| "Forever Caged" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Panthea's Rose On: October 04, 2013 21:12 EDT
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This fic is very well written and I enjoyed reading it. I look forward to the next update. Keep up the good work! |
Title: **Author's Comment**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2010 22:27 EDT
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LOl with how short that little side chapter was it was bond to be a little cheesy hehehe. As for the boys it'll be fun once i get them back on Amoi:) and that is coming very soon.
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Title: I hate being sick :(
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: September 24, 2010 23:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that made my head spin! The side story was really cute and made me laugh (I thought it was kinda cheesy, but in that good fun way lol!) And the whole thing with Riki was just as I predicted! I wonder if the boys will eventually be allowed to play "war" with Gidion after they get back :p The blondie would probibly cream himself XD (Suduction tactics allowed ;D )There are just too many fun possibilities, but for now it's to the plot! Can't wait for the next one hun! Till then! ~Passsing Reader
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Title: **Author's Comment**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2010 02:05 EDT
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Hehehe happy you like it. Niko is fun to write and as for Riki...yeah...he'll have to fight to be heard when Iason gets his hand back on him. I put up a short side chapter! hope you like it!
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: September 16, 2010 20:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If it was even possible Niko's scenes just got more exciting! "-as he grabbed a random shirt from a hanger and wiped his hand on it then hunted for a pair of pants-" I about DIED when I read this hahahah!!! It STILL cracks me up XD I wanna see the scene where he puts on that shirt-and then goes to work :'D Priceless! I wonder if Riki will even get a word in edge wise when he comes back or if it will all end up being like when he first started living with Iason? Your story makes all their relationships fun and exciting and I find that while I have my favorites, that I still like reading ALL of them :D College exams have been rough on me, yesterday and today pluse I got 2 more coming up next week so I gots to cut this a little short ^^; Wonder wonderful WONDERFUL chapter hun, as usual! In all it's unbetaed glory lol Till next time!!! ~Passing Reader
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Title: **Author's Comment**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2010 00:28 EDT
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LOL happy you liked it:D Niko's scene was fun to write. Niko himself is fun to write about. As for the dream...i think i should have made it a little clearer lol i lot of people got confused so to make it clear Riki's not preggy and wont be preggin in this ff lol. That queen really does need to scratch her itch.hhehe
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: August 28, 2010 12:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I saw Neko's name I started giggleing b/c I knew what was coming lol XD Then we switched to Riki and I was like "This is a mpreg? That's kinda cool, but I didn't see it in the warnings-" For a full 5 min I sat there thinking about it before I realized it was a dream :p I'm such a goob ^^; I really enjoyed this chapter (as always ;D ) and I wanna see mooore (as usual lol) The queen from that planet who wants Riki needs to get laid, she's kinda freaky lol (I'll give up my planet for THAT stud) Riki must be like a super knock out geez haha. Till next time hun! ~Passing Reader
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Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2010 00:34 EDT
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Oh boy i'm going to have some probems when they get back. I cant really skip their POV when they get back...meh it'll work out some how LOL.
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: August 22, 2010 14:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do, I do lol! I have a feeling Riki's rebirth is going to be really troublesome for him ^^; I never would have guessed that Lilly was in love with his master! That came as a big shock, and owie on that bite *cringe* I havta wonder how all these blondies are going to react when these boys finally get home? You might have to dedicate a chapter to each one lol ;p I look forward to it XD Another great chapter hun, see ya next time!
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Title: **Author's Comment**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2010 03:56 EDT
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Hey chicky welcome back. Happy you like Niko. I was worried about introducing him but this new pair seems to be getting great feed back so i'm happy. Hope you like this new chapter!
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: August 17, 2010 12:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here's another review to make up for the chapter I missed since I adore this story so much! Now I should be all caught up lol (Insert fangirl sqwees and rambling) :D
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: August 17, 2010 12:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh I'm so late! Sorry hun! I've been trying to get time to read this but life decided to get in the way ^^; So we finally found out about Lilly, and some other dude from the frozen tundra wants Riki! So exciting! XD I adore Fidget and I LOVE Niko! I actually want more Niko time even though I also want the plot to progress. It makes me indecisive :p Blue hair *giggle* and did that blodie run out of his apartment in only a towl? XD I'm so glad I finally got to read this and can't wait for more, I'm also glad there are " marks around the dots now lol Until next time hun! ~Passing Reader
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Title: **Author's note**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2010 01:06 EDT
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Ohhh your right! it did need those "..." correction made! Yay hahha. humm...you know maybe i should have given Katze some rest before having Raoul jumped him but then again how much more rest did he need ;p I will be revealing all of Lilly's past while he's away from his blondie so that when its time to go back to Amoi everyone knows the why's of how he became the way he is and got in the position of being a pet. See ya next time! SH
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: July 27, 2010 15:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All the pieces are coming together, I thought Kaze's wake up party was hilarious! Right after his rebirth he gets jumped lol, pricless :3 Riki and Iason's phone conversation at the end needed "..." between to show that Riki wasn't saying anything. I sat their for a whole minute wondering why Riki was asking who it was when he's the one that called :p I did eventually get it though ^^; Anywho, will it be explaned later why Lilly's gotta get his "groove" on? (yes i said it XD ) ~Passing Reader
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Title: **Author's note**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2010 00:17 EDT
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Hehe i had wondered if the beginning would confuse anyone and it looks like it did lol with as much stuff thats going on and going to go on i wanted to get some of his history in hehe before they go back ahhh so much to do. Ahh well i'm up for it :) See ya next time! SH
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