| "Control. Infirmity. Defiance." Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
| Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Angelica_Pierce [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2012 06:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
My yearly review and all. Do you plan to finish this? |
Reviewed By: Angelica_Pierce [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2011 01:36 EST
Comment/Review:
Okay, no, seriously. Do you plan to finish this? ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Angelica_Pierce [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2010 22:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, just wanted to know if you still plan to finish this.
|
Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2009 04:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
Congratulations! Your story has been nominated by the Inuyasha FanGuild for Best Action/Adventure for the Second Quarter of 2009. If you would like to track the progress of your story through the voting process, or simply find out more about the IYFG and perhaps join yourself, you can find everything you need to know on our website: www.inuyashafanguild.com (Inuyasha Fan Guild dot com) If you have any other questions, don't hesitate to contact our moderators at IYFGModerator@gmail.com (IYFG Moderator at g mail dot com). Congratulations again! -- IYFG Beta Group (and me - ktshabatie!)
|
Title: chapter 3
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2009 10:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
thinking about being able to purify the shards-- when naraku tried to use a tainted shard to control kikyou- he failed right away (probably because of her training) but when tsubaki used a tainted shard to indirectly control kagome, it worked for a while until she was able to overcome it- if someone with such strong reiki as kagome couldn't purify the influence of the tainted shard then kohaku wouldn't stand a chance. besides naraku offered freedom from bad memories, allowing naraku to steal his mind therefore controlling him. ♣ way to switch the whole kaou thing and still have kagome eliminate him. youtube.com/watch?v=Q2fSAFOtW3w -- one wonders what her 'powers' are from. ♦ ginny ♥
|
Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: LuxKen27 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 15:55 EDT
Comment/Review:
*squee* Yaaaaaaaay!!! I have been waiting (ever so impatiently) for an update to this; even the sneak peak you gave me ;) doesn't compare to reading the official version. You know what's so great about this story? You make me want to run back and read the manga chapters and try to puzzle out for myself how you're splitting and splicing the story. It's just - amazing. Wow. I am also really, really loving your Inuyasha. I don't know how you do it, but you manage to capture all of his conflicting emotions so well. He wants her, but he doesn't; he wants to help her, but doesn't know how; he needs to know what Kaou made her see, and is frustrated when she holds back those answers from him. Their final scene together, after the kiss, was phenomenal - I could picture it perfectly in my head, the two of them holding hands and sharing thoughts. *sigh* They are perfect for one another and you soooo make them that way. I love jealous Kikyo, too! So torn between her emotions and the ones she gains from Kagome via their power exchanges. If their group truly is heading towards Sesshoumaru, as hinted in one of the earlier scenes, then I look forward to their clash! Miroku and Sango were lovely, as usual, as you set up one of the more important story arcs from the canon for Sango ~ I look forward to your take on things!! You are most welcome for the IYFG nod!! A more deserving fic, I haven't enjoyed of late =)
|
Title: Ch 5
Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 06:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
thx for writing! look forwrd to your next chap! ja!
|
Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2009 22:17 EDT
Comment/Review:
OoOoOo this story is really good and it intriques me (ooo big words i feel so smart! lol) I usually dont like stories that actually take place in feudal era like the real show does cuz most of the time the authors really screw it up lol. But this story is good and i cant wait till the next chapter!! -FoxyLove
|
Title: Woot!
Reviewed By: Laur On: May 07, 2009 14:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never read a fanfic that stuck to the actual manga so well. I am now addicted! Plus the reviewers are gushing over your other stories, so I'm going to go read them all.
|
Reviewed By: yo On: May 07, 2009 10:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'M DROWNING IN BUNNY FUR! funny PLEASE CONTINUE!
|
Reviewed By: Phalon (nsi) On: May 07, 2009 06:53 EDT
Comment/Review:
Plot bunnies = Evil. But this story is awesome, plenty of angst. I just have to wonder when Kikyou's future will start to present itself, if even so slightly. Keep up the good work, I continue to love the stories your write.
|
Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: LuxKen27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 15:03 EDT
Comment/Review:
Ooh, action! :D I love the action!! This is a really great take on the original arc from the manga. I love the dreams/visions you inserted, for both Sango and Kagome - interesting, in some ways, how they wish for the same things (or at least, think the same sorts of things will make them happy). LOL, Kagome's visions in particular were unexpectedly citrusy, but in the most pleasant way, hehe :) What can I say? You're drawing me into your world and leaving me wanting more. The end of the chapter was spot on perfect - though it makes me wonder why Inuyasha is forcing the issue, like he wants her to admit her feelings first or something. Couldn't he see that she was also frustrated with her lack of knowledge from where that killing blast of power had come from? Not exactly the time to be bringing up, "So, hey, tell me about your wet dreams!" LOL. But, I like how you're strengthening the intensity of the triangle, like you're ready for it to break - I'm still wondering how you're going to set the characters on their ultimate paths. And now I will go read your author's notes, seeing as how you said this was your 'favorite' chapter so far! =) Looking forward to more!!!
|
Reviewed By: kmoaton [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 13:04 EDT
Comment/Review:
YAY! What a kick ass chapter! You did fine reworking everything into a very interesting tale. I so enjoy the angst of all of it. This was totally perfect for a rainy day! Great Work!
|
Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 11:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting the way you have reversed many of the roles. Kagome and Sango get the dreams they want. Even Kikyou feels the lure of the flowers offering her what she wants. Kagome is able to use her powers to save herself. Kikyou may have weakened while Kagome has been strengthened.
|
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 08:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eyes twitches* omg that was great!!! Inuyasha can see it???!!! OMG DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT INUYASHA!!!!! Oooo where did that power Kagome had came from?? i want to read more... T_T
|
| Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] |
