| "Of The Fallen" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: M.Lina On: December 11, 2010 15:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is so great..:) i really enjoyed reading it and i really can't wait to read the next chapter..^^ so..u just have to upload it as soon as possible cause i am not a very patient person ;) and by the way..you should continue writing..i love your style and your idea as well..so keep up the good work and UPLOAD UPLOAD UPLOAD ;);) see u later ;) |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2010 08:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo-hoo! Wonderful update! All that weird destined soul-mate stuff or whatever it was, was certain unexpected, but definitely well received! Here I thought this was going to be all dragged out with him trying to argue how he shouldn't be with her, and her not knowing what he is, and how it would be better if he never saw her again, and blah blah blah. Looks like that's not an option any more! I wasn't expecting that sudden right turn, but I'm definitely looking forward to where you take us from here. Keep up the good work! |
Title: Update :)
Reviewed By: A.Lawrence On: November 25, 2010 00:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE PLEASE! |
Title: you got faved...by me
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2010 21:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't look for a new story in a while so I scrolled around last night and found your story. I was very happy to find a hidden jem. I had a great time reading, and of cause now I'm hook and I'm still not sure in which direction the story is going or where certain furrie twitchers happen to be. I hope your muse is buzzing around your head filling it with motivation to post another chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Black Wolf Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2010 07:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story you have going here. I must say I love the reactions Kagome's mom had to the gift, it was quite sweet of him. I still think my favorite part would be when Souta scolded his grandpa, it's jus too funny. XD I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. ^__^
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Reviewed By: kmn1829 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2010 16:22 EDT
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Omgggg I love this story so much im in deep u need 2 update it soon. I forgot she had the necklace on til Eri brought it up lol. I lyk how she attackd him lol bt at least she had a coverup which is gud. I lyk how Ayumi is the quiet protective type thts gudd cusz then it helps w| Eri's personalty nd everthing. Please keep up the great work. Cnt wait 4 another update
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Title: Go Ka go me
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2010 15:28 EDT
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Loved this chapter for its angst and tension. Even her friends got to join in the fun and I liked how she tried to placate them without revealing anything about Inuyasha. I was wondering if she wore the necklace and there it was at the end.
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: September 10, 2010 02:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT here I am!!!! this story is splendid, superb, exciting, fantastic! and so much more XD! totally thrown for a loop when kagome asked him to dinner :P lol. i love the idea that inu and miroku are cousins, its fantastic XD!!! so keep up the good work and Im very exited for the next chapter, and the deal is still on ;P secret
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2010 20:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nope, definitely don't think it'll be a problem for Kagome to get accepted into that school, LOL. Wonderful update, by the way! I absolutely adored the way Kagome just threw herself at him, and bringing up the desperation of her emotions as having stemmed from a flashback of when she lost her father...that was good. It gives her an excuse to be more panicked without the feelings being totally ungrounded. Wasn't expecting Inuyasha and Miroku to be cousins, though I've seen that done before on a few occasions. Nothing wrong with that! I had almost forgotten Kagome was wearing the necklace until Eri brought it up at the end there. I'm sure Inuyasha noticed. Wasn't expecting her brazen invitation to dinner, either! I'm really, really liking where you're going with this story. I want you to keep writing, so I can keep on trying to figure it out, too! So far though...you've got me just about as in the dark as everyone else, I'd say. So kudos for that! Until next time!
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Reviewed By: Kakashisgurly (Logged off) On: August 30, 2010 06:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly, I can't see how you could think you're making mistakes and need a beta. I think you're doing a fantastic job! I really think that you're doing a great job with how this story has been presented thus far. Not too much has been revealed yet, leaving us guessing and wanting more, but at the same time you haven't left us in complete darkness. Its a wonderful balance you've created here, I think I'm going to have to take notes from your style on how to better my own writing ~
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Title: Good revision
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2010 23:31 EDT
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Even more exciting.
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Title: regarding your needing a beta...
Reviewed By: LokoRamenDaily [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2010 21:09 EDT
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i get really annoyed when i see any spelling or grammar mistakes and not too mention im actually good at fixing them i would be more than happy too help.
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Reviewed By: frannnnn On: August 06, 2010 21:30 EDT
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amazing!! can not WAIT until you put the next chapter up! update ASAP, please and thank you sososososososo much!(:
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2010 12:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update!! Love the details!! Plz update soon.. u just started & it is a really great fic !
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Reviewed By: Eluwei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2010 05:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was wonderful! Keep it up.
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