| "Purity Redux: Fruition" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: Spike On: July 24, 2017 05:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sue!!!! You've done it again!!!! I can't seem to stop reading
without wondering what will happen next! Your stories got me
through tough times and I look forward to each and every update!
You are awesome!;)
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2017 16:58 PDT
Comment/Review:
I loved it!! All the boys going to jail at the bachelor party was
epic! And I cried at Toga getting ready to give Charity away. And
the ending with all the children matching Bens towel in the morning
seems like the perfect ending to the story. I can't wait to read
your next One!
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Title: What a story!
Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2017 21:51 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was incredible. I was just wishing you would go ahead and post
the rest of this since you already had it finished. I really
enjoyed the ride you gave us in this one. You once again proved
your prowess at making us laugh on paragraph and stopping our
hearts in the next. And that scene where the guys are in the clink
after the bachelor party? Pure gold.
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Title: Yaaaassss!!!
Reviewed By: Moe On: July 22, 2017 18:35 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm finally catching back up and had to leave a review. I'm so
excited that Ben is going to save his brother!! And Charity making
the antidote is just as badass as her protecting Ben and the girls.
I truly hope Minami's wings will be okay in time. Loving the
suspense and can't wait to see what happens for the battle! More
chapters to read. Thank you for so many updates!!!
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2017 17:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really have enjoyed taking this journey with you Sue and I thank
you for it. Your work really is excellent. There are a few loose
ends and hints in Fruition that I know you will bring together as
the Purity universe grows. Btw I'm all for Kyouhei/Ashur and
Manami, Charity is a smart cookie. A smart cookie with a foxy
panther for a mate.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2017 17:13 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm sitting here chuckling. Evan real is the only one who has
waited until after marriage, considering he's such a deviant, the
irony of it all. I really enjoyed the glimpse into all of the
Inutaisho jnr women, they all seem so vastly different (from
description and dialogue) and I'm intrigued by Coral especially
after that tai youkai jab. And I just want to hug Kyouhei, he is
bearing so much. I do wonder what name he will pick for himself and
the fact he wants to be a Phillips only solidifies the building of
this new family. I just hope that if Kels ever finds out about his
family history he would come to understand Ben and Kyouhei's
reasoning. Excellent writing Sue and I'm appreciative of all the
updates. The last few days have been great.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2017 03:33 PDT
Comment/Review:
Kyouhei and Kells, I like it. He's going to be an earth elemental
just like his big brother and his eldest brother remains the only
foxy panther. You have really managed to give Ben back his family
and I hope that they only become closer, replacing all the
loneliness and isolation with love. And f.i.n.a.l.l.y foxy panther
proposed!!
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2017 16:20 PDT
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Kyouhei, my heart breaks for him but thankfully he has his family
there. And I'm so glad the little one survived. Toga should have
totally made Ben sweat a whole more, hasn't he learned anything
from Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2017 13:22 PDT
Comment/Review:
If Ben has trouble with Toga as father I wonder how he will react
when he realizes Inuyasha will now be his great-uncle and
Sesshomaru his grandfather. Of course that also means he will have
to claim Evan as family too, lol. I love how most of this is
shaping up but I hope Kyouhei, Manami and Hana will be ok. They all
ended up hurt by everything and I know they will have to spend time
recovering. I half suspect that Kyouhei and Nana will get together
somehow, if she can forgive him and he can convince her he doesn't
blame her for his mother's death. I am curious how the war will end
but I suspect it will be finished in another story. Not to be too
much of a bag but I do want to see what happens in #10. From what
you said here I suspect Morio has surgery to repair his balance
issues but I would like to see how it all comes out.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2017 07:01 PDT
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I'm actually at a loss. The depth of the twistedness of Ben's
parents, the weight of having killed his parents and Kyouhei's
helplessness in watching his friend kill his mother and then having
to cut her open. There is just so much pain here and written so
poignantly - thank you for that. I do hope the cub survives and
that will be the start of healing for them all. Although I'm not
settled yet, the threat to the family still remains. Can Sess just
hunt down Teswhatshisface and end this all please?
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2017 02:38 PDT
Comment/Review:
OMG I hope Kyouhei doesn't die. I could feel Ben's turmoil in these
last few chapters. :'(
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2017 10:49 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hold on Kyouhei, nii-san is on his way! I can't imagine the torture
that his parents are inflicting on him. I'm sure this confrontation
will not be easy on Ben, I'm sitting here counting down to your
next update. Though, despite being on the edge of my seat and
refreshing the page in hopes of a new chapter a part of me is
slightly amused. I think when it comes to asking for Charity's
hand, Ben may regret beating up on his father-in-law. Thanks Sue
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2017 19:32 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! This has got me on the edge of my seat! All these
wonderful chapters got me trying to sneak in bits on my phone at
work! All the men better get on the move to go save Kyouhei! Would
love to see Inuyasha and Sesshomaru kicking some ass again!
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Reviewed By: floopyloopyoopy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2017 19:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
The excitement is building! I look forward to reading the rest of
the story. I still love your writing and imagination. Thank you for
continuing to share with us!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2017 15:08 PDT
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Every time I started reading I was super excited to see MORE
chapters!! :,) you made my day lol. I'm ecstatic and just a little
nosey question how has your muse been feeling about the other
Purity Story? I'm just adore your universe :)
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