| "Before He Bites" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 21:24 EDT
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Oh My God!! that was so fucking awesome!!!! i loved the update it was so good!all the flirting was awesome... i cant wait for more lemony goodness! i missed all your updates but i understandi really hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2009 19:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Mmm! Loving this fic! Haha. I love how there is sexual tension between our two lovebirds in the beginning. Also, I enjoyed the lemon you left us. (: Seems like you haven't updated in a while, but please update very soon!!!!!!!! Can't leave your loyal readers in suspension!!
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Title: OME!! YAY!!!!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2009 00:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OME!!!! You made my day!!!! am so glad they FINALLY did the hankey pankey!!!! WHOO HOO!!! but it also made me sad when kagome thought that thought that they were only gonna be together for that one night! But we all know better and that they're gonna have more nights and days and midafternoons like this!!!! Ome but i like the way you wrote the lemon!!!! Keep up the good work and please update soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: moonlightsprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2009 16:51 EDT
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OMG i'm so HAPPY they finally did it!! YAY!! what's next? 1 last thought, why did he have more than 1 condum in his pocet?!?!?!? Still loving the cliffys This is the perfect story awesomeness!
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2009 00:03 EDT
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YAY!! finally!( i wish i could have read it the day you updated it) that lemon was awesome! i cant wait for more! whats next?
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2009 13:31 EDT
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okay let's high-five on the quote I love it. Love your lemon I knew she was going to give our resident badboy some lemon. I can't want till the next chapter. Oh, will Inuyasha make her his mate? Please update when you can.
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Reviewed By: moonlightsprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2009 08:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. make him beg for it. i like the shortinig of his name, ass. you are so funny i hope inu laearns not to try to mess with a woman's emotions, especially the one his beast loves. Oh 1 last thought, i love the cliffys!
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Title: OME!!!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2009 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OME! Thanks for dedicating the chapter to me!!! *sniff sniff* am touched!!!! (amazing awsome of you) OK! you had me jumping in my pants...I was like they're gonna do the monkey! They're finally going to do the monkey dance...and then BAM! No hankey pankey!! I was AWWWW!!!! Hahaha....you had me going thinking they were you sly coop! But its the suspensefulness and the way the chapters are that has me keep reading and wondering whats gonna happen to these two! I love the plumber quote! I wonder what the next one is going to be! Keep updating because am wondering what will happen next to the characters! It has me thinking of a few things! :) keep up the good writing! And thanks again for dedicating it to me! Your gonna make me a weepy female! lol
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2009 03:10 EDT
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haha amazing as always! perfect timing by the way!! you updated o my birthday!! i loved this chapter! soo hot,sexy and cute ^_^ i love the cuddling! and Inuyasha was more of a sweetheart in this chapter which i enjoyed! i cant wait for some more loving...and i wonder when are you going to write a lemon??? anyways keep on writing! lets see what you come up with next! oh and the plumber quote was cool...but the first on was better!
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2009 01:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the plumber's quote it was too funny. I see Kagome loves the badboy Inuyasha too just like all us girls do LOL. Don't let the glasses and the hair in the bun fool you she was enjoying the make out session just as much as Inuyasha. I'm glad she didn't purfiy him. But she did sorta put him in his place.....sorta, anyway great chapter. I can't till chapter 6. Have a safe and happy Labor Day :)
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Reviewed By: moonlightsprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 09:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! you are my number one fav author 4ever!!!! i'm starting to like the cliffys now! Horray!! Keep on with the >pink Awesome work
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Reviewed By: Finbastard [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 03:05 EDT
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MOAR!!
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 02:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Keeps getting better and better. Can not wait for next update...
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 02:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My God!!!!!! i dont know weather i should love you or hate you...but since you did dedicate this chapter to me *blush* i will love you!!!(seriously thanks! i felt soo special!) i think this chapter was your best one and amazing! i was like squeeling throughout the whole thing. and i am REALLY glad that Kouga is interested in Ayame and Not Kagome!. ok so the Cliffy was sooo not cool but i guess i should used to that huh? and the Plumber Quote made my day! "A plumber is a person who is a hero, for who would want to deal with all this crap?"-Irish hahaha i am going to share that with everyone!! hehe anyways yay for the update! and i cant WAIT for the next chapter! seriously you have made me VERY HAPPY! *huge shit eating grin* i cant wait for your next update! keep up the good work because you have some major talent!~~from you #1 Fan ^_^ Mariposa Miko!
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Title: WHOO HOO!!!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 01:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright! That was the best chapter I think! I like the way you made inuyasha see that Kagome got hugged and all by Kouga! It made me laugh. But i wouldn't mind reading something that Kouga just burst inuyasha's bubble and interrupts his little get some monkey from Kagome! Even though Inuyasha is an a-hole...we still love him and hope that kagome can set his ass straight! Keep up the good writing!!! :)
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