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Title: ::happy dance::
Reviewed By: Laur On: March 03, 2009 11:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're forgiven. Tis okay, we all have (or at least are supposed to have) lives. You are amazing with cliff-hangers though. Amazing, yet evil. It's just I have never read a story with anything like this plot, and I am quite addicted. Once again, everyone is in character, passed the dialogue and to the actions, like InuYasha being hit with the staff several times. I could even see the swirly eyes. I shall wait as patiently as I can for the next chapter, no matter how hard that task might be ::winks::
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 01:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww....poor Inuyasha...I hope he can get kagome back soon. Maybe kagome can figure out a way to keep the pearl away from naraku.
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Title: Finally!
Reviewed By: Laur On: February 16, 2009 20:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is the first fanfic I have ever fallen so in love with!!!! I even checked for updates every other day. I was almost afraid you abandoned me ::tear::. But when I saw there was a new chapter I became hyper and giddy. But yes, definitely worth the wait. Everyone is so in character I would mistake this as part of the manga itself. Keep updating!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ryan99 On: February 16, 2009 15:11 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story and I am enjoying it very much. So just keep up the good work and keep coming with the updates because the supense and my own curiousity are killing on what going to happen next. Oh yeah and I don't know how I feel about Ongiumo getting Kagome either.
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2009 02:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, my heart goes out to Inuyasha. To see her and have her ripped from his hands again would be heartbreaking. *sniff* It was still wonderful though!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 15:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So naraku needs help finding the time pearl. Well theres only one thing I can think of that naraku would use it for. He'll go back in time take the jewel and kill Inuyasha and kikyo. Or he could go back to when kagome first came through the well and kill her and take the jewel. But I guess it depends on the pearl...
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Reviewed By: winggoddess916 On: February 03, 2009 15:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"You wanna be treated by my fist?" I love that line. In fact, I love whatever comes out of Inuyasha's mouth! So funny {:D I think you update faster than any other author. They usually take a month or two.
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 21:22 EST
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Yay yay :) chapter chapter :) You just made my day. I was having a crummy day with a lot a bad luck, but this was awesome. :)Excellent work as usual and great upload. Fu fu fu fu fu. I can't wait for the drama. O.O *evil eyes* fu fu fu fu fu.
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Laur On: February 02, 2009 16:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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New chapter. Yay! Once again, you have everyone in character. Yay! The pace is great. Yay! And I am very curious to what happens next. Yay!
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Title: Fantastic!
Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 01:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, this is fantastic! *hugs back* I can only wonder how Inuyasha would be reacting had they told him of Kagome's choice. *sigh* Poor guy. Keep up with the wonderful-ness!
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Title: Me again!
Reviewed By: Laur On: January 31, 2009 22:20 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay! New chapter! Thank you for the hug ::hugs you back:: You will get one of these from me for every chapter. I growled when I read the end though it wasn't a cliffie. I am more addicted to this than I am coffee (And I drink a lot of coffee). I want more! And I make wonderful things with chocolate. Homemade fudge, chocolate mint brownies, chocolate chocolate cookies. I think one of the thinks I like best is how in-character this is. You are awesome!
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 02:31 EST
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*glances at the canary* not even one little nibble? Fu fu fu fu! Oh, this is rich, I can't stop laughing, even if the time is sad Miroku can really make me laugh. Koga,....well Koga is in his own league, but nice inclusion. I can't wait till the next chapter until then, I'll just nibble on a chocolate chip cookie. want one? *offers tray of cookies*
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Reviewed By: winggoddess916 On: January 29, 2009 16:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Miroku kills me. He'll turn a sad situation into a humorous one. Not that kidnapping Kagome is funny...you get the picture.
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Title: Great chapter! ^_^
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 03:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Someone has GOT to put koga in his place! He's so damn annoying and imature! I hope they get kagome back in one piece...and unmolested.
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Title: Oh my freaking god
Reviewed By: Laur On: January 22, 2009 22:15 EST
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You must be a sadist ;) This is incredible. Are you a writer professionally? You can probably be very successful. Once again-- addicting. Plus- great grammar. One thing though. I'm a communications minor, so excuse this little observation: instead of using "..." to indicate a pause, you should use "--." "..." known as an ellipses represents a removed portion of a quote, while the hyphen is what is technically grammatically correct for a pause. But you are right. Compared to this cliff, the one in the last chapter was nothing. Please put up another chapter soon. Pretty please? I'll send you homemade chocolate.
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