| "Fruit of the Forbidden" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 15:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems interesting, you've caught my attention... I'll keep reading ;)
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Reviewed By: Ohm Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 14:01 EST
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What an interesting fic! No one really seems to be where you would think they would be.... Inuyasha the smart one? Kagome and Kouga in a good relationship? (and Kouga cheating with Kikyo?) Miroku and Sango with the relationship problems? Oh, not to mention Kagome and Inuyasha are related.. (at least, thus far, I'm curious to see if they won't discover they're not.) I'm quite interested to see where you go with this fic! BTW, I love the frequent updates, but I hope you don't burn yourself out. This is such an interesting idea, that it would be such a pity to see it not finished. Again, cheers, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 13:35 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... hope kagome finds out about kouga & kikyo soon... maybe catch them in the act... what's inuyasha getting himself into... seems like a spy or agent thing... sango sure has issues... wonder what happens next... things are getting complicated... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: LY On: November 03, 2008 12:07 EST
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Your fanfic is very well written, i'm really enjoying it. Though in a new, somewhat twisted way, Inuyasha still seems true to the original, in his insecurities and alienation, and Kagome still staying by his side. I have to say, the thought of any type of incest story usually sets me on edge and i would ignore it all together. But this one caught my interest and i find myself rooting for Inuyasha. I think the ability to make a reader identify with a character they would normally hate is a sign of a great writer. I hope to read more from you.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 06:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: 44inu-yasha44 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 18:21 EST
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I like this story I'm very curious on how the inuyasha and kagome things is gunna work out KEEP UP WITH THE GOOD WORK :D
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Reviewed By: pandasammi On: November 02, 2008 00:07 EDT
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that stupid son of a.....ohhh tell me Kagomes going to catch Koga and that whore?? good twist though. tahts a way to get him out of the picture real fast. haha i think inu buying that necklace fpr her is cute. totally. lol
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 20:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice of inuyasha to help miroku with sango... now inuyasha still has his problem... wonder what he'll do about it... so kouga and kikyo are seeing each other behind kagome's back... hope kagome finds out though... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Ryan89 On: November 01, 2008 17:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far because of the different plot an the good writing with detail. So just keep up the good work and update please.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 17:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good story so far. But I gotta say Koga is a basterd!!!! ENYONE with kikyo is just blech.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 07:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the Miroku and Sango part was pretty good... It was very awkward (GOD, my spelling sucks I had to write and re-write that word over and over again with different spellings just to try and get spell check to figure out my crappy spelling...)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 14:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In Japan (from what I know from Ayashi no ceres) twins are thought o be the reincarnations of lovers who committed suicide together... (An old Japanese myth says that if two star-crossed lovers commit dual suicide, they get reincarnated as twins. from http : // tvtropes . org / pmwiki / pmwiki . php / Main / Twincest) Great story!!!
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Reviewed By: pandasammi On: October 31, 2008 01:32 EDT
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I liked the second chapter too. i liked the twist with Sango and Kagome ohhh how that made me giggle. just a suggestion i think a little add up to kagomes feelings about her brother and mabe a nude sence that has herself thinking shes insane and perverse would deffinately pump the story up. just a suggestion tho since you seem to be going off watever springs into your head. great job btw this story is getting off without a hitch
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Reviewed By: slowfatbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 01:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far with a interesting plot thats different. The writing is good because you go in to detail which is important. So lets just keep up the good work and continue with updates please. Oh yeah I am curious about those pictures too of Kagome.
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Reviewed By: Ichabod2626 On: October 31, 2008 00:45 EDT
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Wow quick chapter, Interesting Kagome believes Inuyasha has someone special, I wondering if Kagome is going to confront him about his mood sooner or later. Looking forward to more.
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