| "Of The Fallen" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Title: College Daze
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2010 14:51 EDT
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Yeah for gracious house guests and for surprise meetings. Where will they go from here? Maybe out?
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Reviewed By: AnotherSongstress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2010 00:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a great story, can't wait for your next update :)
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Reviewed By: Glily On: July 28, 2010 00:53 EDT
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I am loving your story so far and would be delighted to beta for you! :-) My email is goldenlily35@gmail.com if you want to send me a message to discuss it.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2010 23:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful update. I realized almost right away that it was Miroku (and I'm assuming Sango at the desk?) even before he introduced himself, but I was not expecting Inuyasha to show up. Kagome was already putting the pieces together, but I figured it would probably take a little longer for him to realize that she was there. Then again, she was only visiting, and might not have gotten in. Don't think that'll be a problem now! Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: July 27, 2010 22:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: July 27, 2010 12:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAHHHH! cliffhanger :P! but im so glad you updated, and i really like this story, so heres a deal. every update gets a review hehe even if you post two chapters i'll review each one :P. anyway keep up the good work, i cant WAIT for the next one XD secret35
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Reviewed By: Kirara_Cutie316 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2010 10:58 EDT
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omg i love it! i love the plot and how easily you get everything to flow. but whyyyyy a cliff hanger. lol pleaaaase update soon. :)
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Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2010 10:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love this story!!! keep up the good work!
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Title: Keep Dancing
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2010 21:21 EDT
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Hm, a major twist coming up? I would've sworn the ofuda attack would've brought out the ears, but it was worth it for Grandfather to have to apologize and Inuyasha to need a haircut! The sexy teasing between Kagome and Inuyasha is also great. Did the imagined scene of Mama dressing down Sesshoumaru make anyone else laugh? And then himself showing up and being a royal prick? Well written!
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Reviewed By: AmiFire Chopstixx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2010 23:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm so glad I stumbled upon your story! I love the way you write! It would be super wonderful if you could update soon :)
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2010 19:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loving the update. Keep 'em coming!
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2010 17:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thx everyone does!! =) Can't wait for more chapters!! :D
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: June 23, 2010 14:41 EDT
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AMAZING XD!!! i coulnt stop laughing when souta used the sailor moon refrences it was hilarious!!! please please update as soon as possible. i really love this story so please im begging you continue with this story XD
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2010 06:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great writing. I love Inuyasah and Kagome's characters. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to your next up date.
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Title: Attraction? Check!!
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2010 17:40 EDT
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Ears or no, the writing is top notch. Enjoying the dangerous way her mother is pushing the clear attraction between them. I like the talk of "base" and his accelerated healing does point to demonic heritage, but I'll be patient and wait for more. He'd better hope "big brother" doesn't come with to pick him up!
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