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Title: OME!!!!``
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 21:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ome! this story made me cry and made me want to weep!!!! But that dumb inuyasha!!!!! I loved the story!!!!!!!!! Please hurry up and write the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ur like making me impatient!!!!!!!!! hurry!!!! But i loved the way you made inuyasha jelouse!!!!! because we all know he LURVS her!!!!!!!!!!! GO INU AND KAG FOREVA!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 05:22 EDT
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I don't like being overly critical so all i will say is that you have a lot of spelling errors.
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Title: Before He Bites
Reviewed By: Nabiki Tendo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2009 03:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanted to let you know how well written your story is and how much i am enjoying it. when i first started reading the first chapter i was not sure if i was going to like it much but this story has easily made its way into the list of my top 15 favorite inuyasha stories and i really hope you can add another chapter really soon. again i think this story is awesome. i just dont really like kikyo much so i am not really happy that shes in the story but if she gets dumped then i am happy. oh well you are the writer not me. lol well if you get a chance and an inclanation take a look at my story i am writing and let me know what you think please. cause that would help me a lot. well anyway love the story. nabiki tendo
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Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 22:23 EDT
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Loved the new chapter, but why did you add Royoku instead of Kouga? Is our little nerdy Kagome becoming a sexy, flirty feline with an unquenchable thirst for demon's butts? Haha.
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 21:24 EDT
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Oh My God!! that was so fucking awesome!!!! i loved the update it was so good!all the flirting was awesome... i cant wait for more lemony goodness! i missed all your updates but i understandi really hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2009 19:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Mmm! Loving this fic! Haha. I love how there is sexual tension between our two lovebirds in the beginning. Also, I enjoyed the lemon you left us. (: Seems like you haven't updated in a while, but please update very soon!!!!!!!! Can't leave your loyal readers in suspension!!
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Title: OME!! YAY!!!!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2009 00:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OME!!!! You made my day!!!! am so glad they FINALLY did the hankey pankey!!!! WHOO HOO!!! but it also made me sad when kagome thought that thought that they were only gonna be together for that one night! But we all know better and that they're gonna have more nights and days and midafternoons like this!!!! Ome but i like the way you wrote the lemon!!!! Keep up the good work and please update soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: moonlightsprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2009 16:51 EDT
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OMG i'm so HAPPY they finally did it!! YAY!! what's next? 1 last thought, why did he have more than 1 condum in his pocet?!?!?!? Still loving the cliffys This is the perfect story awesomeness!
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2009 00:03 EDT
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YAY!! finally!( i wish i could have read it the day you updated it) that lemon was awesome! i cant wait for more! whats next?
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2009 13:31 EDT
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okay let's high-five on the quote I love it. Love your lemon I knew she was going to give our resident badboy some lemon. I can't want till the next chapter. Oh, will Inuyasha make her his mate? Please update when you can.
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Reviewed By: moonlightsprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2009 08:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. make him beg for it. i like the shortinig of his name, ass. you are so funny i hope inu laearns not to try to mess with a woman's emotions, especially the one his beast loves. Oh 1 last thought, i love the cliffys!
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Title: OME!!!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2009 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OME! Thanks for dedicating the chapter to me!!! *sniff sniff* am touched!!!! (amazing awsome of you) OK! you had me jumping in my pants...I was like they're gonna do the monkey! They're finally going to do the monkey dance...and then BAM! No hankey pankey!! I was AWWWW!!!! Hahaha....you had me going thinking they were you sly coop! But its the suspensefulness and the way the chapters are that has me keep reading and wondering whats gonna happen to these two! I love the plumber quote! I wonder what the next one is going to be! Keep updating because am wondering what will happen next to the characters! It has me thinking of a few things! :) keep up the good writing! And thanks again for dedicating it to me! Your gonna make me a weepy female! lol
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2009 03:10 EDT
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haha amazing as always! perfect timing by the way!! you updated o my birthday!! i loved this chapter! soo hot,sexy and cute ^_^ i love the cuddling! and Inuyasha was more of a sweetheart in this chapter which i enjoyed! i cant wait for some more loving...and i wonder when are you going to write a lemon??? anyways keep on writing! lets see what you come up with next! oh and the plumber quote was cool...but the first on was better!
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2009 01:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the plumber's quote it was too funny. I see Kagome loves the badboy Inuyasha too just like all us girls do LOL. Don't let the glasses and the hair in the bun fool you she was enjoying the make out session just as much as Inuyasha. I'm glad she didn't purfiy him. But she did sorta put him in his place.....sorta, anyway great chapter. I can't till chapter 6. Have a safe and happy Labor Day :)
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Reviewed By: moonlightsprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 09:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! you are my number one fav author 4ever!!!! i'm starting to like the cliffys now! Horray!! Keep on with the >pink Awesome work
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