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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2010 20:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Kami...wow! Two bad Naraku didn't blab enough for Kagome to put two and two together, so she could at least try to contact someone over at the Youkai headquarters with that land line number Inuyasha gave her way back when. Stupid Jii-chan! How could he give her something that important knowing she has no idea what it is! Argh! But I really love this story, and just like a few other people have said, it almost *hurts* to stop reading it, 'cause I'm just so into it I want to keep reading more and more and more until I read all the way through the entire story. Hurry up and write the rest of it already! LOL. But I know you can't rush genius. Hurry up, to the best of your ability! :-)
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2010 18:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope that this doesn't sound to weird but after reading today's chapter I couldn't think of anything else to say, hopefully you'll take it for the complement it is. There are just a few people that I read from that sometimes it can seem like torture while I'm reading a chapter, but not because its bad. Its like torture because its SO good. So good that sometimes, like right now, it is almost painful to have to stop reading. And seeing as I am completely addicted to this story, and have been probably from half way into the first chapter, I'll be sitting here waiting for more. No matter how much I whine about cliffhangers, they really are the best.
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Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2010 16:56 EST
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Eep! The plot thickens! Thank you for another chapter!
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2010 21:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fantastic chapter. I can't get enough. I love Inuyasha and Kagomes relationship. You've done an exceptional job... Looking foward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2010 11:47 EST
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You're an AMAZING writer. I hope you know that.
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Title: Good chapter
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2010 21:07 EST
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This chapter was very good. Loved the strain between Kagome and her friend. Loved the way she and Naraku interacted. Loved the way she double checked the prize money. (Can you tell I liked it?)
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Reviewed By: theknightcallsmyname [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2010 14:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just found your story and I absolutely love it! I was wondering when the shikon no tama would appear...I like how Kagome's grandfather referred to her being its keeper again, showing insight and knowledge that he never had in the manga or anime. That was neat. I also like how Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship has progressed without going too far too soon. I'm also liking the whole Youkai Gang scenario and I can't wait for Kagome to find out who and what Inuyasha really is. You have an excellent story and I hope you continue it until it is finished. Good work!
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2010 00:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter that keeps me on the edge of my seat for more!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2010 23:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Figures she didn't get the care package until after Inuyasha made the decision to stay away for a little while. Then again, he will still be seeing her, she just won't know it's him. Way to leave out important information, Grandpa! You are tossing in all sorts of information, though, like that quick bit about Kagome having experience with archery. Somehow, I have a feeling that that'll be coming in very handy. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2010 19:44 EST
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Ooooh this is exciting. I wonder what's going to happen when Kagome meets the brothers at the ceremony. The set up is apparent, however, the common themes were slipped in so seamlessly. Good job and good luck on your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2010 17:50 EST
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Thanks for another round. Your writing is enjoyable and things are getting interesting! I guess we all know who Kagewaki is, it's too bad that poor Kagome doesn't know--she's in big trouble now, especially with the Shikon no Tama around her neck. And with Inuyasha trying to stay away, for some reason I am fairly certain that Naraku will be making an appearance soon enough. It's too bad that Inuyasha didn't fess up about Kikyo, I have a very bad feeling that Naraku will be cuing her in instead. As always, keep writing...
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2009 19:38 EST
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Though your summary didn't really draw my attention all that much, I needed something to read and...wow! I'm glad I clicked in. This story is great. It's modern, yet the characters have kept their youkai traits. I like that they are so much older and mature as well. Your writing is fluid and you pay great attention to detail, and not in a boring manner. It's as though the story is constantly moving without becoming stagnant. And, I am so thrilled to be able to read something without constantly having to ignore errors that make me want to wring an author's neck. LOL Awesome job! i've put your story on my favorites list. ^_^
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Title: Ch. 5
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2009 14:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I like that Hoko is a good friend and the way she witnessed Inuyasha in action. Your Kagome is a strong character (if just a touch schizo with her feelings- I mean that in a good way.) I do hope you deal with her learning the secret relatively soon. She's too smart to keep thinking he's in a costume or surgically altered. Of course, the "reality" is a stretch for such a smart girl as well, but if there's a way to make it work, you will.
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Reviewed By: M.K.M. On: December 05, 2009 03:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing. Simply amazing. I haven't found a well-written, enjoyable story such as this for many years. I admire every aspect of this story, and simply cannot wait for more! (Finished reading all your up-dated chapters last night and came back to review I loved it so much) Thank you for sharing.
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2009 12:37 EST
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I love the plot line of your story. It is so creative and the way you combined traditional and AU is seamless. I love this style of writing in general and am always pleased to see it done in inventive ways. Poor girl, I never took "Dog shit" at it's literal meaning, but when applied to someone other than Inuyasha...hahaha. First sesshoumaru and now kouga. It's enough to make a person really self conscious. Good luck with your next chapter.
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