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| "A Tale of Ever After" Reviews/Comments [ 303 ] | | Pages (21): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2014 13:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And Tsuneo's family kami has finally made an appearance! Sometimes
we are indeed all tools of destiny. Sitting back and waiting for
something to work itself out on its own, it doesn't always work
that way. Sometimes it's destiny that we interfere, that destiny's
plan all along, in order to accomplish what needs to be done, is to
have somebody interfere and do it. In the end everything happens as
it was meant to. Looking forward to the next update! :-)
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2014 12:56 PDT
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Bum Bum Bum...looks like we're about to find out just what it is
Kazuo is plotting. I feel sorry for Sadayori. He meant well;
everyone makes mistakes. The important thing is that he wants to do
what's right for his grandsons. Like Kazuo said, to a point it's
free choice, and we can all choose which path we'll take, but those
poor boys, they don't have much of a choice of *anything* right now
with that monster of a father ruling their lives. It's funny, in a
non-humorous way, just how many people are like that in real life,
who chase their own good luck away with how evil their hearts are
whilst turning around and blaming all their problems on
everyone/everything else. *sigh* At least it looks like things will
work out for Maeme and the boys in the end. After everything they'd
have to deal with, they deserve some good luck, indeed. And LOL,
poor Inuyasha. I 'sort of' feel sorry for him. *snickers* I don't
know why, but I hear English Dub Naraku's voice taunting "Choose,
Inuyasha" from the old Adult Swim IY commercials, LOL.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2014 13:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sooooooooooooooo glad I can review this story over here again! WAY
too much has happened since my last review to try to touch base on
everything, but since my last review was about Maeme I guess that's
a good focal point. Definitely looks like I was wrong that there
was nothing anybody could or would do for her. And nobody really
knew just how bad her situation was, either, although they
do now and I'm so glad that even the gods are on her side
and on this most lucky day of the year it looks like something will
finally be done about Seiji. Besides all that, it's lovely to see
that wedding finally come to pass. Today's talk of Chiya does
remind us that she's still brooding over in that house by the
river, but ah well, we don't need to see those details.
She's sniveling to herself 'woe is me' and working on her spinning.
That situation will work itself out in time, but the situation with
Seiji and Maeme is FAR more important. I'm definitely looking
forward to seeing what happens next!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2014 12:16 PDT
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OMG reviews are working again! YAY!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2014 12:15 PDT
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Testing...?
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2013 18:36 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, I like Daisuke. If he were my neighbor, I'd hang out with him. He's got my kind of sense of humor, ;-). And awww...poor Maeme. Too many women are in her situation, even now with the laws changed, but back then, there was pretty much nothing anybody could or would do for her, so that has to be rough, knowing everyone knows but also knowing that it's her husband's right, her lot in life, and while it's sad there's almost no way out of it. No wonder she sings of being a caged bird with clipped wings. That's how I'd feel in that situation, too. Looking forward to the next update. :-) | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2013 16:57 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwww...beautiful update! The first part with Kaede, Kagome and Inuyasha was cute. Especially the end of that scene, where Inuyasha was getting pestered by the kids, LOL. Hey, that's what he signed up for, insisting on tagging along. Something tells me it doesn't really bother him quite as much as he'd have us believe. The second scene with Miroku and the others was wonderful, especially that blessing he did right at the end. Well done! As per usual, I'm looking forward to your next installment. :-) | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2013 18:26 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good update! Cute scene, with Inuyasha getting Daiki to settle down. I like that he showed some of his inu-youkai side, barking nonchalantly to the dog, and being so casual about it afterwards, too. I can totally picture that if Kagome hadn't been on the ball to already be so accepting of her husband's canine half, and had instead of just asking what happened had looked at him with a funny look, taken aback by his barking, that Inuyasha would have in turn had a confused look and been like "What?" LOL. I also liked how he used his speed to make Daiki run smack into him, and the boy's oblivious state, even to Kaede who he'd previously almost crashed right into, and Inuyasha's threat that he can run way faster, so he'd better not run away again. It was a very good moral to teach. A man pays for what he takes. Daiki ate the treat, so now he's got to pay the price, and if it was worth it well then so be it, but if not, then maybe he just might learn not to do it again. Fabulous little snippet; a day in the life at Toshiro's place, LOL. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2013 16:55 PST
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Cute update. The banter about the pickles at the very end made me smile. Also Kaede and Kagome's inside joke about Inuyasha, and even Kagome herself, being stubborn and reminding Kaede of that old man who won't take his medicine. Forgot his name, LOL. How do you keep track of all these people living in your head?! What's worse, I'm keeping track of them, LOL. It's like all the many, many characters of a really good soap opera, and that's exactly what this is; a really good soap opera. I'm definitely looking forward to the next update. :-) | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2013 15:42 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good update! The Inu/Kag scene at the beginning was especially nice. I like when Inuyasha can admit what an idiot he used to be; it's very apparent that both he and Kagome have done a lot of growing up since those days. The mother/son banter at the end with that traveling song was also cute. Keep up the good work! | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2013 15:29 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I were in charge of the lockup I'd be leaving Seiji's ass in there at least another day. So glad they're not letting him out on the wedding day. They do not need him to spoil things. Good chapter. Good update. Do you realize that this chapter was comprised entirely of original characters, with no break away showing us any of the original cast? LOL, but all your OCs, they are Canon now, at least in my mind! You've given names to all the previously 'random' villagers that in reality have been present in Kaede's village all along. We've seen them before, we'd just never personally met them until now. It's going to be so hard for me to come up with my own original villagers when the time comes, LOL, because yours seem so Canon! I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next. :-) | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2013 21:07 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good update! At least all the craziness down at Tameo's compound hasn't reached Inuyasha's house, with as tucked away as they are. I know getting pulled into that mess is the last thing Inuyasha, or Kagome, want, especially today of all days. Hopefully things go smoothly for Chime and the wedding. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2013 21:05 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally had a chance to read this one. Good update! Tricky Miroku, making those vows but not vowing when he'd accomplish those tasks, LOL. In a religion that totally embraces reincarnation, then it doesn't even have to be in this lifetime, LOL. Hopefully this'll be a good day for Chime and the wedding in general. I think Miroku coming over to do a blessing later is a good idea. They could use all the good luck and blessings they can get, after the week the village has had. Great little splash of Inu/Kag heat at the end there, too. Good morning, indeed! Good job, as always. I'm definitely looking forward to the next update. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2013 16:12 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter, good update. I can understand why Inuyasha doesn't want to go to that place, and I also understand why he'll pretty much have to. Doubt he's told Miroku the real reason why he doesn't like it, and has only mentioned the smell, and so of course the monk will trap him into it, not really aware of the deeper emotional issues. Nice to see that Sesshoumaru was looking out for his little brother, at least when he had to. If the brat starved to death 'cause he was too weak or stupid to fend for himself, well then that's what he gets, but being murdered by a monk, that wouldn't have been fair, so I can see why Sesshoumaru would interfere, even with his skewed logic of not really wanting to have anything to do with Inuyasha. Even though Inuyasha's existence was an insult to their father's blood (in his eyes) letting a human kill him would have been a much bigger insult, for sure. The tender Inu/Kag moment was nice. Also liked him talking to Kazuo at the end there. Must be nice living in a village where the resident god actually exists and has shown up to say hi on occasion, LOL. You don't see that in very many mythologies. Greek, maybe a handful of others. I love the lore of Japanese kami. I love Kazuo specifically, LOL. He's a kooky old man. Maybe that is where Daitaro gets it from, LOL. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2013 19:52 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good update. Nice to see things ticking along and the evening in the village winding down and coming to a close. Eiji being tired made me tired, LOL, or maybe that's just my new sleep cycle catching up with me. It is nearing my new bedtime, but I just had to squeeze in reading this update first. :-) | | Pages (21): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
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