| "Of The Fallen" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Title: Still revising?
Reviewed By: Aztecalum2006 On: July 17, 2012 23:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I believe I read the original iteration of this story (which I thoroughly enjoyed btw) and I'm pleased you also feel it warranted more luvin'! Since you are only 2 chapters into the re-write there isn't much to comment on re: specific likes/ dislikes. I'm just hopeful that although it's beena while since you posted that you haven't given up entirely. Keeping fingers hopefully crossed.... :) |
Title: More please!
Reviewed By: SDGal82 On: May 26, 2012 16:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Story is sort of familiar but this feels true to character and is well-written. I can tell the author took time to develop a good plot line - and I am grateful for the good grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc! Looking forward to reading more! |
Reviewed By: InuxKag fan On: April 23, 2012 18:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! |
Reviewed By: Tory [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2012 18:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please, please hurry and update! I've been waiting so long for this story to be finished and then you're going to re-do it? LOL! I still love this, but please hurry and get back to where you left off and THEN add some. I absolutely love this story! |
Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: twistedf8 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2012 10:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated even though its just a revision of the story I'm glad you're not giving up on it. I hope you do fall back in love with this story because I know I certaintly loved the old draft and will probably love the new one too. Can't wait to see more :) |
Title: I'm Glad
Reviewed By: Paty On: March 03, 2012 10:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad that so far is the same story. I loved the old story, been waiting for while for an update. I really understand the need to fall back in love with it.. but I'm glad it won't change much the beginning as I love the chemistry developed between Kagome and Inuyasha. I'll have to wait for Kagome's reply to Inuyasha's secret a little bit more thou. Hopefully not too much, right? Tks, Paty |
Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2012 03:16 EST
Comment/Review:
I liked the old version of this story just fine, but I understand needing to fall back in love with a plot. So good luck and I'll be excited to see which way you decide to take this story. |
Title: can't read!!!
Reviewed By: Patricia_loras [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2012 15:26 EST
Comment/Review:
What happened?!?!?! There's no chap loaded on MM? Is it a bug from MM or did you remove it? I was sooo looking forward to the next chap. This fic is great has so much potential. Pls upload them again! Can I read it or follow your stories somewhere else? Thanks Patty |
Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Manda Panda On: February 28, 2012 09:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad that you're not going to give up on your story! It had such potential, and it kills me when really talented writers start a story and then disappear... Can't wait to read the rest of the revised chapters! I'm sure it'll be even better than the originals :) |
Reviewed By: too-lazy-to-log-in On: February 27, 2012 22:51 EST
Comment/Review:
You've got some major formatting problems. I'm sure it is MM's fault, but I would highly recommend that you find a way to fix the giant paragraph problem. |
Reviewed By: 3lue 3utterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2011 23:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this, hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2011 21:20 EST
Comment/Review:
I see that you have updated. ^^ Thank you so much for writing this chapter. It was a wonderful one, I, especially, like the part where Inuyasha "proved" to Kagome, of what is his kind. Lol. Anyways, I wish you well on your national test on becoming a pharmacy technician. xD |
Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: November 18, 2011 13:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't remember my password so this is not going to be signed. Anyway; I love this story and the concept, it's very intriguing. Now don't stress out too much about your exam. I just passed the VTNE in July to become a Certified Veterinary Technician and the best thing was to not let myself get stressed out. If you get stressed then you will second guess yourself. I am sure you will do just fine. Just study for about 2 days straight then just relax and have a drink. If you've been studying well so far then you don't have to worry. Now go pass the damn exam so you can update ASAP ok!!! |
Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: November 17, 2011 20:10 EST
Comment/Review:
CHAPTER 11!!! This story freakin rocks...sure it was a long wait but it was worth it. Waiting for chapter 12. |
Reviewed By: Kateyez8690 On: November 17, 2011 08:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just out of curiosity, in chapter 4 did you realize that even though Inu told Kagome he didn't have parents, after his question about Souta liking soccer, she asked, “Do you have anything like that with your father?” Just figured you might want to fix it.. |
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