| "Daybreak" Reviews/Comments [ 154 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 15:55 EST
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T.T upload upload! Just kidding. The story is very well done! I simply just love how the story is going. Thank you for uploading the story since it's pure awesomeness :) I patienly await for the next chapter since it's getting good :)
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Reviewed By: Laur On: January 17, 2009 14:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Minor cliffie? I am very picky fanfic-wise, but I love yours! I have never read anything that actually shocked me. Yay!
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Reviewed By: jfeulner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 23:04 EST
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Normally, if the computer is constantly shutting down, there are a number of things. Here's one to do. 1 Smell your computer, :yeah i know thats crazy: does it smell like burning plastic, if it does, bring it to a computer specialist ASAP. 2 You might wanna have your desktop checked to see if the CPU needs more thermal paste. :thats one transfers the heat from the CPU to the Fan or Heatsink: Cause if it is the thermal paste. Most likely, your CPU is overheating, thus sending the computer into a :SAVE ITSELF: mode to prevent damage. That or its a virus, most of the time its not, but save ur self the time and bring it to someone you trust or a reliable computer Tech. Stay away from Geek Sqaud, instead support ir local business and see them
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 01:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Could you're computer have a virus or something? Enyway you're story is very good! Hopfully you're computer will be working soon.
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Title: Problem
Reviewed By: GoldenDust [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 00:27 EST
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Sorry guys, my computer has been royally f***ed up and is constantly shutting itself down. I don't know how long it will be until the problem is solved, but hopefully it won't take long. It's going to be a while for the next chapter: maybe 4-5 days at the minimum. Anyway, I'm so sorry for the wait! I hope you guys aren't as pissed off as I am. >:(
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Title: Once Again
Reviewed By: jfeulner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 18:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again an awesome chapter, the best scene that I liked from the story was when she sat him when he was right next to her and she kissed him *snicker* I have always wanted to see that happen and this fanfic was the first that I have read to supply this. ONCE AGAIN, GREAT CHAPTER, GREAT STORY, and keep on writing, you have many faithful friends who cant wait to read the rest!! RIGHT GUYS/GALS. As they say in the US. Military Hoorah!!!!!
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Reviewed By: jfeulner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 22:53 EST
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crap sorry for the 6 should have been 16 SHAME ON ME WAAAAAAAAAAA
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Reviewed By: jfeulner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 22:53 EST
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I cannot agree with you anymore Laichi_6, i hope i spelled ur name right. You are completly true, and I agree with what u said below 100% :)
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: laichi16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 21:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's very rare to read a story where all the characters are in character. What a treat your story has been so far! I love the idea of Hojo as Onigumo's reincarnation; very original! There's nothing to complain about this story, 'cause everything is exactly like it should be. It's very hard to take characters and put them in a situation, and still have them in character. It takes great care and imagination, and you nailed it! I look forward to your update!
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Reviewed By: jfeulner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2008 22:14 EST
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Well i am going to now try photoshop, i suck at it, but i am going to turn a sketch into some good looking art :) i am going to try in a week or so. Sorry guys, if you are expecting it
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Title: HUH?!!!! O_O...............?!
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2008 02:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOJO is ONIGUMO?! Wow...well that was...surpising.....(i've been shocked into slience)
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Title: XD AWSOME
Reviewed By: Shell6_is_awsome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2008 00:18 EST
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;3
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Reviewed By: jfeulner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2008 16:35 EST
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I am doing Fanart for Chapter 7 but not 6, I am not good at drawing the characters, but i can draw scenery :) and Chapter 6 has most descriptions about the characters, so its a little tough to draw :) anyway expect 7's posting by tonite or tomorrow
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Reviewed By: jfeulner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2008 11:27 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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No problem, when you get it done, is when, you cant rush an artist. I just want to say that you are an excellent author, and I am enjoying every minute that I spend on this book. I can actually see this as an Inuyasha movie, it is THAT GOOD!!! Keep it up. Your doing great
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Title: I AM SO SORRY
Reviewed By: GoldenDust [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2008 21:48 EST
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To those who are patiently waiting for the next Daybreak chapter: I am so sorry! I haven't stopped writing! It's just that I've been focusing on writing a Christmas special for Feulner and its turning out longer than expected! But I'll do my best to get the next chapter out before New Years (can't say the same for the Christams chapter, that'll be more like a project on the side, sorry, Feulner!) Thanks so much for your patience!
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