| "Before He Bites" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 01:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the thing about the plumber being a hero I was ROTFLMAO that was just way too :) Now on with the review: I love chapter 4. Inuyasha is an ass I and I hope Kagome purify his ass...Okay sorry. I love how you wrote Inuyasha you make the reader have a love hate relationship with him. Right now I hate him, let's hope Kagome can put him in his place. I like the intro. of Kough and Ayame. Will we meet Mirkou and Sango soon? Keep up the great work can't wait till chapter 5.
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Title: Thanks!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2009 21:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh and thank you for mentioning me in the your special people/reviewers colunm! I felt so special!!!!!! UPDATE!
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Title: OME!!!!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2009 21:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OME! How could you! Your so mean!!!! I was really expecting them to do some hankey pankey, the monkey in the class room, Boom boom in the classroom! But none the less it had me on my toes if they really were gonna get it on! It made me screech in disappointment when they didn't! But i love the chapter! It was really good! But damn that suspensful thing at the end! Hope you update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: moonlightsprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2009 11:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is sooooo awesome! why are the cliffhangers hurting my heart? i know why, because you, my firend, are a great author.
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2009 09:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story please update soon.
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2009 03:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY you updated! that was great,sexy too. i cant wait to read what happens next.i like Inuyasha but i wouldnt mind seeing Kagome humiliate him or even better make him jealous or something like that. oh and i felt so special for being mentioned on your update! *sniffle sniffle* kepp it up cause you have some talent ^_^
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Reviewed By: Reignashii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2009 08:08 EDT
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haha i like this story i hope you update soon x3 i look forward to the next chapter! i so wanna see what happens next!
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Title: HURRY!!!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2009 01:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Hurry up and update! Im like so excited to know what happens and if the do the monkey in school or not!!!!! Your story is really good and am inticipating what will happen next! So please hurry up and update!
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2009 02:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic! i loved it...i cant wait to read what happens next! and again you left me hanging...you are too cruel.
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2009 23:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good start. Looking foreward to next update.
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2009 01:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh hell no! you just seriously left me hanging!!! I WANT TO KNOW MORE DAMNIT!!! lol seriously though that was really good. sexy in the begining too. i cant wait to read more! please update soon! P.S: YAY! i am the first to review!!! wooohoooo! lol ^_^
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