: awesome job! Much of it seemed realistic as well, I mean how Kag handled it was heart wrenching personally...Can't wait to see more from you!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 20:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
although incest gives me the squicks, and it might be a while before I can look another I/K lemon in the eye again, this was rather entertaining! Way to not shy away from exploring their sexuality, both between siblings and *gasp* two girls who aren't nessecarily lesbians. Very deep in a Freudian sort of way. And I totally loved the sci-fi, crazy genetics twist! Keep up the creative, slightly twisted good work!
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Title: Finally Finished
Reviewed By: WhatVVB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 01:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally finished reading this story. Took me awhile. Good work I really liked it. I was debating to read it, but decided to cuz it was different. Glad I did. I look forward to reading more stuff from you!
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Reviewed By: kathleen On: January 02, 2009 00:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was pretty amazing it reminds me of that show called eureka on the sci fi channel but it would have been cool if she told him she ha a bun in the oven i liked it
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Title: Interesting...
Reviewed By: laichi16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2008 14:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was hoping for some dramatic adoption story, but that's okay. The story kinda reminds me of "Flowers in the Attic," only they were blood siblings. It seems Inuyasha and Kagome were sort of half siblings. I think it would be like Kagome being in love with the male version of herself while mixed with two other DNAs. In a way, Inuyasha is only 1/2 of Kagome... I think. I truly enjoyed this story because it was very creative, realistic, and in depth. The emotions were believable, and just the general characters themselves. I look forward to reading more writting by you!
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Reviewed By: sinonymous On: December 29, 2008 21:40 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so the incest bothered me a bit, but i really enjoyed your story. i like how i thought hey just normal relationships here oing out of control...then later on all this aura stuff pops out. i have one question though. so are inuyasha and kagome realllyyyy blood related? i enjoyed inuyashas character! nevermind the incest, haha.
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Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2008 12:51 EST
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I don't usually read story of incest but this was really good!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2008 02:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... nice ending... kinda sad about their lost communication with their parents but seems that things worked out for inuyasha & kagome... really liked it... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 17:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY interesting... this could even have a sequel if you wanted it... great chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 13:48 EST
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BTW: where would sesshoumaru be in this fic? How about Ayame? And what about the Naraku-tachi?
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