| "Daybreak" Reviews/Comments [ 154 ] |
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Reviewed By: DARKENEDDEMONESS On: April 18, 2009 16:51 EDT
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Very nice chapter!!! Can't wait until the next!!!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 01:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank goodness the arrow only got her shoulder. He was so close to getting kagome back when kagura swoops in takes off with her.
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Reviewed By: Laur On: April 17, 2009 15:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay!!! ::happy dance:: I have such a love of this story. So awesome. And why do you have to be so good at cliffies? At the end of every chapter, my chin drops to the floor. And I will always harass you after a chapter. It is my duty as a fan.
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 14:30 EDT
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*.* you added drama! YAY! *goes to fridge and gets ice cream* this calls for a celebration. The kiss, oh, that is pure greatness! That was so awesome seriously! The cute tenderness of the moment and then the sudden kiss! *sigh* that was so cute and sweet. Great chapter like always. Thanks for the update, yay!
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Reviewed By: jfeulner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 00:35 EDT
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$drumroll$ Yay i am back, and with a new chapter to read from u!!!! whooo can this spring break get any better, I know ur probly thinking how is he reading this on spring break when this chapter was released so many days ago, well. I broke my laptop, got a new one and da da de da! i am back. Anyway....i just wanted to say you are an awesome author, i respect ur work beyond anyone else's work. I just want to say thank you for all the hard work that you have put into this fanfic, and i look forward to many future reading from you. God bless you.
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Reviewed By: Laur On: March 30, 2009 08:24 EDT
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Maybe I should stop being nice ::sticks out tongue at you:: This is just plain mean!!! Meanie!!! I should unleash my lizard on you, maybe his cuteness will make you write more. Once again, pure awesomeness. Better even than the really good Italian food I'm eating. I'll have seconds please.
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Title: Uh Oh
Reviewed By: redangel2463 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 16:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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o.o Uh Oh what's Kikyo going to do? Bad things happen when she shows up. This is an awesome story by the way. Pleeaaasssee update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 01:41 EDT
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Gahhhhh!! Kikyo! You idiot! See I knew she was going to make things worse! Poor kagome she just can't get a break can she. Lol! And you left us hanging of that evil cliffy didn't you? I think if the arrow killed kagome the story would end...unless Sessh can bring her back. He's not to far from kagome and kikyo is he? Inuyasha is going to be so pissed at kikyo if she hurts her...or worse KILLS her. I'm not so sure what he'd do then.
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 00:23 EDT
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O.O; fishie *innocent look* did I say fishie?....Well moving on. Great chappie like always :) Please let the arrow pierce Kagome's shoulder or something to add to the drama! Ha ha ha ha ha! Atchoo! Well it's allergy season again, so I'll be awaiting for your great next chapter which is balm for my poor red eyes. :) Great chapter like always, nice descriptions, and nice way of adding the innocence of Rin into the mix. You really know how to connect the characters in interesting and intricate liasons :D so awaiting your next chapter patiently :) and thank you for posting it here on mediaminer *goes and runs to get another box of tissues*
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Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 20:22 EDT
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Omg that's not cool!!! Why must you torture us so??? Please update as soon as you can *sniff*!!!
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Title: Ahhh!
Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 15:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you?? I'm sitting on the edge of my seat just waiting for you to update again. *cries softly* Cliffie's kill me.
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Reviewed By: taixi On: March 26, 2009 12:59 EDT
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awww, for some reason I feel especially bad for the little weasel youkai. maybe it's because his "running away in a bush" disguise was so cute. naraku's such an evil guy...
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2009 18:43 EST
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*singsong voice* I'm back! miss me :) I'm sorry I haven't been on for a while since deadlines and due dates were piled up. So I was working my little hand into nothingness. But seriously! AWESOME-NESS...is he your buddy? ^ ^ the drama it's good! Yay Kikyou is here and the miko garment thing, oh it's pure genious. Let the drama drag on, because the agony of both sides of the Inu and co. is like ice cream to me :) I love drama and this story is a really good place to get it :) -.- by the way....I got a new fishie
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 01:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do believe kikyo might just make things worse! But then again she may figure out what's going on and help kagome....and my cat will sprout wings and fly around my bedroom.
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Title: Fantastic!
Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2009 12:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter you have here. When I get the e-mail updates in my inbox I always have to go read your chapter before I read the rest of my mail. Lol. That's how much I love this story.
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