| "Daybreak" Reviews/Comments [ 154 ] |
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Reviewed By: MsFeistyy On: September 25, 2011 01:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story! I am so upset that I only found it after it hasn't been updated for over a year, and I really hope you come back to it! Especially after such a creepy cliffhanger. |
Reviewed By: Angelica_Pierce [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2011 06:35 EDT
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Just curious if this story has been abandoned? |
Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Eris of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2010 18:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in love with this story I have been reading it all day. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2010 21:55 EDT
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>w< cool! Yes this is so awesome! Thank you for uploading one of my most favorite stories! ^ ^ I seriously love the way you create all these twists and turns in the story. The characters are very well described and your ability to explain the scenes are marvelous. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to see how the group gets out of this one.
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2010 20:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! I enjoy reading this fic.. mostly with Onigumo obessing over Kagome.. H-O-T!! UPDATE SOON!!
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Title: WOOT
Reviewed By: Feulner On: April 13, 2010 17:42 EDT
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YAY your BACK!!!! wOOHOOOo!!! Another Fantastic chapter and its another one of them cliff hangers ARGH!!!!!!! I'm Back.......... I though he was gone for good oh well, I guess its a way to keep us on out toes. And the semi-intimate moment between Kagome and Inuyasha was awesome. I sat in my chair and just giggled and laughed. You always know how to put a good story together and i must say you are pretty d@mn good at it!!! Till next time Feulner :D
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2010 17:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He's Baaaaack....
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Reviewed By: nowyouseemenowyoudont [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2010 14:22 EDT
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Gah! Onigumo's back? And things were just starting to look up for the gang. I love how Kagome can't even think the word 'kiss' in her own mind without stuttering, priceless! Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2010 13:40 EDT
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woah dude! I did not see that coming.
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Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2010 18:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. very inventive. very original. i couldn't stop reading. now i'm starving cause i missed lunch, haha. but please update again soon, there has to be more to the story. i was kinda hoping they would've taken hojo back to the future and he would awaken thinking it was a dream.. or when he started talking like it was a dream maybe inuyasha would knock him out and THen they would take him back. but it still works out. you put this together quite well. please finish the story! thank you.
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2010 11:22 EST
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So here is the longer review I promised you last night. First of all what impressed me most about your story I think was how well you kept the characterazation intact for the characters. I felt almost as if they had come straight from the original story itself, but with more emotional and romantic depth than the original story ever allowed. Kagome losing her temper with Inuyasha, the miscommunication, Inuyasha sulking...it was not over-exaggerated as many authors tend to do. It was pretty well spot on. I think the second thing that impressed me was that you managed to create several plot twists that might be scoffed at or unbelievable written almost any other way, and actually make them plausible! Things such as Hojo ending up in the well and being a reincarnation of Onigumo was done well enough I will probably never look at poor Hojo the same way again, lol! I also loved the plot twist of Kagome going back in time to when Inuyasha was a child. You created a way for her to do that which felt as if it came straight from the manga itself. I almost wonder why Rumiko Takahashi never tried that! I could really see it happening. Overall, I think you just did an awesome job and I cannot believe that this appears to be your first fanfiction. I have been around the Inuyasha fandom for nearly ten years and I have become a bit wary of reading fanfiction by authors I am not familiar with that have been around a while or that has not come recommended by one of them. There is so much bad writing out there it is hard to sift through to find the good stuff. Anyway, there is one thing I feel you need to be a bit more careful about, and that is your editing. Overall it is very, very good, but mistakes such as wrong word use occurs occasionally. Examples of this: inhumane instead of inhuman, gratuitous instead of gracious, etc. Well, I think that is all I have to say for now except that I hope you continue writing this story, and I really hope you choose to write more in the future! Thanks for the great reading material! ^_^
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Title: amazing!
Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2010 00:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really amazing. I am extremely impressed! I am on my cell phone right now so a detailed comment is impossible tonight, but i will certainly try to remember tomorrow to get on the computer and give you imput. This story really deserves it! Great job!
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Reviewed By: Inu-chan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2010 15:35 EST
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GAAAAAAAAAAOMFG!!!!!!!!!!!! I just LOVE this story so much!!!!! ^_________^ I keep reading my favorite parts over and over again! But one thing keeps bugging me .___.;; in the prologue part, Inuyasha was a demon... and then Kagome was yelling at him to wake up right? Please tell me he really DOESN'T use the jewel for that! D: I like hanyou Inuyasha, ... and I really LOVE BABY-INU KOINU-CHAN!!!!!!!!! ^____^ I kept hugging an imaginary little inuyasha in my mind as i read that part! PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...I know I'm hyper, too many sodas! =DDDDDDDD *bounces off walls*
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Reviewed By: Inu-chan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2009 15:21 EST
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Title: Amazing as usual
Reviewed By: Feulner On: December 29, 2009 13:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, another amazing chapter. Take as long as you need for your vacation, because there is no pressure when you have millions of fans just waiting for the next chapter :D Anyway this was a good chapter and the last line " this was going to be a F***ing picnic" had me rolling on the ground just laughing. Overall, this is an excellent fanfic, and the details and imagery that you put into each chapter is just tantalizing to the mind, and I really do get joy in reading each chapter. Hopefully soon Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship gets closer and closer and i cannot wait to see how the prologue mixes into the end of the fanfic. Till next time.......Feulner
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