| "Forever Caged" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: July 19, 2010 15:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap, I thought I was reading the wrong story, I had to check several times before I finally realized it was a flash back of Lilly lol I think my favorite part was "I lost my boobs" XD I about died!!! lol Priceless :D Thanks for the chapter hun, I can't wait for our boys to be broght back, Until then! ~Passing Reader
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Title: **Author's note**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2010 00:00 EDT
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everyone loves a little cosplay lol. Oh and i forgot to answer your question from the last view. Lilly has dark brown hair with large blonde streaking in it. hehe Niko i love his attitude. see ya next time! SH
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: July 12, 2010 10:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, who knew Niko had such a mouth?! I loved it! XD So now we can add crossdressing and mobs of horny women to our yaoi haha, defenatly a fun fun fun chappter to read! I gotta get ready for work so this isn't as long as I'd like it to be but thanks again hun! ~Passing Reader
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Title: **Author's note**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2010 21:35 EDT
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Yay! Happy you like it and yes if you see any errors please let me know hehehe as for the end...ya i kinda started to get tired and lazy lol sorry you got confused on the Marcus and Aisha part. That was the longest chappy i ever wrote >.< it hurt my brain. Hope you like this one! SH
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: July 09, 2010 00:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't like this. I LOVED IT!!! XD Longest chapter ever! (I think) It felt long anyway, and I just can't belive how it all worked out! What color is lilly's hair? I started to wonder that when he cut it off and cant remember if you mentioned it ^^; I kept seeing it as blond (which is now very obviouse to me that its not, im a moron that way pardon me lol) We are also back to Jupiter being the good/bad guy debait here :p Over all I just loved this chapter, totally worth the wait! I will say that I did see a few typoes which I didn't mind, took me a sec to figure out what you were trying to say, but not difficult to understand (we all have em :P) I don't know if you want people pointing them out so you can fix them or if you just plan on leaving it and/or fixing it all at the end of the story but I thought id mention it cauz the scene with the blodies (Marcus and something with an A) who are fighting over Figet and Sky in this chapter was a little hard to understand b/c I didn't even know they were there until I put the pices together on who the hell they were lol Still, a VERY loveley chapter hun, I cant wait to see more! Until then!! ~Passing Reader
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Title: **Author's note**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2010 04:49 EDT
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Waahhh sorry for the late post. hope you like this one! hehe yeah i thought it would be funny to have V be the one that was the "do as i say not as i do" person in the group lol!! hope you like this one! SH
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 22, 2010 10:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So great minds think alike lolz ;D I love how V tells everyone to lay off the blondies and then proceeds to nose dive head first into one haha! I really wanna see whats going on, is this some elabeerate plan of Jupiters to get all the boyos together for reasearchy purposses? (dont mind my spelling, work crap is crampin my style D': ) I can't wait to see more, go team blondies!!! >XD
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Title: **Author's note**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2010 02:52 EDT
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Everyday is mother hen day with my computer. It's bee through so much...it wont last much long i fear *cry*"thank you baby jesus" was exactly what i was thinking lol! awesomeness :D More Blondie and MOngrel action in the next chapter! See ya next time. SH
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 15, 2010 10:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I'm sure I could find them if I tried hard enough, but my computer just got done being sick, and im in that mother hen mode haha Now I'm stuck on Violet+hot blondie action XD I just about died when he was praying and I could just SEE his FACE! When the scanner boobed out his fake name XD Some where along the lines of "Thank you baby Jesus!" rofl :'D Gah, Im such a nerd lol I likes it and can't wait to see more! Until next time!!! ~Passing Reader
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Title: **Author's Comment**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 02:27 EDT
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hehe i keep thinking of the novel(btw i know where you can read all 6 online cant post site here tho) and i have a bad problem of changing a little thing that continues the story...i dont see an ending atm.
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 06, 2010 15:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was thinking back to the origional story when referring to Riki being raped, and I thought Lilly was with how the chapter lead off ^^; HUGE plot twist here, I didn't even see it coming! I thought we were close to the end lol :p I likes Figet+Hot Blondie action, that boy will have him crawling to him with just a look XD I love it! Haha! I expect the next chapter to be the rescue mission ;p I hope this dosn't all end in tragity...again! Gah! Can't wait for the next chapter hun! Passing Reader out!
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Title: **Author's Comment**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2010 00:42 EDT
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Awwee come on you cant really say Riki was raped in the beginning it as more punishment then anything else and Iason was going to leave but Riki wouldnt let him hehe. Lilly didnt get raped...well cant get raped because his Blondie takes "downers" LOL so he's incapable of doing the deed. Katze was more reluctant then anything else and ya a little force was used but he had a good time. So in my mind the only one raped was Jade. poor kid. Fidget + Hot Blondie in next Chappy!
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Reviewed By: Passing Readre On: June 03, 2010 11:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude what is it with blondies and rape? Riki was (in the begining) raped, Lilly, Jade, was Katz unwilling too? I think he was just surprized lol *scratches head* Im sunburnt D: Happy to see another chapter up and will wait for my fidget+hot blondie action that was promised lol *sing song* Katz got busted! rofl *continues sing song* And Alex is gonna die! lol :P Cant wait for more, Passing Reader out! XD
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Title: **Author's Comment**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2010 05:50 EDT
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I swear Fidget+ HOt Blondie action will be coming up! hehehe. Its cold still here >.< its June and its still raining!! grrr but then again its better then having it be 106+ like last year ;p Any way promise hot blondie action with F will be soon :D
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 30, 2010 18:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I worked 11 to 2pm on my old shift and had plenty of time to go to college, I miss it terribly ^^; im working 5 to close mostly but ive been pulling doubles and keep getting called in on my day off, which just makes me angry! Grrr, I have plans dammit! Anywho, im a wimp i know :P Still want figet+hot blodie action lol I feel terrible for Lilly, and like the ever sexy clever v! Can't wait for more, congrats on another wonderful chappie!!! XD I'm gonna go take a cold shower, this heat wave is killlling meeee *dies* ~Passing Reader
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