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Title: Before He Bites.....
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2010 21:09 EDT
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Hey Irish, 3 months is a long time leaving Inu and Kag balanced on the edge of a fight of Epic Proportions, LOL, I'm patiently waiting to see what's going to happen next., and it's haunches, not hinges, a dog sits up on it's haunches, N-E-Way, I've been with you since the first chapter, and I can't wait to read the next. You've got a pretty good grasp of keeping the flow of the story smooth, I suggest that after you write the story, any words that look funny to you should get looked up in the Theasaurus. It will give you more choices of words with the same approx meaning. Practice makes perfect, you tell a good story, now it's time to tighten up your skills. Good luck and don't stop writing.
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Title: LOVED IT
Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2009 23:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually really like where this is going. Your grammer is alittle off but hey i understand. Very good story tho! I cant wait for the next chapter to be up!! I want to read it now lol
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Title: YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2009 04:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OME!!! YAY! you updated! I waited forever! But I really like this chapter a lot because of the action and the tension you can feel between kagome and inuyasha. And KIKNY-HOE!!! I was waitinf for Kagome to kick her skinny little anerixic slutty ass! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA! Now I cant wait for Inuyasha and Kagome to get the battle going and to see the king of action that goes on between them. YAY!!! Go Kagome and Inuyasha!!!! I'm waiting for your next update!
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2009 21:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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God your horrible!!!! I hate Cliffhangers!!! that was amazing by the way! i will be awaiting your next update :D
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Reviewed By: blackbutterfly15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2009 01:10 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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GAH! You and your cliffy endings!! Lol. I love it so far. I can not wait for the next chapter. I hope InuYasha and Kagome make up.
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2009 18:04 EST
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WOW! just wow! I got no other words! I freaking love this story though I was unsure of reading it because the summary isn't very attractive... I'm glad I changed my mind! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2009 09:32 EST
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Her calling him "Ass" kind of killed the lemon for me. Otherwise, I'm very curious how your plot will turn out.
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Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2009 03:41 EST
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Hey.......hurry up and update!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know I wrote a review already...but I read the story all together again and I still think its a good story!!! God I still Inuyasha is the dummy of the story for saying that to kagome it made me cry and I'm not afraid to admit it! i hope you hurry up because I really would like to know what happens!!! And I think that you should make a scene where Royoko and Genti try to ya know make the monkey with Kagome but then.....Dun dada dum....Inuyasha comes out and saves the day and does the monkey with Kagome or not.....but shows a side of Inuyasha that is gentle...his beast side!!! Or you can make a scene where Inuyasha stakes his claim on Kagome...not by doing the monkey but by marking her as his? Thats all I got so far...but I can't wait til you update again because I really want to know what happens with Inuyasha and Kagome. I also think there should a showdown between Kikyo and Kagome...and of course have Kagome kick her ass and Inuyasha has to come and take Kagome off Kinky-hoe! Or or!!! have like 3 men take Kagome off because shes like super strong....I dunno.....just giving ya ideas!!!! But please update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: henjin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2009 18:27 EST
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OMG! this story is getting juicy. UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: meganramirez13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2009 01:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely adore your story I hope that you make inuyasha beg kagome for forgiveness because the way you portray him is just amazing. Please update soon :)
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Reviewed By: moonlightsprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 21:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! THE 2 QUARRELING LOVERS HAVE ARRIVED~~~. I'm so pleased. you are rocking the fanfiction world!! YES i love your fanfiction and i know this will bug you a lot i have a friend whose an author, but please please please pretty please review. i know i sound like a 13 year old brat who is super spoiled, but this is getting so good, the monthly fixes aren't enough anymore. Oh and before I forget, i still love the openings ~_~ Moonlight's princess
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Title: OME!!!!``
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 21:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ome! this story made me cry and made me want to weep!!!! But that dumb inuyasha!!!!! I loved the story!!!!!!!!! Please hurry up and write the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ur like making me impatient!!!!!!!!! hurry!!!! But i loved the way you made inuyasha jelouse!!!!! because we all know he LURVS her!!!!!!!!!!! GO INU AND KAG FOREVA!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 05:22 EDT
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I don't like being overly critical so all i will say is that you have a lot of spelling errors.
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Title: Before He Bites
Reviewed By: Nabiki Tendo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2009 03:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanted to let you know how well written your story is and how much i am enjoying it. when i first started reading the first chapter i was not sure if i was going to like it much but this story has easily made its way into the list of my top 15 favorite inuyasha stories and i really hope you can add another chapter really soon. again i think this story is awesome. i just dont really like kikyo much so i am not really happy that shes in the story but if she gets dumped then i am happy. oh well you are the writer not me. lol well if you get a chance and an inclanation take a look at my story i am writing and let me know what you think please. cause that would help me a lot. well anyway love the story. nabiki tendo
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Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 22:23 EDT
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Loved the new chapter, but why did you add Royoku instead of Kouga? Is our little nerdy Kagome becoming a sexy, flirty feline with an unquenchable thirst for demon's butts? Haha.
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