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Title: **Author's Comment**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2010 22:59 EDT
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...i wanna work in the noon *cry* atm i gotta go to work at 6am and i get off at 5. i feel like killing someone being forced to wake up that early >.
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 27, 2010 00:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fidget+hot blodie all the way! XD Can't remeber his name :p Too tired to look, working the close shift suuuuucks *cries* I want my noon hours back neepht! Lovely chapter, I like how Raoul saves Katz lol Run away!!! XD Cant wait to see more, lights out for me ;)
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Title: **Author's Comment**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2010 23:41 EDT
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omg i hear ya about work >.< I have to put in over time so wont be putting up two chappies per week for a while.***Jupiter? she not good but she's not bad, but then again the humans she has killed would think she's evil*** more info to come lol cant give away the plot that just like having an annoying person talking behind you in the movie theater thats already seen the flick telling the person loudly next to him whats happening before it happens or someone telling you the ending to a book you wanted to read :D more info to come though :D Thanks! SH
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 17, 2010 23:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Work interfers with my reading time, gaah! I like, figet i think?, that blondoe didn't know what hit him lol XD So Jupiter is not a bad guy? It's so confusing, I want the last of the plot aaahhhggg!!!! Your unpredictable, be proud lolz, nice chappie, cant wait to see more! sorry im so late (work sucks and im tired, got more hours :P )~Passing Reader
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Title: **Author's Comment**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2010 22:34 EDT
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Yay! I'm happy you liked it hehe.In every story i've read (and i'm still reading) i've never seen Guy kick the bucket so i thought why not lol. And having Riki do it was sad but again i figured no one would see it coming :D i need to go back and fix some in-corrections i saw (posted at 6 in the morning) but i was happy with it. Now on to the next set up! Thanks again! SH
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Title: Omg
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 10, 2010 23:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So at the begining of this chapter I was some where along the lines of "Omg that's hot *drool*" and if my face was not already lobster red from sun burn, it would have been lol Then we get to guy...who died...I CAN'T BELIEVE I F*CKEN CRIED!!! D: I though I'd be happy he was gone, crazy mother fucker, but gaaah, Im such a sap! You did that on purpose! I blame you, it's all your fault lolz, im equal parts relived and teary over it. Jeez! :P So all that's left is Jupitor and the to boy slavos ne, much excitment, and recovery ime ^__^ I cant wait! Till the, and thx for the extra long chapter! I think th pov came out great, even if you were sleepy lol (so am I ^^;) ~Passing Reader
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Title: **Author's Comment**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2010 09:58 EDT
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Ahhhh my brain...to many pov's in this chapter. but its my fault for making the last chapter the way it was all but forcing me to write this chapter like this...i'm sleepy too...
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 05, 2010 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am I seeing a hostile take over in the making here? Me thinks so, cuz how else can this end?...neatly anyway haha ^^; I'm sorry for being terribly late, I havn't had much energy between the doctor, work and college crap so my energy has run dry and I've been sleeping more ^^; I still hate Guy, I love Raoul and Riki fun time, and I want Katz to become a dinner plate *wiggles eyebrows* XD A fun chapter I can wait for more! Toodles! ~Passing Reader
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Title: **Author's Comment**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2010 20:30 EDT
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next one is now up :D more is unveiled *gasp* :O but will it lead to more ?? probably *boo* lol. Hope you like this one SH
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 30, 2010 00:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And yes I will read the deleted scene! lol I almost missed that ^^;
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 30, 2010 00:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a bad person, I go and read this in the morningthen after I get done with work I forget to review *bashes head in* Gaah! So we're getting some where! we now know who subject 3 is! Who-zaa! A little of the mystory has been revealed...sorta. I still only have a sliver of an idea of whats going on =p Scientifically anyway, Guy is a pretty open book after all this haha. Don't know how he intends to get Riki without killing him with it (or does that matter, cuz we all know he didn't have to be in one piece last time lol ) X3 Enjoyably fustrating due to me not being able to crack the plot haha, pardon mt prelling and grammer errors, It's late and I'm really sleepy ^^; Here's waiting for the next chapter! ~Passing Reader
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Title: **Author's Comment**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2010 20:28 EDT
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hehehe i do so love my secrets :D FYI due to the many disappointed messages about not having the Raoul Katze scene of when Raoul tied Katze to the bed i posted that scene (deleted from chappy 15) only on FF and my LJ if your interested in reading it. Happy you enjoyed this on -SH
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 25, 2010 16:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was totally off the mark! Gaahh! I can't belive I didn't think of Guy!!! Jeez, but then I didn't think of how they could get in there either, you did a good job covering that up lol. I've become addicted to Katz and Raul, they're my new favorites! But I did enjoy Iason's tender, break-your-fingers possesive moments XD I resent Guy still, (Come on he UNMANED him!!!) and am just waiting for reality to click in that crazy little head of his. (It's a love to hate thing lol) I can't wait to read more of this, gotta go soon so I'm sorry it's a little short, but Im really looking forward to next time! ~Passing Reader
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Title: **Author's Comment**
Reviewed By: Savagehunger47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 22:56 EDT
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HAHAHA ya i feel you on the sleep thing i could use some;p Now as for Lilly and Mikhale i will have more about them but they dont have a very big part in all this. This was merely and "I how do you do" kinda chapter to let you get to know him a little bit better. His Master knows everything to know about his pet thus the reason why his master always has him watched** who took the pictures is coming up in the next chapter :)and i'm hoping i can fit in more of Jupiter and the secrets she is keeping...problem is i cant find a good place to put them in *sigh* well i'll just make it fit like i do with my favorite pair of jeans ;p Thanks for reading! SH
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 20, 2010 19:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, Im so drowsy today! I read the new chapter this morning and had to wait till after work to review =P It's one of those days where I could have slept away. Anyhow, Im sorry if this is a bit scatter brained on my part, Im half asleep now and attempting to type with my eyes closed lol I was, however, alert enough this morning to register that I liked this chapter and Im sad Katz had to miss the party =p I wanna jump in and save Lilly from the big bad blondie, even thoguh he confuzzles me *laughs* Riki is still Riki, and Iason cracks me up. Gotts ta wonder if the reporter/photographer is going to be burnt to a crisp though, cuz if his intentions are to take the photos to Jupitor, who should know and or at least have a hint of what's going on between her kids and their pets as you have eluded-aluded (however u spell it gaahh!) to, than wouldn't she wanna keep it under wraps? ...Im so very very, ...not confused, but ..nphhht...I can't find the word but I wanna know just what the heck! I can safley say you keep me guessing and there's never a dull moment haha! Which is good and I like it, just not when Im left hangen lol! Again sorry bout all the grammer errors in this and my inability to stay awake *dies* I really can't wait for the next chapter, so here's me dozing out! =D ~Passing Reader
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