| "Purity Redux: Fruition" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2017 15:09 PDT
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I love that his youki spoke to her. It's a step in the right
direction to really prove how much she means to him. And even
better he's never slept with anyone so that'll help her already
failing security in his life. I do think that the men should know
by now protecting the women in their lives from knowing information
is going to have their mates pissed lol. Lovely chap
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2017 11:02 PDT
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Aww! I love the Christmas pictures! And it was such a sweet moment
Ben and charity had on the beach. He all but said hey your my mate
so let's hope she catches on soon lol and here's hoping inuyasha
doesn't go and try and blow everyone up lol looking forward go more
:)
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2017 10:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
I don't think you are holding updates for ransom. Just had to say
that. I am loving these peeks at Ben and his youkai, I hope Charity
listens to him/it and has fun. She was sounding so depressed for a
while. I still suspect a traitor being planted within the group and
am starting to doubt it is Ben's brother. It just seems too
coincidental that there are two threats without them being
connected too. I wonder if Unker realized he is being played to
take some scrutiny off the threat to Sesshomaru.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2017 00:52 PDT
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What a lovely end to chapter and a wonderful twist in involving
Ben's youkai (clearly his smart side). Hopefully this will put them
on the road to healing because Charity's despair in chapter 25 was
all consuming, my heart broke. Now on to the two saddest days of my
week (because there are no weekend posts). Thanks for updating Sue,
you're doing a great job, have a great weekend.
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Title: I'm still here
Reviewed By: Moe On: June 21, 2017 20:38 PDT
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It never ceases to amaze me how easily you make me ache for each
and every character. So unique in their self-doubt, some shaped by
centuries of it, and others with such self-conceived flaws, that it
must crush them to carry all of that burden. How beautiful the end
of this chapter was!! I loved the whole thing, but that image of
Charity, hugging her knees and sympathizing with a dying star, is
so beautifully sad. You really bring such a beauty and depth to
this universe. They are not lesser by being youkai, but richer from
their experiences and longevity. Thank you for continuing. As
always, I await more. :)
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2017 16:47 PDT
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Oh Sue, don't be discouraged. You're doing an awesome job and the
fact you are enjoying writing this story is coming through. I read
each chapter twice just so I can pick up on all of the nuances.
Plus Ben needs you, if there is anyone who can guide him out of
this crap storm and into a successful mating, it's you and I can't
wait to read it. Now it may seem that Charity will get her request,
at least Mexico and Maine both start with M's.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2017 15:34 PDT
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Triplets!! What a nice surprise! I just love how Evan was there to
throw in the milk man comment lol and it sounds like a war is
coming to them sooner rather than later. Everyone better get on
their toes!
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2017 11:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
this story is coming together wonderfully, but with all the changes
that MediaMiner has gone thru, not that many people are reading at
or posting on it anymore. that may be why the reader count is so
low. It almost shut down a couple of times. One of the long time
Authors took over as moderator and really turned the site around.
hopefully the reader count will continue to rise now that you are
posting here again. Many of the excellent and prolific authors
stopped posting here because it got too difficult and went to AO3.
I am hoping that they will come back too.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2017 10:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't been reviewing even though I have been reading.
*blush* I can't wait to see what happens next. Poor Charity is
going to be so upset with Ben when she finds out she isn't getting
snow and that he and her father were keeping such important secrets
from her. I am also suspicious of the brother and old friend
showing up so conveniently. I am just not sure which one is the
traitor against Ben.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2017 04:52 PDT
Comment/Review:
HEY! I'm sure a lot of people are reading this story. Some just
don't take the time to review, or are like myself and can only get
time to review sometimes. Never doubt that you have a huge
following. I LOVE ALL OF YOUR STORIES INCLUDING YOUR ORIGINAL
WORKS!!!! I was just on your website and wondered when you were
going to convert Purity 9 into PDF for download like the others. I
told you I reread them all the time. Anyways I love this story so
far. Ben and Charity are so sweet together, I've been wondering
about them from a few stories back. You don't usually spend too
much time introducing characters and going back to them if you
don't have plans for them. Kinda like Aiko who's always been a bit
illusive to me. I was wondering is fruition going to be like
Morio's story where its kind of a shorter independent story or will
it be a full on purity journey like the numbered stories? Just
wondering. Anyways I'm enjoying my read, I dread the weekends
because I know there are no chapters then. Aww well. Keep posting!
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Title: You're awesome
Reviewed By: Riker On: June 20, 2017 22:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading your stories for years. I was thrilled to see
that you had come out with another story. I check every night to
see if there is a new chapter. Thank you so much for writing these
stories, and know that I will continue to read these for as long as
they are available. Keep up the good work, Sueric.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2017 10:39 PDT
Comment/Review:
And just when I thought that Benjiro couldn't get anymore stupid,
he goes and says the phrase that no one should ever say and now
fate is going to accept his challenge. I'm preparing myself for a
cliffie. Thanks for the update Sue.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2017 14:21 PDT
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Kyouhei, Kyouhei, Kyouhei... aren't you astute. Far more so than
your big brother who is lacking brain cells and fumbling around
while danger is creeping all the more closer! *sigh*. Let's hope
Eddie's words helped and speaking about Eddie, I can't wait to see
more of her beau. Thanks Sue
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2017 04:09 PDT
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What a packed chapter. Kyouhei may not be a foxy panther but by
your description he is definitely foxy. I really like how we're
slowly getting into Ben's back story and now with impending coup
(while Kagura is pregnant) involving Grandpa Ben plus baby
snatchers I'm sure more things wilk come out of the woodwork. Great
work Sue. I'm still waiting for Ben to make amends though...can't
Inuyasha rough him up just a little.
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Reviewed By: Evloner On: June 16, 2017 08:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work as always. I just spent the last 2 days bing reading and
what a pleasurable experience. I love how you integrated elements
from past stories which serves as an added treat to those of us who
are avid readers of the purity series.
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