| "Of The Fallen" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: KAI103842 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2011 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, come on! Why do all of the good stories I read have to be in progress? Oh well, hope you update soon! Love your work!! Oh, and the part about the left butt cheek, totally funny! |
Title: chino-chan inulover
Reviewed By: chino-chan inulover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2011 17:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh maan, soo awesomeeee! Can't wait to read more, and find out all about your plot. Really original and great writing by the way. |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2011 21:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the new chapter! I'll be, of course, waiting for the next chappie. Lol. |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2011 15:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the new chapter, though I noticed a few more typos than usual. That's fine, though, just looks like you were in a hurry to get it posted to us, and I can certainly appreciate that! Glad you didn't keep us waiting any longer! But what a cliffhanger. I'm assuming he can sense her mood? Oh, and I know what's causing the bold in your previous chapter. Well, not exactly, but what it is is just a glitch in MM's system. You can fix it, though. Something in how you have your text is triggering unintentional code, so try switching something up. Add another 'Enter' (or Return if you're on a Mac) to drop down the next line another paragraph space or two, or try changing the period to an ellipsis. I get that sort of thing from time to time, but playing with the text immediately before the bold starts and updating the chapter will make it go away. |
Reviewed By: twistedf8 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2011 08:18 EST
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Ahh! No! I can't believe you stopped there! Haha just because I want more. You've left me in suspense and I can't wait for another chapter. Kudos on the update :) |
Reviewed By: dreamer778 On: January 31, 2011 08:12 EST
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LOVE IT! Thought it was a new chapter and i got really excited, but reading it all over again was fun too. Please update soon i cant wait to find out what happens next!! |
Reviewed By: demon inu On: January 30, 2011 20:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it... i got upset when i got to the last chapter cause i was at the end.. i cant wait till u update again. |
Reviewed By: Nahavia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2011 12:16 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never been a fan of the Inuyasha and Kagome pairing, but this is amazing. I look forward to an update. |
Reviewed By: twistedf8 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2011 19:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok definitely a new fav!!! I got sucked in and read all the chapters in one sitting and now I'm hooked. Love it and I hope you update it soon :D |
Title: Woah!
Reviewed By: rikki On: January 16, 2011 17:44 EST
Comment/Review:
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! INEEEEEEDDDDDD ORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!! So intense i love it!!! |
Reviewed By: ahh! On: January 11, 2011 19:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry, the bottom review cut out like...half of what i typed so...summary? this story is one my all time favorites(: thanks for sharing it! |
Reviewed By: ahh! On: January 11, 2011 19:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww! i freaked out because i thought there was a new chapter...but there wasn't...so...could you maybe put one up soon?(: thank ya, love |
Reviewed By: dresmer On: December 17, 2010 12:54 EST
Comment/Review:
AWESOME! Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: kmn1829 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2010 20:53 EST
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Wat did those words mean? Did inuyasha already kno wat those words were lyk b/c of wat he is? Wat language were those words in? Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2010 23:59 EST
Comment/Review:
i thought this chapter was great! can't wait to find out what inuyasha really is and i really am excited for the next chapter...update soon please!! ^_^ |
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