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Title: OME!!!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2011 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMD!!! its been so long almost a year! my god...I thought you gave up on this story!!!!!!! And I tell you this puts things in a perspective for me now just alittle abou t the jewel. And I hope you update weekly!!!! |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2011 01:02 EDT
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Whoohoo! I've been waiting for the latest chapter for this story to come out for a couple of months now. THANK YOU SO MUCH! (: |
Reviewed By: KAI103842 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2011 21:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great, I just stumbled upon it! What chapter was it, 10? When the 'handsome red eyed man' appeared I just thought BOOOOOO! I hate Naraku. I hate all the conflict he brings, I just it could be Kagome and Inuyasha romance 24/7 :D If only!! You said you'll be updating weekly now?? AWESOME! Can't wait for then next chapter. |
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2010 14:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I do enjoy reading this story. It's a lot of fun to read, and the concept is very interesting. I'm hoping to read more from you. I'm looking forward for what's next and what's going to happen between Inuyasha and Kagome later on.
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: savii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2010 02:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bumbumbummmm so good cant wait!
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Title: just one question...
Reviewed By: LokoRamenDaily [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2010 05:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
do you read over your stories before posting? because maybe it's because i have a slight talent for finding faults but the number of typo's, misspellings, or wrong words in the wrong places i've found is just plain ridiculous.
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Title: YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2010 12:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OME!!!! YOUR BACK!!! i thought you were never gonna finish this story and leave all of us reviewers to use our imagination of whats gonna happen next in this story! But am glad that you updated..............FINALLY!!!! and i still hated the freakin cliffy....damn you and your cliffys!!!!!! *shakes fist in anger* DAMN YOU CLIFFYS!!!! but anywayz.....this was a good chapter and when the hell is inuyashas slow gonna catch up to them??? his slowness is givin me the hebe gbes!!!!!! I mean YAY!!!!! but yeah good chapter and to bad hayate choose the dark road and all that...I hopin he would go for the gold and choose good but instead he chose silver and went for the bad!!!!!! All in all good chapter!!!! Update Soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: blackbutterfly15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2010 22:44 EDT
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Oh snap!! I'm very interested to see where this story goes and how it ends :D Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: savii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2010 02:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im in absolute love with this story! Im really sad it hasnt beenn updated recently but I will for sure keep a look out! My new obsession!!
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Title: YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2010 16:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OME!!!!! I can't believe you left another cliffy!!!! I'm really starting to hate cliffys!!!! But ne ways....I can't believe kagome the super nerd is going up against super duper bear demon!!!!! but i think we all know that KAgome is gonna win!!!! or i hope shes gonna win!!!!.....is she gonna win? but ne ways.....Hope you update more!!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2010 02:01 EDT
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Oh wow its been a while huh? these updates are Fantastic! (I just read the two latest chapters) and goodness everything just keeps getting better and better! I hope you update soon. I had no Idea you were going to include the Shikon Jewel in modern times :D I like the fact that I dont know what to expect! I'm excited to read some more...and I hope that I stll qualify for being your number 1 fan?^-^ anyways keep up the good work.
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Title: WHOO HOOO!!!!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2010 17:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! you finally updated after so loooonnnnnggggg.......I was on like everyday til you posted a new chatper and I was ALLL Very Excited!!!!! I love the new chapter especially the fighting scene.....it was pretty awsome because i saw all of it in my head!!!! I cant wait til you update again....and please let it be soon i dont think i can handle another long wait again.....its like a cliff hanger...but for a long time!!!! and that sucks!!!! Update soon!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2010 19:58 EDT
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UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: i love kouga [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2010 17:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great job i didnt see that coming. i cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2010 14:33 EDT
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Ha, Ha, I just love a woman who doesn't put up with a man trying to make her his slut, way to kick a** kagome, and Irish, that wasn't critisisum, having word trouble like that happens to me all the time, only usually it's verbal when you can't check a Theasaus, LOL, I had to look at it a while before I figured out what wasn't right, and I love this story, and smart, spunky heros and heroines, it makes for a GREAT story, can't wait for the next update!!!!!
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Title: Before He Bites.....
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2010 21:09 EDT
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Hey Irish, 3 months is a long time leaving Inu and Kag balanced on the edge of a fight of Epic Proportions, LOL, I'm patiently waiting to see what's going to happen next., and it's haunches, not hinges, a dog sits up on it's haunches, N-E-Way, I've been with you since the first chapter, and I can't wait to read the next. You've got a pretty good grasp of keeping the flow of the story smooth, I suggest that after you write the story, any words that look funny to you should get looked up in the Theasaurus. It will give you more choices of words with the same approx meaning. Practice makes perfect, you tell a good story, now it's time to tighten up your skills. Good luck and don't stop writing.
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Title: LOVED IT
Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2009 23:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually really like where this is going. Your grammer is alittle off but hey i understand. Very good story tho! I cant wait for the next chapter to be up!! I want to read it now lol
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Title: YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2009 04:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OME!!! YAY! you updated! I waited forever! But I really like this chapter a lot because of the action and the tension you can feel between kagome and inuyasha. And KIKNY-HOE!!! I was waitinf for Kagome to kick her skinny little anerixic slutty ass! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA! Now I cant wait for Inuyasha and Kagome to get the battle going and to see the king of action that goes on between them. YAY!!! Go Kagome and Inuyasha!!!! I'm waiting for your next update!
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2009 21:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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God your horrible!!!! I hate Cliffhangers!!! that was amazing by the way! i will be awaiting your next update :D
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Reviewed By: blackbutterfly15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2009 01:10 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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GAH! You and your cliffy endings!! Lol. I love it so far. I can not wait for the next chapter. I hope InuYasha and Kagome make up.
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2009 18:04 EST
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WOW! just wow! I got no other words! I freaking love this story though I was unsure of reading it because the summary isn't very attractive... I'm glad I changed my mind! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2009 09:32 EST
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Her calling him "Ass" kind of killed the lemon for me. Otherwise, I'm very curious how your plot will turn out.
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Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2009 03:41 EST
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Hey.......hurry up and update!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know I wrote a review already...but I read the story all together again and I still think its a good story!!! God I still Inuyasha is the dummy of the story for saying that to kagome it made me cry and I'm not afraid to admit it! i hope you hurry up because I really would like to know what happens!!! And I think that you should make a scene where Royoko and Genti try to ya know make the monkey with Kagome but then.....Dun dada dum....Inuyasha comes out and saves the day and does the monkey with Kagome or not.....but shows a side of Inuyasha that is gentle...his beast side!!! Or you can make a scene where Inuyasha stakes his claim on Kagome...not by doing the monkey but by marking her as his? Thats all I got so far...but I can't wait til you update again because I really want to know what happens with Inuyasha and Kagome. I also think there should a showdown between Kikyo and Kagome...and of course have Kagome kick her ass and Inuyasha has to come and take Kagome off Kinky-hoe! Or or!!! have like 3 men take Kagome off because shes like super strong....I dunno.....just giving ya ideas!!!! But please update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: henjin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2009 18:27 EST
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OMG! this story is getting juicy. UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: meganramirez13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2009 01:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely adore your story I hope that you make inuyasha beg kagome for forgiveness because the way you portray him is just amazing. Please update soon :)
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Reviewed By: moonlightsprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 21:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! THE 2 QUARRELING LOVERS HAVE ARRIVED~~~. I'm so pleased. you are rocking the fanfiction world!! YES i love your fanfiction and i know this will bug you a lot i have a friend whose an author, but please please please pretty please review. i know i sound like a 13 year old brat who is super spoiled, but this is getting so good, the monthly fixes aren't enough anymore. Oh and before I forget, i still love the openings ~_~ Moonlight's princess
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Title: OME!!!!``
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 21:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ome! this story made me cry and made me want to weep!!!! But that dumb inuyasha!!!!! I loved the story!!!!!!!!! Please hurry up and write the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ur like making me impatient!!!!!!!!! hurry!!!! But i loved the way you made inuyasha jelouse!!!!! because we all know he LURVS her!!!!!!!!!!! GO INU AND KAG FOREVA!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 05:22 EDT
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I don't like being overly critical so all i will say is that you have a lot of spelling errors.
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Title: Before He Bites
Reviewed By: Nabiki Tendo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2009 03:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanted to let you know how well written your story is and how much i am enjoying it. when i first started reading the first chapter i was not sure if i was going to like it much but this story has easily made its way into the list of my top 15 favorite inuyasha stories and i really hope you can add another chapter really soon. again i think this story is awesome. i just dont really like kikyo much so i am not really happy that shes in the story but if she gets dumped then i am happy. oh well you are the writer not me. lol well if you get a chance and an inclanation take a look at my story i am writing and let me know what you think please. cause that would help me a lot. well anyway love the story. nabiki tendo
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Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 22:23 EDT
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Loved the new chapter, but why did you add Royoku instead of Kouga? Is our little nerdy Kagome becoming a sexy, flirty feline with an unquenchable thirst for demon's butts? Haha.
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