| "Purity Redux: Fruition" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Title: What!?
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2017 13:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad to see your posting again Sue I read on your website that
things are still kind of rocky at home I hope they improve I've
been really wanting to read the story I'm so happy that you're
writing it hope you are well
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2017 01:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
So despite being so old Ben is proving that even with age men are
stupid. I really do hope that it is someone friendly at the door.
I've lived this week on the cliffs you've left me on, it's bad for
my heart Sue :p. Though there is some reprieve from the
angst...foxy panther has a name!
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Reviewed By: Rae On: June 15, 2017 00:57 PDT
Comment/Review:
Ughhhhh my heart is breaking for Charity....Ben needs to do
something QUICK.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2017 22:44 PDT
Comment/Review:
Sigh...just sigh...my heart breaks for Charity and I'm now sure
that despite Sesshoumaru's opinion, Toga has not spent enough time
with Inuyasha. If he had, that conversation would have turned out
very differently.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2017 18:24 PDT
Comment/Review:
All I gotta say is Ben better start practicing his speech on how
he's gonna fix this shit storm he started. Ugh poor Charity...i
would be sobbing my heart out.
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Title: You got me
Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2017 16:34 PDT
Comment/Review:
I was expecting much more angst but the next chapter hasn't erupted
yet. Charity needs to pull out that infamous temper of her Great
Uncle and put it to good use. She may have kissed him but he didn't
stop her and in front the ENTIRE FAMILY! I'm mad for her, he needs
a swift kick in the heinie *in nun Gin voice*. What's interesting
is he knows that she is his mate, I wasn't so sure at first. But I
need him to stop the snails pace before my girl Charity combusts
from lack of lovin. lol great chap
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2017 03:38 PDT
Comment/Review:
I just want to hug Charity and I want Inuyasha to throttle
Ben...repeatedly. I really don't know what in the world that Ben
could say to make amends. Charity just started hoping again *sigh*.
Great writing as per and another cliffie (why so mean Sue :p)
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2017 17:35 PDT
Comment/Review:
I go away on vacation and have so many chapters waiting!! So
exciting! I love everyone's Halloween costumes! My daughter loves
the count so having Ben dress up as him... I definitely laughed out
loud. Now we just have to find out who the hell this chick is!
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Reviewed By: Nani? On: June 12, 2017 11:27 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wait, what?!?!?!?! WTF was that? OMG, totally not flaming you but
daaaaaaaaamn! Ok now i will admit that i can usually sit patiently
and wait for your mind but that was just cruel *bursts out in
tears* Poor Charity!! and just how is that skanky woman?! I don't
care how well you know someone you shouldn't just bust on in and
get your groove on with someone that you haven't seen in years!
because if you had, you would have been mentioned in the first 17
chapters, and you were NOT! Oh come on, sue, don't leave us
hanging! *bursts into more tears* Soooooooooooobbles!!!
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2017 03:12 PDT
Comment/Review:
That was/is cruel Sue...who the hell is Manami?!
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Reviewed By: Rae On: June 11, 2017 23:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you're posting again, Sue!!! Please keep up the great
work!!! :)
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2017 11:45 PDT
Comment/Review:
Sigh, I just love the way you write. It all just melds perfectly
like one of Cain's paintings would. I remember when you wrote about
when Gin and the twins made their dads and brothers pretty, I
laughed so hard that I almost pee'd myself. being gifted with a
vivid imagination, I could just see it happening. Like when
InuYasha was in the tree with a very young Toga, very upset, and
Toga shoved his Moko Moko in Inu's face offering to let him snuggle
it cause it always made Toga feel better when he was sad. I have
100,000 wonderful memories of moments from each of your stories
that bring me pleasure when they are triggered. I am very happy you
are posting again. I hope you dont have to stop again. I would be
so sad. Welcome back.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2017 01:16 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness, antique balls! I was chuckling away as I read the
chapter and managed to draw a couple of stares. I love the fact you
wove this joke in. Kagura is pregnant, I do wonder if it will be a
girl or a boy. Toga is a great dad, I'm sure Charity will be so
pleased when she realises what he's done. Thanks for the update
Sue.
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: Anna On: June 07, 2017 13:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading your stories when you first wrote "Purity"---I
was in middle school. I've followed your stories throughout high
school, college and now I'm 26 years old and I still completely
love your style of writing and how you bring these characters to
life. Thanks so much for sharing your talents :)
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2017 22:47 PDT
Comment/Review:
25 years...Ben has been shuffling his feet for 25 YEARS. Good
grief, all of this is so long overdue and honestly I do not blame
Charity for being hesistant/worried. Her self confidence has taken
a beating. I love that Toga and Sierra are still so playful with
one and other. Thanks for updating Sue
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