| "Broken Fates" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Reviewed By: kag4inu On: December 24, 2010 17:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! Usually I stop reading a fanfic that doesn't pair Inuyasha and Kagome, but I was so intrigued that I couldn't stop reading!! And I'm glad! The song Fireworks by Katy perry seems like it fits well for Kagome's character, you should check it out =D |
Reviewed By: Angelica_Pierce [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2010 19:41 EST
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What about Sesshoumaru's message from Inuyasha? Did I miss that somewhere or is it still coming? |
Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2010 10:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Can't wait till the lemon!!!
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Reviewed By: kmn1829 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2010 15:16 EDT
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Omgggg I luvvvvv it. I've been waitin 4 ur updates lyk a coke addict lol (no I dnt do coke or any other drug). I cnt wait 4 ur nxt update I need 2 kno wat happens w| yash/kags,mir/san, nd ses/kagmom. Keep up the fantastic work.
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Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2010 23:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Miroku? lol wat he doing there?
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2010 20:38 EDT
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wait wait wait... sesshoumaru and kagome's mom? what... how... when...that's not fair at all... how can he be with kagomes mom and not her? that doesnt make any sence at all. at least with kagome shes a vindicated miko thus bringing some level of honor along with the shame, with her mom... what? she makes good rice balls? whatever... its your story... if you want to break your own rules... its whatever...
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2010 17:16 EDT
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What a wonderful chapter. I really love the idea of Sess and Kagome's mom. He needs love too! Wow, the supervisor turns out to be Miroku, how awesome is that!! I hope that Sango is paired up with him in this lifetime as well.
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Shiva_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2010 11:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story. You have had my attention ever since the beginning. Usually I just read the first chapter and if it doesn't capture my attention, I don't bother reading. You have pretty good spelling and grammar too, which is another thing I look for in stories. I am anxious to read the next chapter you have planned for this story, while I am a fan of Inu/Kag pairings, well in this case Yash/Kag pairing, I am quite fond of Miroku and Sango and can't wait to see how the interaction with their reincarnations works out. And I like that Sesshoumaru is seeking Kagome's Mother, it's different, and I think it works out. Great work on this fanfic and I expect to keep reading more! On another note, I feel compelled to draw Kagome punching that girl with KO at the top. This is probably the longest review I've given, so congrats on making me actually give a crap about what I write! Now, if you make Miroku's reincarnation grope Kagome very soon, I'll make a random fangirl scream in the middle of whereever I am when I read it. (I ain't joking, I will do it and I don't care who looks!) Anyway, great fic, keep writing and have a good day!
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2010 05:02 EDT
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HAHAAAAAAAAAAA AWESOME!!!! I was wondering when Miroku wud make an appearance
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2010 18:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY Kagome finally got some payback decking her oh man this just made my day. Does happy dance in head LMAO tahnks for a great fic" (^_^)
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2010 12:49 EDT
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Nice chapter. I had wanted to pair Sesshoumaru up with Kagome's mom in my first story, but decided to stick him with Kagura then made an original character for the mom...a descendant of Sesshoumaru's! ^_^ Thanks for pairing those two! Nice story. ^_^
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2010 11:21 EDT
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do include seshoumaru and aiko's courtship and some fluff pls
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2010 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG yes I love it Kagome's mom and Sesshoumaru I was hoping for that combo. the secret message from Inuyasha to Kagome.I love your story LOL thanks" (^_^) Your an awesome author
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2010 00:40 EDT
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I am so GLAD that you turned Sess's interest to Kag's mom. She is loving, understanding, wise, and not a child. She is the perfect foil for Sess in that she would have the ability to temper his life. He has done his duty for centurys, it's time he got a reward, and she is perfect. Bravo!
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2010 18:04 EDT
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A nice chapter and I think putting Sess and Kag's mom together is a good idea, I like the pairing.
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