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Title: XD AWSOME
Reviewed By: Shell6_is_awsome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2008 00:18 EST
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;3
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Reviewed By: jfeulner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2008 16:35 EST
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I am doing Fanart for Chapter 7 but not 6, I am not good at drawing the characters, but i can draw scenery :) and Chapter 6 has most descriptions about the characters, so its a little tough to draw :) anyway expect 7's posting by tonite or tomorrow
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Reviewed By: jfeulner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2008 11:27 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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No problem, when you get it done, is when, you cant rush an artist. I just want to say that you are an excellent author, and I am enjoying every minute that I spend on this book. I can actually see this as an Inuyasha movie, it is THAT GOOD!!! Keep it up. Your doing great
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Title: I AM SO SORRY
Reviewed By: GoldenDust [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2008 21:48 EST
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To those who are patiently waiting for the next Daybreak chapter: I am so sorry! I haven't stopped writing! It's just that I've been focusing on writing a Christmas special for Feulner and its turning out longer than expected! But I'll do my best to get the next chapter out before New Years (can't say the same for the Christams chapter, that'll be more like a project on the side, sorry, Feulner!) Thanks so much for your patience!
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Reviewed By: jfeulner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2008 00:41 EST
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Merry Christmas Everyone!!!!!
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Title: I LUV UR STORY
Reviewed By: Shell6_is_awsome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2008 12:47 EST
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XD i cant wait for the update and u r the first person ever put hojo in a story and actulay have a reason other than crush teh nnoying creature like a bug:3 (there might have been other authors but none that i know of) LOLS WHEN KAGAOME CAME IN WHILE INUYASHA WAS HAVIN A MIROKU MOMENT LOLS I THOUGHT I WAS GOING TO DIE LAUGHING ;3
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Reviewed By: jfeulner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 08:35 EST
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Like a Christmas special, yeah! whenever you get it done would be great!! AWESOME!!! ur the best!!!
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Title: Christmas Chapter
Reviewed By: GoldenDust [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2008 22:34 EST
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Do you mean like a Christmas Special? Or just the next chapter out before Christmas? If you want a special chapter I can probably do one for you for New Years :D
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Reviewed By: jfeulner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2008 11:34 EST
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Do you think we might have a christmas chapter or one like it? Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to you all!!
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Reviewed By: jfeulner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 21:56 EST
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Chapter 5's Fanart is up check it out at http://i475.photobucket.com/albums/rr119/jfeulner/colors_slot8.png Enjoy
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2008 22:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
answer to the last question... no... great story!!!!
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Reviewed By: jfeulner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2008 09:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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HOLY SH** THAT WAS THE, OMG Fanart for chapter 4 is here http://i475.photobucket.com/albums/rr119/jfeulner/081217-03_00_13.png Chapter 5 will be ready, i have some good ideas for this one, very vivid, hmmmmmmm oh yeah and sorry that my art is not that good, but its something
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 16:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
best lines from chapter 2 It was about now she really did wish Inuyasha would come bursting through the school doors to drag her back to the Feudal Era. "Ah, Higurashi-san," started Hojo. "Is he that…violent guy?" He asked whispering in her ear. Although meant for only her to hear, Kagome saw two mounds under Inuyasha's bandanna twitch. Oh crap. "And who the hell are you?" growled the hanyou. Kagome swivelled to glare at the girls. "You TOLD HIM?!" she gritted through her teeth. The three girls grouped together and laughed nervously. "SIT!!!!" He was brought to the ground again in an ear-splitting CRACK. "I barely fucking touched him!" shouted Inuyasha from his crater. "SIT!!!" THUMP. "OW!!" It was the fifteenth time she had sat him on their way home. Usually Kagome was careful not to sit him when they were in her time, saying she didn't want to cause a scene. Well, she had caused FIFTEEN of them! Not to mention the fifteen huge indentations now scattered around the district. The second they had gotten around the corner from her school, she had sat him three times simultaneously. Saying she was pissed would be an understatement. "Of course not, bitch! I've been tenderised!!" yelled Inuyasha as he finally emerged from the wooden structure. Kagome rounded on him. "Well maybe you should have thought about that before you did anything stupid!!" "Don't call me stupid! Besides, I barely even touched him!!" The fight continued. "Well, they seem perfectly fine," said Sango rolling her eyes. "I'm gonna head off. They can catch up when they're done." "Indeed," agreed Miroku getting up and following Sango. "It looks like this will be taking a while." Shippou took one last look at the arguing couple, sighed and followed after the others. "Girls are weird," he said to himself as he sped after her.
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Reviewed By: GoldenDust [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 02:30 EST
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Don't worry. This is MAJORLY an Inu/Kag fic. I won't accept any other pairings. But it wouldn't be fun wihtout a few obstacles, right? ;) Also, there's gonna be a bit of a twist next chappie (hopefully you guys haven't guessed it yet so you'll get a bit of a surprise!) But to answer your question, INU/KAG 4EVA!
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Title: Hojo...?!
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 00:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like you're story...but just to make sure...this IS an Inu/Kag right? I hate hojo for some strange reason...for the life of me I don't know why. It could be that he's such a boring character...and he's waaaaaay too nice it's just creepy...and I knew a guy like hojo and he turned out to be a guy that beats on women. At least I know why I don't like kikyo.
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