| "Broken Fates" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2009 17:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww poor Sesshomaru. u should add a little fluff moment between them, not anything that could lead somewhere, just a little bit.
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2009 17:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I almost really wish this would go Sess/Kag, just because experience and heartache wise, those two are more equals than Yasha is... ah well. Poor Yasha, too. This is going great, I love all the angst...couples counseling is going to be the most awkward thing ever, can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2009 18:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel for kagome, but i also feel for Yasha, Poor babys! ^_^ lol
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Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2009 20:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww Im glad Kagome's opening up! ^_^
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Title: Fantastic!
Reviewed By: Seryna-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2009 02:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been a fan of yours for a while, and I have to say that I love this! Very angsty, and keeps me on pins and needles, and also with a touch of humor, exactly what i look for in a good story. I impatiently await the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2009 19:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! the flow is smooth-great!!
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Reviewed By: VuzeGo On: November 03, 2009 02:48 EST
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I'm intrigued to see how Shippo's and Yasha's relationship will develop from here! I'm really enjoying the direction the story is taking at the moment. It's still angsty but it feels like there is some real progress being made between Yasha and Kagome's relationship! I'm really looking forward to Kagome's next reaction to him now that she knows that he's been protecting her for so long. I await the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2009 00:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol! I forgot to rate the story! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2009 00:47 EDT
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Okay...it's good but Yasha is inuyashas reincarnation right? So he is Inuyasha. Reincarnation is when a person is born again and again the person is the same but they go through different experiences and choices so they turn out different then their previous lives. So Inuyasha wouldn't be telling yash anything. Those would be his memories from his previous life. And if they wished kikyo back she would still have only half the soul she started out with when she was brought back. So she would've went insane without kagome part of their soul as well. Another thing kagomes soul could be rejecting the part of her soul that she took back. Think about it like this: If you take someones kidney out of them and keep it alive (don't know how you could do that) then a year later you put the kidney back in...the bodey would reject it (without medication). Kagomes soul could be doing the same thing and in turn making her mentally unstable. And the shrink isn't helping her. Right now she needs to face the fact that she IS kikyo and kikyo is her after all they have the same soul. She needs to get away from everyone who would remind her of Inuyasha for a wile so she can think and at least get on with her life. Losing someone is very painfull and kagome needs time to heal! Her family, yasha, sesshoumaru and the stupid shrink has to understand this. Sometimes talking about it doesn't help but makes it much worse.
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Reviewed By: monkey star On: October 15, 2009 03:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this storys great.especially with how the manga glossed over it im glad to see someone finally diving into how weak selfish and pathetic inuyasha and kikyo really were.i remember thinking at the end of the manga ''dang!she deserves better than him ''ive been uncomfortable with the whole notion of ''fate'' too.its nice to see kagome get the love she deserves in your story.
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Reviewed By: monkey star On: October 15, 2009 03:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this storys great.especially with how the manga glossed over it im glad to see someone finally diving into how weak selfish and pathetic inuyasha and kikyo really were.(esp inuyasha).at the end i remember thinking''dang kagome deserves better than him''.so im glad to see kagome get the love that she deserves.
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Title: Tangled Webs
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2009 23:41 EDT
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You wrote this chapter while fighting a couple of serious infections? Every update you impress me more. I imagine that writing a fic this involved would be like trying to drive a team of six unbroken horses. Tough doesn't even begin to describe it, and you are doing it with muddled thoughts. You go girl. Untangling this mess will be a challange. It's a good thing that Mika is Sess's daughter. That bloodline doesn't know how to quit, and high intelligence is a given. She's gonna need all of it as well as the fabled control Sess has always displayed to get Kagome & Yash through this. My heart goes out to all of them. So, no jewel, I guess, and the soul, sundered but together. You take your time...get healthy, take as long as you want, I will still be waiting.
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Title: hurry up
Reviewed By: inukag21 On: October 13, 2009 17:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurry up and write the next chapter!! I am dying to see how the story turns out!!
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2009 00:26 EDT
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Hmmm... I wonder why everyone (sans Kagome) still has so much faith in the Gods. I mean, they're Gods, if they want something to go a certain way they could make it happen. And this is definately not going the way it's planned. I know I'd be questioning what Kaede said by now. I wonder why Inuyasha just went along with that so easily, anyways... Since he did love Kagome, and all. We all know he's selfish enough to keep her with him. Anyways, I can't wait to see if Inuyasha's POV does, indeed, get revealed and clear all this up.
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2009 22:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww....you know, I'm usually an Inu/Kag fan, but if this fic had gone Sess/Kag, I wouldn't have minded so much, you know? Anyway, this is getting great, I can really feel the emotional roller coaster. Keep up the great work!
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