| "Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2011 10:46 EDT
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I like the set up and the playful attraction between Kagome and Inuyasha. Well written and the world building is coming together. When Shippo commented about their similarity, it might've made more sense for him to comment on their scent first, and then their looks. Looking forward to more! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2011 22:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Had to come over here and check this one out. Wow! So glad I did! Now I'm totally looking forward to seeing how this one unfolds as well. I mean, it's pretty obvious where you intend upon taking it, but still, I shall certainly enjoy the ride! |
Reviewed By: inu_gurl91 On: April 04, 2011 13:15 EDT
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im so happy that there's already a new chapter!!! ^.^ ur awesome |
Reviewed By: inu_gurl91 On: April 04, 2011 12:07 EDT
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please do keep updating as soon as possible, im excited 2 see how events play out, are u keeping the "brothers" relation or...?? |
Title: Tory
Reviewed By: Tory [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2011 11:04 EDT
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It's a Uralic language. I went online to a word translater, like, to translate english words into another language but I didn't like how they came out. Then I remembered a certain language from one of my favorite authors so I looked that up. I didn't want to use french because that just doesn't suit Inuyasha. I'm still looking into the romanian language. I don't know how the word is prounouced though, sorry. Thank you very much for the review. It encourages me to keep writing this story! |
Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2011 05:24 EDT
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Very nice Especially the banter between Inuyasha and Kagome, the whole UST. I am curious, how is the word csitri pronouced, and what is it's origin. Simply from the characters, however, the word looks delicate, fragile, and has a certain bite to it. Does that make sense? Looking forward to an update |
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