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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2009 19:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh calm before the storm!! I have a feeling she's going to out of the dark so to speak soon, so exciting!
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2009 19:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grreeatt update, things are definitely getting interesting and I am ever curious as to how everything is connected so Update soon =]
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2009 22:44 EST
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This is absolutely lovely. I tend to not read fan fiction until the stories are complete, but since I enjoyed your last one-shot so much--I decided that I would go ahead and read this before it ended and it is captivating. I love the slow tender love affair that pulls at your heartstrings. I love the hints of unspoken action, fights and gore. And I really love the alterego! I am a BIG fan of alterego stories and this one is no exception. Please keep on writing. You have fan. Also, I agree with another one of your reviewers, you need to change your summary. Give it a little re-write with a marketing angle. Take out the quote and just give a capsule-sized summary. Thanks for the fun ride so far.
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Reviewed By: chino-chan inulover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 15:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's absolutely impossible to stop reading this! i've tried, but i couldn't and skipped dinner to finish it. i'm absolutely waiting for a continuation, and i have to say again that this is one of the more interesting enthralling storied that I've ever read and i'm waiting for the unravelling of this all. Hugs ! Chino
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Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2009 08:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this. The pacing is terrific. Kagome's rational and somewhat self deluding mind is consistent and believable. (I've been there on the self deluding part. My Sweetie was invited into my bed with a "But no sex" warning from me that was followed with platonic spooning until the gentle touches got just a bit too exciting. 21 years of sharing a bed later... I'm glad I changed my mind.) Inuyasha stays true to the character. I love all the "superhero" stuff and him telling her he's a youkai despite her not believing. He's trying to be upfront with her and I like that. The mysteries are becoming clearer. Kanna's appearance was cheered by me. I hope we see some other characters now and then. Laughed at Sesshoumaru's perfume comment. Nicely worked.
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: November 07, 2009 12:08 EST
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OMG! you updated! and CONGRATES yout totaly deserve it! im so happy this story always seems to bring me in the best of moods XD. the romance is so beautiful, i just fall in love with inuyasha all over again, well more then usal ;, i can't wait for the next chapter im so excited. XD and again congrats!
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Reviewed By: bbbelana On: November 07, 2009 12:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I love it. It is maybe a little fast in the beginning but it will still be great! Love to see your next chapters about Iy double life etc. :-)
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2009 10:10 EST
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YESS a ton of congratulations, you well deserve that award, update soon =]]
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Title: Congrats
Reviewed By: nameless04 On: November 07, 2009 00:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONGRATULATIONS on your nomination by the for Best AU/AR(I read lyiint's review). You totally deserve it!!! I've been a fan of this story from chapter 1 and I admit that I always await updates with bated breath.Congrats again....
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2009 22:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE THIS STORY... u can expect to see plenty of my reviews in the future... one thing though, you tend to use the term "young woman" quite often ;]
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Title: WOOHOO!! I only had to wait a day!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2009 19:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She sure doesn't want to believe what she's been told. I wonder how long before she realizes. Maybe when she gets nabbed by the incredibly evil spider-man (lol). I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2009 17:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh, I'm hooked! I can't wait for more.
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Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: lyiint [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 09:58 EDT
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Congratulations! Your story, Hidden Identities, has been nominated by the Inuyasha FanGuild for Best AU/AR for the Third Quarter of 2009. If you would like to track the progress of your story through the voting process, or simply find out more about the IYFG and perhaps join yourself, you can find everything you need to know on our website: www.inuyashafanguild.com (Inuyasha Fan Guild dot com) If you have any other questions, don't hesitate to contact our moderators at IYFGModerator@gmail.com (IYFG Moderator at g mail dot com). Congratulations again! -- IYFG Beta Group - lyiint ^^
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Reviewed By: taixi On: October 18, 2009 16:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is surprisingly good. I say "surprisingly" b/c I was turned off by the summary a few times before I eventually decided to give it a read - I almost didn't read the story at all, although now I'm glad I took a chance. You might want to consider revising the summary (instead of a small excerpt from the first chapter re: how Kagome found inuyasha, you might give readers a general idea of the setting for the story. I personally find that usually when a summary just takes a sentence or two from the story this is either laziness on the part of the author or there is truly nothing interesting to say about the story.) I doubt I'm the only person to have been turned off by the summary, but your story is well written and has a clever premise so I'm sure others would love to find this little gem as well.
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Title: Outstanding
Reviewed By: nameless04 On: October 18, 2009 13:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? I'm definitely in love your story and your writting style:D The characters seem so real and Inuyasha and Kagome are just too cute together. I love the comment Sesshomaru made about Kagome's 'scent'. It made me laugh:P Anyway you've definitely made a fan of me and I look forward to the future chapters.
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